EspeonROX's Fake Spoiler Competition. Where is everyone!?

RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 starts 11/11/2008!

Here's mine. If you are only taking one, take the Charizard.

Charmander - HP50 - {R}
[.] Gather Fire. Search your deck for up to 2 {R} energy cards, show them to your opponent, and put them into your hand. Shuffle your deck afterward.
{R}{C} Smokescreen - 20 damage. Flip a coin. If heads, prevent all effects of attacks, including damage, done to Charmander during your opponent's next turn.
Weakness: {W} (+10)
Resistance: None.
Retreat Cost: {C}

Charmeleon - HP80 - {R}
[Poke-Body] Fire Veil. If Charmeleon is your active Pokemon and is damaged by an opponent's attack (even if Charmeleon is knocked out), the defending Pokemon is now burned.
{R}{C} Flame Claw - 40 damage.
Weakness: {W} (+20)
Resistance: None
Retreat Cost: {C}

Charizard - HP120 - {R}
[Poke-Power] Fire Storm. Once during your turn (before your attack), you may attach any number of {R} Energy cards from your hand to your Pokemon in any way you like. If you do, your turn ends.
{R}{R}{C} Fiery Determination - 90 damage. Discard a {R} energy card attached to Charizard. If you ended your last turn without attacking, this attack's base damage is 120 and discard {R} energy attached to Charizard.
Weakness: {W} (+30)
Resistance: None
Retreat Cost: {C}{C}{C}
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 starts 11/11/2008!

All right! My first spoiler to be judged!

Celebi23: I will only be grading the Charmander, for that is what I asked from you.
-Great use of effects, however, those attacks seem a little too familiar and used.
-Very neat, just use space between attacks and Charmander and Weaknesses and stuff.

Overall, not bad. 7.9/10

So...in the running:

Celebi23 (pg.3, Charmander): 7.9 pts (Dudeman1993), --- pts. (Peta), ---pts. (CynthiaFan101)

And...that's it! People, start posting!

Reminder: Scores given will be averaged from 3 judges.
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 starts 11/11/2008!

I guess I was thinking a little too far outside the box. I suppose there's no chance of my redoing it to make more original because in all of the other tournaments I have entered a "Starter" means a Stage 2 evolution of one.
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 starts 11/11/2008!

Yeah, sorry, but once it's in it's in. Your score from me is 7.9 out of 10. A good score to start with, you just need to watch out who else spoils better.
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 starts 11/11/2008!

Pikachu Lv 24 Hp 60 {L}
Basic Pokemon

[Poke-Power] Power Collecting
Once during your turn you may discard any number of {L} energy from your hand. For each card discarded, draw 2 cards. Afterwords, if your hand contains more than 6 cards, discard cards until your have 6 cards remaining in your hand. This power cannot be used if Pikachu is affected by a special condition.

{L} Shock Lock 10
Flip a coin, if heads, the defending pokemon is now paralized. If tails, you may discard a {L} energy attached to Pikachu.

{L}{L}{C} Volt Tackle 60
If Pikachu is not evolved from Pichu, this attack cannot be used. If this attack fails to KO the defending pokemon, discard all {L} energy from Pikachu. For each energy discarded, this attack does an additional 10 damage, and Pikachu does 10 damage to itself.

Weakness: {F} +10
Resistance: {M} -20
Retreat: {C}
 
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gmmuka: Not bad...not bad at all.
-Use Knock Out rather than KO.
-The tails thing on Pikachu's first attack is weird. "You may discard a {L} Energy?" I wouldn't!
-Spell Paralyzed right.
-Power Collecting...wow...just great.

I'm giving you an 8.2. Spelling was off, but the Power and Volt Tackle were great!

Update: I will post scores on first page.
 
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Ops, forgot to post why you'd discard, it was "and flip another coin." but I had a brain fart.
 
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Chimchar lv.15 - hp50 {R}
Basic Pokemon

[Pokepower] Flame Revival
Once during your turn, before you attack, if chimchar is your active Pokemon you may flip a coin, if heads the defending pokemon is now burned.

{R} Scratch 10

{R}{R} Flame Scratch 40
Put 1 damage counter on Chimchar.

Weakness: {W} +10
Resistance:
Retreat Cost: {C}
 
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Hmm..

+Good use of the PokePower, but it was worded VERY weirdly.
+What if Chimchar's affected by a Special Condition?
+Scratch and "Flame" Scratch? Maybe Flame Swipe would be neat...
+Use [Poke-Power]

Meh. Nothing too special, but OK.

7.2/10
 
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Piplup Lv 15 60HP {W}

[Poke-Body] Aqua Sheild
Any damage done to Piplup by an attack or effct of attack is reduced by 10 for each {W} energy attach to Piplup.

[.] Peck 10

{W}{C} Reverse Jet 20
Switch Piplup with 1 of your Bench Pokemon. If you have no Bench Pokemon, switch the Defending Pokemon with 1 of your opponent's Bench Pokemon. If both player's don't have any Bech Pokemon, this attack base damage is 40 instead.

W - {L} +10
R - [-]
RC - {C}
 
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Good! Good! Good!

Couple things: SPELLING. Effct should be "effect."
Bench Pokemon should be Benched Pokemon.
Sheild should be "shield."

Please, just spell out Weakness, Resistance, and Retreat Cost.
Some grammatical errors, like you should use this for the Poke-Body.

"Any damage done to Piplup by an attack or an effect of an attack is reduced by 10 for each basic {W} Energy attached to Piplup."

Your creative skills are great. It's just the grammar and spelling that's docked you down a bit. 8/10!

To avoid hassles, I am rounding those "decimal" scores to the nearest one spot, so your score might have decreased or increased. If there's a tie between scores, the judges will collaborate and decide who the winner will be and who moves on to the next round. I'm sorry for any inconvenience this might create.

HOWEVER: 7.5s, 8.5s, and .5s will be here, just not .3s and .444444s and what not.
 
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Mudkip LV.15 HP60 {W}
BASIC

NO. 258 Mud Fish Pokemon HT: 1'04" WT: 16.8 lbs.

[Poke-BODY] Slimy Skin
As long as Mudkip is your Active Pokemon, prevent all Special Conditions done to Mudkip.

[.] Family Reunion
Search your deck for any amount of Mudkip and place them on your bench (you cannot use this attack if there is no room on your bench).

{W} Group Attack 10x
This attack does 10 damage times the amount of Mudkip you have in play.

weakness {L} +10
resistance
retreat cost {C}

Well, here it is, I for one, don't think this will do well.
 
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Well...don't say that. I think you did a good job!

-Capitalize Weakness, Resistance, and Retreat Cost. It's just a grammar thing I do. Minor, but it's just a pet peeve.
-Wording on the Body could be better, As long as Mudkip is your Active Pokemon, Mudkip can't be affected by Special Conditions.
-Same with Family Reunion.

I'm giving you an 8.5. You added the extra effort with color and size and stuff, and without that, you would've gotten an 8. Good job!
 
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I just want to clear up that capitalization on the "weakness", "resistance", and "retreat cost". If you look at the bottom of any Pokemon card they are lower case. That is why I put them like that. I just wanted to say that.
 
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Yeah, I know. That's why it's a pet-peeve. I hate that on cards! I won't deduct points, it's just I don't like how it's not capitalized!
 
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Jolteon lv.45 - hp90
Stage 1 Pokemon
Evolved from evee

[Pokepower] Pierce of thunder
Once During your turn,when you evolved Jolteon from 1 of your pokemon.Put 1 damage counter on each of your opponent's pokemon.

{L}Power Plant
Search your deck for a{L}Energy and attach it to 1 of your {L}Pokemon

{C}{C}Swift 30
This attack isn't affected by Pokepower,PokeBody,Weakness,Resistance or any other effects on the defending Pokemon.

{L}{L}{L}Lightning Pillar 50
This attack does 20 damage to each pokemon that shares the same name as the defending pokemon.




Weakness: {F} +20
Resistance: {M}-20
Retreat Cost:
 
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Mudkip Lvl 6 {W} 60 HP

{C} Doggy-Paddle
Search your deck for an energy card and attach it to one of your benched Pokemon. Then, switch Mudkip with that Pokemon. Shuffle your deck afterwards.

{W}{C}{C} Puddle Jump 20+
Flip a coin. If heads, this attack does 20 damage plus 10 more damage for each damage counter on all of your opponent's benched Pokemon.

Weakness: {G}+10
Resistance: None
Retreat Cost: {C}
 
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Turtwig Lv13 HP60 {G}
{G} Bite 20

{G}{C} Absorb 30
Remove up to 2 damage counters from Turtwig (remove one if there is only one).

Weakness: {R} +10
Resistance: {W} -20
Retreat {C}{C}
 
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Turtwig lv.14 hp60 {G}
Basic Pokemon

[Poke-power] Glowing leaf.
Once during your turn, before you attack, You make take 1 basic energy card out of your deck and put it on Turtwig. Glowing leaf can't be used if Turtwig is affected by a special condition.

{C} Tackle 10

{C}{G} Leaf spin 30+
Flip a coin, if heads this attack does 30 dammage + 20 more damage.

Weakness: {R} +20
Resistance: {L} -20
Retreat Cost: {C}

hope ya like :p
 
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Sorry I haven't posted in a while, I could't get on the PC due to my parents
But my results will be shown as soon as I can

AN EDIT AWAAAAIIITTTSSSS

Gengar master--

Pokepower name seems of a little of for the ability but ok...
Attack one - Great for a basic
Attack two - 40 damage for two energy counters on a basic Pokemon? Seems pretty broken
Others - good HP correct weakness and not an awful retreat cost

Seems very good I would rate it a 7

Raiguy_1994

Poke-body is pretty broken but in a good way
Attack one - Great stuff, good name and descriptive and clear
Attack two - I seems worthless without lots of Mudkips
Others - Good HP good weakness and good retreat cost

I like it 7.5

Ryuu7-

You can't use Jolteon

Pokemaniac-

Attack one - Very....Unique, nothing wrong with that
Attack two - 3 energy for an attack that could only do 20 damage is very expensive
Other - All good and correct

Very good I like this card 7.7

muddy 68-

Attack one - Nice
Attack two - Free potions what can I say but broken
Other - HP, weakness are Ok but resistance is insane

Sorry this seems a bit broken so I am going to have to give it a 5

frozengallade-

Poke-power - Ok that's not to bad
Attack one - Simple I like
Attack two - 50 damage for two energy just over the top I would've given it 4
Other - Looks good apart from the resistance and weakness should be 10 damage lower I think

Not bad apart from two hiccups a good hard 7.1
 
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