EspeonROX's Fake Spoiler Competition. Where is everyone!?

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Ryuu...read the topic. Starter Pokemon! Choose from that list.
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Peta, OK. Just judge when you can!
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PokeManiac: Outstanding job. Two problems...capitalize "Energy" in doggy-paddle. Also add level and make Name, Type, HP and level on the same line. Very creative!
8.5/10.
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Muddy68: Turtwig...nice!
Make Retreat Retreat COST and add a : next to that. Space between attack and Pokemon name.
8/10
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frozengallade: OK work here. Make sure you use capitalization only when necessary, capitalize Power, and Leaf Spin. Overall, could be better, but definately not bad.

8/10.

UPDATE!!
 
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Treecko {G} Lv. 16 HP: 50

PokePower- Sunshine Shield
If you have a {R}-type Pokemon, all Treecko's attacks are + 20

{G} Leech Seed 20
Take 1 damage counter off Treecko. (If 1 is left, remove it)

{G}{G} Tail Pound 30

Weakness- {R} + 30
Resistance- {W} - 20
Retreat Cost- {C}
 
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Cyndaquil-{R}-Lv.10- 50HP

{R} Flame Wheel 20
Flip a coin. If heads, prevent all effects of attacks, including damage, done to Cyndaquil during your next turn.

{R}{R} Flamethrower 40
Discard a {R} energy card attached to Cyndaquil

Weakness-{W}+10
Resistance-
Retreat Cost-{C}
 
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Both cards are weird.

PW: Flame Wheel is broken. You also forgot a period after Flamethrower's effect.
Otherwise: 8/10

Sweet Dawn: The sidenote for Leech Seed is unnecessary.
+30 Weakness!? Like, +10!
Be more specific with the Power.

7/10
 
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Sorry! =S


Piplup Lv.7 40HP

[PokeBody]Water Favory
Whenever you attached a {W} Energy to Piplup,Remove 1 damage counter and any Special Condition on Piplup.


{W} Bubble
Flip a coin. If heads, The Defending Pokemon is now Paralyzed.

{C} {C} Headbutt 30


Weakness:{L}+10
Resistance:
Retreat Cost:{C}
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 STARTED! Post your spoilers BEFORE FRIDAY!

Dudeman, energy isn't meant to be capitalised.
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 STARTED! Post your spoilers BEFORE FRIDAY!

Sweet dawn -

Pokepower - A weird name for an odd Pokepower it doesn't seem to fit
Attack one - Ok makes sense, but there is no need for anything in the brackets
Attack two - Not bad, nothing wrong
Other - HP is ok but is will be destroyed against any fire type and it will destroy any water type

It's not bad but it's nothing great I an giving it a 7

Psychic whisperer

Attack one - Seems...broken
Attack two - With this move combined with flame wheel this card is just to broken for a basic starter card
Other - HP weakness and retreat cost is fine

Hmmm sorry but it seems way to broken for my liking a 6.3

Ryuu7

Poke-body - Seems just under the broken mark
Attack one - It could do with doing some damage like 10 damage?
Attack two - That's a good trade, two energy for 30 damage but one should be water
Other - Weakness, retreat cost and HP is fine

It's under the broken mark by quite a bit good work, a 7.8 for you
 
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Hello!? On the Turtwig cards, it says resistance -20! Also, that is what absorb does anyway!
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 STARTED! Post your spoilers BEFORE FRIDAY!

PokeManiac: It's fine. I didn't deduct for that, I could careless about Energy or energy, as long as it isn't like NRG. :p You still have an 8.5. Not bad.

Ryuu: Wording on Poke-Body is weird, and you didn't use [Poke-Body]. :(
HOWEVER: Great Body, I really like what it is. Bubble...it doesn't do 10 damage?

7.5 from me.

Peta: Check 1st page, you still have some cards to rate.
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 ENDED! Calculating scores...

Scores are UP! PMs will be sent to the ones who make the next round. Those who don't...I will still send a PM to you.
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 is complete. SCORES ARE UP!

k when are we going to get the PM
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 is complete. SCORES ARE UP!

I sent them...like 2 minutes ago. :p The topic will be revealed on this Monday, and please, READ THE RULES. They will earn you more points!

Helpful hints for EVERYONE:

-Bolding the Pokemon name is never a bad idea...
-Color is good...
-USE THE ENERGY SYMBOLS.
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 is complete. SCORES ARE UP!

Uhm. Can you give the next topic today or tommorow because moday is a school day and then i can't work on the pc so it would be wednesday when i can read it.
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 is complete. SCORES ARE UP!

Hmm...OK. I will make this official.

UPDATE: Everyone, the date of the next round will be Sunday, 11/16/2008.
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 is complete. SCORES ARE UP!

I had the lowest score :( (time to work harder)

by the way thanks for the PM dudeman!
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 is complete. SCORES ARE UP!

No problem...

The topic is UP. Get to work peoplez!
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 is complete. SCORES ARE UP!

Glalie ex 120HP {W}

When Pokemon-ex has been Knocked Out, your opponent takes 2 prize cards

[Poke-Body] : Solid Crystal
Any damage done to your Bench Pokemon is reduced by 50. You can't use more than 1 Solid Crystal Poke-Body each turn.

{W}{C} Icy Face 50
Flip a coin. If head, the Defending Pokemon can't attack during your next turn.

{W}{W}{C}{C} Spike Roll
Discard all {W} energy attach to Glalie ex and put 3 damage counter's on all Pokemon in play.

Weakness : {M} x2
Resistance : [-]
Retreat Cost : {C}{C}{C}
 
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Charizard X Hp 150 {R}
Put onto your active Charizard

[Poke-Body] Scorching Flames
Whenever energy is discarded by the effect of an attack from this active pokemon, flip a coin for each energy discarded. For each heads, place 2 damage counters on the defending pokemon.

[Poke-Power] Suffering Inferno
Once per turn, you may use this power. The defending pokemon is now burned. Even if the defending pokemon flips heads, place one damage counter on it between turns (if tails, place the normal two).

Weakness: {W}x2
Resistance: {F}-20
Retreat: {C}{C}

Charizard X Hp 150 {R}
Put onto your Active Charizard

[Poke-Body] Scorching Flames
Whenever energy is discarded by the effect of an attack from this Active Pokemon, flip a coin for each energy discarded. For each heads, place 2 damage counters on the Defending Pokemon.

[Poke-Power] Suffering Inferno
Once per turn, you may use this power. The Defending pokemon is now Burned. Even if the Defending Pokemon flips heads, place one damage counter on it between turns (if tails, place the normal two).

Weakness: {W} x2
Resistance: {F}-20
Retreat: {C}{C}
 
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Slowking X - HP 130 - {P}

[Poke-Power] Slow Retaliation. You may use this power once during the game if Slowking has been your active Pokemon for more than three turns in a row. Draw up to 3 cards. Then, put up to four damage counters on your opponent's Pokemon in any way you like. This power can't be used if you have another Slowking LV. X in play or if Slowking is affected by a Special Condition.

{W}{P} Triumphant KO - 60 damage. If the defending Pokemon would be knocked out by this attack, you may remove up to 3 damage counters from Slowking. If you do, you may put 1 damage counter on any Pokemon in play (yours or your opponent's.)

[Poke Note] Put this card onto your active Slowking. Slowking LV. X can use any attack, Poke-Power, or Poke-Body from its previous level.

Weakness: {L} (+20)
Resistance: {R} (-20)
Retreat Cost: {C}{C}

And that's it. Hope you like it.
 
RE: Dudeman1993's Fake Spoiler Competition. Round 1 is complete. SCORES ARE UP!

WOW! These are coming in with a very large improvement! Just spectacular!

MultiLuxury: Great card. I love it. However, minor stuff got in the way...
-Make sure it's "if heads" rather than "if head".
-"damage counter's" should be damage counters".
-Finally, "to your Bench Pokemon" should be "to your Benched Pokemon."

You get a strong 8.5/10. A good mark!
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gmmuka: Another good one!
-Great use of color...that helps your score!
-Love the Poke-Body.
-Make sure you capitalize "Active" and "Pokemon".
-What happened to the Water symbol in the Weakness? :(
-Also, capitalize "Defending" and "Burned".

A 7/10, but with the color, an 8/10! I suggest working on capitalization.
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Celebi23: WOW. Looks very nice!
-Space out description with the Power. It looks kinda messy.
-Space out between attack and the Weakness and Resistance and etc. It still looks messy.
-Not taking off for this, but you don't need damage after 60. We know it's 60 damage...not 60 hamburgers.
-You forgot "Put onto your Active Slowking"
-Capitalize "Defending" and "Knocked Out".
-+20 Weakness? This guy is a bit broken...

An 8/10. Good work! I would space out the attacks and stuff, just make sure you check over Weakness and stuff for uberness.

Updated scores!
 
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