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RE: Legend of Lucario
I'm trying to make this somewhat 'Kid-Friendly' so that all members of Pokébeach can read it. But he's about as good as dead in his current state.
I'm trying to make this somewhat 'Kid-Friendly' so that all members of Pokébeach can read it. But he's about as good as dead in his current state.
RE: Legend of Lucario
Lol, ok. I don't understand why only me and Delcatty_Lover are posting comments. I'd say this is an amazing fanfic. LordDarkrai also posts sometimes too. You are underestimated for some reason. Lots of people get replies because they are popular on the website. That is what I think. But whatever, this is a good story and you shouldn't care what anyone else thinks about it! ROCK ON!
Lol, ok. I don't understand why only me and Delcatty_Lover are posting comments. I'd say this is an amazing fanfic. LordDarkrai also posts sometimes too. You are underestimated for some reason. Lots of people get replies because they are popular on the website. That is what I think. But whatever, this is a good story and you shouldn't care what anyone else thinks about it! ROCK ON!
RE: Legend of Lucario
Yep, Lov ethis Fic, last chapter was tad short, but like all the chapters awesome.
Yep, Lov ethis Fic, last chapter was tad short, but like all the chapters awesome.
RE: Legend of Lucario
Don't look now, but it's Chapter 25, comin' at ya!
Jin could feel the heat increase as he walked on. He was definetely getting closer to Groudon.
"Hang on Kurai," He said. "I'll save you!" Just then, he saw some figures in the distance. More challengers? No, as he got closer, he could see...Mokutan and the gang!
"Guys!" Said Jin happily as he ran towards them.
"Jin!" Exclaimed Mokutan.
Jin then looked at his friends, and then saw Ondori. His heart skipped a beat. "Is...that.."
"No, it isn't." Mokutan answered bluntly.
"My name's Onodori." Said Ondori.
"Now that we're all back together again, let's go see Groudon." Decided Mokutan.
"Yeah, let's." Agreed Jin.
As Jin and the gang moved forward, the heat begn growing. Even the Fire-type Mokutan and Ondori seemed to be being affected by it.
"We must really be getting close." Said Mokutan. His words proved to be true, because a few minutes later, they came to a pair of large doors with a firey, magma design on them.
"He must be behind those doors." Said Mokutan.
"Well, here we go." Said Jin as he began to walk towards the doors, however, he was stopped by Mokutan.
"Are you postively sure you want to enetr those doors?" Said Mokutan. "No one has ever attempted to come here in a long time. He may give us what we want, but he just as well kill us on the spot."
"There's no turning back now." Said Jin. "I have to do this." With that he flung open the large doors.
This room was filled with the most intensifying heat Jin had ever felt. It was like he was ant under a magnifying glass in the Saraha, while swimming in a bowl of hot soup. Lava flowed from everywhere like it was water.
"WHO HAS ENTERED MY ROOM?" A booming voice that seemed to come from every dircetion all at once. "IDENTIFY YOURSELVES AND STATE YOUR BUSINESS."
Jin gulped "I am called Jin." He said meekly. "And these are my friends Mokutan, Kyanon, Wana, and Ondori." He then almost lost all courage to speak for regaining it again. "I have heard you own an item of great power. I wish to obtain it to save my friend, and quite possibly the world."
"HMMMM..." Said the voice in deep thought. And then it spoke. "VERY WELL. BUT FIRST..." The ground in front of Jin began to crumble and break as the large terrifying creature of Groudon emerged.
'YOU MUST DEFEAT ME!"
Don't look now, but it's Chapter 25, comin' at ya!
Jin could feel the heat increase as he walked on. He was definetely getting closer to Groudon.
"Hang on Kurai," He said. "I'll save you!" Just then, he saw some figures in the distance. More challengers? No, as he got closer, he could see...Mokutan and the gang!
"Guys!" Said Jin happily as he ran towards them.
"Jin!" Exclaimed Mokutan.
Jin then looked at his friends, and then saw Ondori. His heart skipped a beat. "Is...that.."
"No, it isn't." Mokutan answered bluntly.
"My name's Onodori." Said Ondori.
"Now that we're all back together again, let's go see Groudon." Decided Mokutan.
"Yeah, let's." Agreed Jin.
As Jin and the gang moved forward, the heat begn growing. Even the Fire-type Mokutan and Ondori seemed to be being affected by it.
"We must really be getting close." Said Mokutan. His words proved to be true, because a few minutes later, they came to a pair of large doors with a firey, magma design on them.
"He must be behind those doors." Said Mokutan.
"Well, here we go." Said Jin as he began to walk towards the doors, however, he was stopped by Mokutan.
"Are you postively sure you want to enetr those doors?" Said Mokutan. "No one has ever attempted to come here in a long time. He may give us what we want, but he just as well kill us on the spot."
"There's no turning back now." Said Jin. "I have to do this." With that he flung open the large doors.
This room was filled with the most intensifying heat Jin had ever felt. It was like he was ant under a magnifying glass in the Saraha, while swimming in a bowl of hot soup. Lava flowed from everywhere like it was water.
"WHO HAS ENTERED MY ROOM?" A booming voice that seemed to come from every dircetion all at once. "IDENTIFY YOURSELVES AND STATE YOUR BUSINESS."
Jin gulped "I am called Jin." He said meekly. "And these are my friends Mokutan, Kyanon, Wana, and Ondori." He then almost lost all courage to speak for regaining it again. "I have heard you own an item of great power. I wish to obtain it to save my friend, and quite possibly the world."
"HMMMM..." Said the voice in deep thought. And then it spoke. "VERY WELL. BUT FIRST..." The ground in front of Jin began to crumble and break as the large terrifying creature of Groudon emerged.
'YOU MUST DEFEAT ME!"
RE: Legend of Lucario
They finally reached Groudon!
That took a looong time, though.
I liked the fact that no characters died, but I don't usually mind.
The only time I do is when the story goes into detail about the death.
That aside, I simply love how the story is going.
I'll be waiting for the next chapters!
They finally reached Groudon!
That took a looong time, though.
I liked the fact that no characters died, but I don't usually mind.
The only time I do is when the story goes into detail about the death.
That aside, I simply love how the story is going.
I'll be waiting for the next chapters!
RE: Legend of Lucario
Here's the awaited Chapter 26!
"I...fight you?" Said Jin. The thought of a regular Pokémon defeating a Legendary seemed impossible to him. But then again, another thought said, so is the idea that a human can become a Pokémon. "Okay, I'll do it!" With that he ran at Groudon, and prepared a Force Palm attack. However, almost the instant his muscles moved, Groudon shot a large blast of magma, causing Jin to dodge it and land on the ground.
"Jin!" Exlaimed Mokutan. "Let me help you with-"
"No," Said Jin bluntly. "I need to fight this guy by myself."
"He is right." Said Groudon. "I can tell that that Lucario is the only one out of all of you who desires my weapon. Therefore he, and he alone must fight me." At this point Jin tried to launch a sneak attack by extremespeeding up to him, but Groudon noticed and flung his tail, causing Jin to dodge.
He's got grea reaction time, Thought Jin. But his attacks are slow, if only I could hit him... However, his attacks were interuppted by Groudon firing a Flamethrower at him, causing him to dodge, but Groudon almost instantly knew where he was, and used his tail to knock him to the ground, leaving him badly hurt.
"Jin!" Exlaimed Wana.
"Is that all you have, Lucario?" Said Groudon. "If so, I will never present you with my weapon." He began to walk towards him. "I do not intend to give my item to those who are weak and cannot get power on their own." He began nering closer to Jin. "It is to give to those of have already reached their limits of power and wish to go beyond those limits!"
Jin, lying on the ground in pain, still found a way to open his eyes wide. Was that it? Was he just some weak fool who was trying to rely on others to accomplish his goals? No, He thought. I must do this myself! I am no longer the trainer, I am the Pokémon! It is MY duty to defeat him.. Slowly, while still lying down in pain, he began to charge a Dragon Pulse attack.
"Well, it seems your journey to see me has come to an..." Said Groudon, but before he knew it, he was it in his chest with the blast. He then rushed up to Groudon and punched him in the head.
"I knew it!" Said Jin. "Since you have fast reflexes and a slow moving body, once you are damaged, you do not have the time to react to the next attack after recovering from the previous one!" He then struck a blow to his upper stomach sending Groudon to the ground. He then fired another Dragon Pulse, this one with more power then he ever had, hitting Groudon square-on.
"I win!" Yelled Jin. "Now, present me with your weapon!"
"I see." Said Groudon, getting to his feet. "You truly have reached the limits of how powerful you can become. You are on truly capable of being presented it." With that, he opened his palm. With it, a small orb which seemed to be made of magma, appeared. It then moved towards Jin before latching on to his body, before enetring it as if it was made of air.
"What...happened?" Asked Jin.
"You have been granted with my power, Maguma no Ude." Said Groudon. "When engaged in battle, you may actviate it simply by willing it." He explained. "Now leave. I do beleive you must have more important manners to attend to."
"Right!" Said Jin. He then faced towards his friends. "C'mon guys, let's go!"
As they walked out of Groudon's lair, Mokutan spoke. "So, what do we do now?"
"We go rescue Kurai, of course." Said Jin.
"But we don't even know where this Dark Six live." Replied Mokutan.
"I'm sure we'll figure it out." Said Jin confidently. At this point, he heard a noise from behind him. He turned around just in time to block an attack by Makainu.
"Hah!" Said Makainu. "I knew if I loitered around here I'd meet you! Now that you're all together, I can kill you all at once!"
"That so?" Said Jin. "Looks like I'm going to be testing out this power a bit sooner then expected then."
Here's the awaited Chapter 26!
"I...fight you?" Said Jin. The thought of a regular Pokémon defeating a Legendary seemed impossible to him. But then again, another thought said, so is the idea that a human can become a Pokémon. "Okay, I'll do it!" With that he ran at Groudon, and prepared a Force Palm attack. However, almost the instant his muscles moved, Groudon shot a large blast of magma, causing Jin to dodge it and land on the ground.
"Jin!" Exlaimed Mokutan. "Let me help you with-"
"No," Said Jin bluntly. "I need to fight this guy by myself."
"He is right." Said Groudon. "I can tell that that Lucario is the only one out of all of you who desires my weapon. Therefore he, and he alone must fight me." At this point Jin tried to launch a sneak attack by extremespeeding up to him, but Groudon noticed and flung his tail, causing Jin to dodge.
He's got grea reaction time, Thought Jin. But his attacks are slow, if only I could hit him... However, his attacks were interuppted by Groudon firing a Flamethrower at him, causing him to dodge, but Groudon almost instantly knew where he was, and used his tail to knock him to the ground, leaving him badly hurt.
"Jin!" Exlaimed Wana.
"Is that all you have, Lucario?" Said Groudon. "If so, I will never present you with my weapon." He began to walk towards him. "I do not intend to give my item to those who are weak and cannot get power on their own." He began nering closer to Jin. "It is to give to those of have already reached their limits of power and wish to go beyond those limits!"
Jin, lying on the ground in pain, still found a way to open his eyes wide. Was that it? Was he just some weak fool who was trying to rely on others to accomplish his goals? No, He thought. I must do this myself! I am no longer the trainer, I am the Pokémon! It is MY duty to defeat him.. Slowly, while still lying down in pain, he began to charge a Dragon Pulse attack.
"Well, it seems your journey to see me has come to an..." Said Groudon, but before he knew it, he was it in his chest with the blast. He then rushed up to Groudon and punched him in the head.
"I knew it!" Said Jin. "Since you have fast reflexes and a slow moving body, once you are damaged, you do not have the time to react to the next attack after recovering from the previous one!" He then struck a blow to his upper stomach sending Groudon to the ground. He then fired another Dragon Pulse, this one with more power then he ever had, hitting Groudon square-on.
"I win!" Yelled Jin. "Now, present me with your weapon!"
"I see." Said Groudon, getting to his feet. "You truly have reached the limits of how powerful you can become. You are on truly capable of being presented it." With that, he opened his palm. With it, a small orb which seemed to be made of magma, appeared. It then moved towards Jin before latching on to his body, before enetring it as if it was made of air.
"What...happened?" Asked Jin.
"You have been granted with my power, Maguma no Ude." Said Groudon. "When engaged in battle, you may actviate it simply by willing it." He explained. "Now leave. I do beleive you must have more important manners to attend to."
"Right!" Said Jin. He then faced towards his friends. "C'mon guys, let's go!"
As they walked out of Groudon's lair, Mokutan spoke. "So, what do we do now?"
"We go rescue Kurai, of course." Said Jin.
"But we don't even know where this Dark Six live." Replied Mokutan.
"I'm sure we'll figure it out." Said Jin confidently. At this point, he heard a noise from behind him. He turned around just in time to block an attack by Makainu.
"Hah!" Said Makainu. "I knew if I loitered around here I'd meet you! Now that you're all together, I can kill you all at once!"
"That so?" Said Jin. "Looks like I'm going to be testing out this power a bit sooner then expected then."
RE: Legend of Lucario
Chapter 27 is here!
"Hah! What's with that cocky smirk?" Said Makainu. "You think you can defeat me? Don't you remember how I trashed you and all of your friends all at the same time?"
"That was quite awhile ago." Said Jin. "I think I've gotten stronger since then."
"Don't be stupid!" Said Makainu back. "At most it was three days ago! There's no way you could've gotten any stronger!" With that he lunged at Jin, but Jin easily dodged it. Makainu then fired a Flamethrower but Jin fired an Aura Sphere at it, causing the attacks to collide and simmer into nothing.
"You may not have known this, but I'm a pretty good observer." Said Jin. "I've noticed how you move before each attack. Now I can easily dodge your attacks or counter them with my own."
"That so?" Scowled Makainu. "In that case, I'll just use an attack I haven't used yet!" With that, he began to glow purple as he rammed himself at Jin, knocking him backwards.
"What-was that?" Said Jin in shock. "I've never seen an attack like that before!"
"Ha! That attack's called Shadow Blitz!" Said Makainu. "It's a 'Shadow Attack'."
"Shadow attack?" Said Jin, wondering would that could mean.
"Only Pokémon who have truly devoted themselves to evil can use them." Explained Houndoom. "The more evil you are, the more powerful the attack comes!" He then laughed an evil laugh. "And there's plenty more where that came from!" With thta he ran at Jin with another Shadow Blitz, but this time Jin blocked it with his fist.
"Well, to be honest," Said Jin. "I haven't used all of my attacks either."
"Wha-what do you mean by that?!" Yelled Makainu.
"I didn't want to use it this early." Sighed Jin. "But I really don't feel like fighting with you anymore." With that, the arm he was blocking began to glow.
"W-what's happening?!" Demanded Makainu, as the glowing seemed to swell the arm. Fire and Magma flowed from the wall and the floor, as if being magneticly pulled to it. By the time it stopped glowing, Jin's arm seemed to be twice it's regular size and seemed to be entirely made from magma and fire.
"How do you like it?" Said Jin. "This is my new power, Maguma no Ude." Makainu stared at it in fear.
"The sheer force and power from this arm will end your life in one shot." Said Jin feircely. "But, I may spare your life, if you can tell me where the Dark Six are located.
Makainu looked at him. "Like I'd tell you! If I die, It will be for the greater good of the Dark Six! Don't you see?!" He said, his voice growing louder. "By now, Darkrai should have already awoken! Just a little more evil power and he will engulf the world in darkness! Hahahahaha!" He laughed, this time louder than ever before.
"Alright then." Said Jin. With that, he fired a punch with the magma arm, creating a huge explsion and caused thousands of flames and magma to shoot at Makainu. It was if a mini volcano was erupting from Jins hand. By the time the flames and magama cleared, Makainu was nothing but ash.
"Well, that's that." Said Jin, returning his arm to normal. "But we still don't know where the Dark Six are located."
"Wait," Said Mokutan, who had an idea. "Do you think Rayquaza and the other rescue teams have figured out where they're located?"
"Hey, you're right!" Said Jin. "Then let's go see Rayquaza!"
Chapter 27 is here!
"Hah! What's with that cocky smirk?" Said Makainu. "You think you can defeat me? Don't you remember how I trashed you and all of your friends all at the same time?"
"That was quite awhile ago." Said Jin. "I think I've gotten stronger since then."
"Don't be stupid!" Said Makainu back. "At most it was three days ago! There's no way you could've gotten any stronger!" With that he lunged at Jin, but Jin easily dodged it. Makainu then fired a Flamethrower but Jin fired an Aura Sphere at it, causing the attacks to collide and simmer into nothing.
"You may not have known this, but I'm a pretty good observer." Said Jin. "I've noticed how you move before each attack. Now I can easily dodge your attacks or counter them with my own."
"That so?" Scowled Makainu. "In that case, I'll just use an attack I haven't used yet!" With that, he began to glow purple as he rammed himself at Jin, knocking him backwards.
"What-was that?" Said Jin in shock. "I've never seen an attack like that before!"
"Ha! That attack's called Shadow Blitz!" Said Makainu. "It's a 'Shadow Attack'."
"Shadow attack?" Said Jin, wondering would that could mean.
"Only Pokémon who have truly devoted themselves to evil can use them." Explained Houndoom. "The more evil you are, the more powerful the attack comes!" He then laughed an evil laugh. "And there's plenty more where that came from!" With thta he ran at Jin with another Shadow Blitz, but this time Jin blocked it with his fist.
"Well, to be honest," Said Jin. "I haven't used all of my attacks either."
"Wha-what do you mean by that?!" Yelled Makainu.
"I didn't want to use it this early." Sighed Jin. "But I really don't feel like fighting with you anymore." With that, the arm he was blocking began to glow.
"W-what's happening?!" Demanded Makainu, as the glowing seemed to swell the arm. Fire and Magma flowed from the wall and the floor, as if being magneticly pulled to it. By the time it stopped glowing, Jin's arm seemed to be twice it's regular size and seemed to be entirely made from magma and fire.
"How do you like it?" Said Jin. "This is my new power, Maguma no Ude." Makainu stared at it in fear.
"The sheer force and power from this arm will end your life in one shot." Said Jin feircely. "But, I may spare your life, if you can tell me where the Dark Six are located.
Makainu looked at him. "Like I'd tell you! If I die, It will be for the greater good of the Dark Six! Don't you see?!" He said, his voice growing louder. "By now, Darkrai should have already awoken! Just a little more evil power and he will engulf the world in darkness! Hahahahaha!" He laughed, this time louder than ever before.
"Alright then." Said Jin. With that, he fired a punch with the magma arm, creating a huge explsion and caused thousands of flames and magma to shoot at Makainu. It was if a mini volcano was erupting from Jins hand. By the time the flames and magama cleared, Makainu was nothing but ash.
"Well, that's that." Said Jin, returning his arm to normal. "But we still don't know where the Dark Six are located."
"Wait," Said Mokutan, who had an idea. "Do you think Rayquaza and the other rescue teams have figured out where they're located?"
"Hey, you're right!" Said Jin. "Then let's go see Rayquaza!"
RE: Legend of Lucario
Here's Chapter 28!
"Ondori, are you really going to stay here?" Asked Jin as he, Mokutan, Kyanon, and Wana prepared to leave the cave.
"Yeah." Said Ondori. "I've always wondered what was going on in the outside world, but now I'd actually prefer it if I didn't."
"Alright then. I hope I see again soon!" Said Jin, waving goodbye as he and his gang began to leave Magma Cavern.
"Lord Rayquaza!" Said Mokutan as he, Jin, and the rest entered Rayquaza's room.
"Mokutan, Jin, it's been awhile." Said Rayquaza. "What brings you all here."
"Rayquaza," Spoke up Jin. "Me, Mokutan, and my friends Kyanon and Wana wish to rebecome a Rescue Team!"
"Is that so?" Said Rayquaza. "Then it shall be done. However, all previous records of your past acheivements have been erased, so you'll be starting at Normal Rank." As he spoke, a Pelliper flew in and gave Jin a new rescue badge before departing the room.
"Thank you." Said Jin politely. "Also, we wish to know if you have discovered the location of the Dark Six's hideout."
"Yes," Answered Rayquaza. "Their hideout is located somewhere in the dungeon Darknight Relic."
"If that is the case," Said Jin. "My and my Rescue Team would like to head there in order to save Kurai."
"I'm sorry, but I will have to turn down that request." Said Rayqauza, with Jin staring in shock at him. "I cannot spare to lose anyone in this upcoming battle. The fate of one person cannot compare to the entire world's fate."
"Is that what you think?!" Screamed Jin profoundusly at him. "They're not going to war!"
"And what makes you think that?" Asked Rayquaza.
"While we were away in Magma Cavern, I fought and killed one of the Dark Six members." Said Jin. "Before he died, he said Darkrai has already awakened." Rayquaza's small eyes opened in shock. "If Darkrai's already awoken, then shouldn't you be fighting right now?!"
"...I see." Said Rayquaza. "Then this whole 'going to war' thing was a ruse by the Dark Six. If what you say is true, then you henceforth have permission to enter Darknight Relic and attempt to save your friend."
"Thank you." Said Jin. "I will also try to rid us of these Dark Six as well."
"Do not push your limits." Said Rayquaza sternly. "Do what you have to do."
"...Understood." Said Jin, as he took out his new Rescue Badge and raised it in the air, and surrounded him, Mokutan, Kyanon, and Wana in light, before they vanished.
Meanwhile, in the Dark Six's hideout, Kurai and Yaiba ran through the halls, looking for an exit.
"C'mon, just a little further!" Said Yaiba as they turned a corner, but what they saw made them stop dead in their tracks. Instead of the exit of which they hoped, all they saw was the large, looming body of Hinote.
"Hello there." Said Hinote coldly.
Here's Chapter 28!
"Ondori, are you really going to stay here?" Asked Jin as he, Mokutan, Kyanon, and Wana prepared to leave the cave.
"Yeah." Said Ondori. "I've always wondered what was going on in the outside world, but now I'd actually prefer it if I didn't."
"Alright then. I hope I see again soon!" Said Jin, waving goodbye as he and his gang began to leave Magma Cavern.
"Lord Rayquaza!" Said Mokutan as he, Jin, and the rest entered Rayquaza's room.
"Mokutan, Jin, it's been awhile." Said Rayquaza. "What brings you all here."
"Rayquaza," Spoke up Jin. "Me, Mokutan, and my friends Kyanon and Wana wish to rebecome a Rescue Team!"
"Is that so?" Said Rayquaza. "Then it shall be done. However, all previous records of your past acheivements have been erased, so you'll be starting at Normal Rank." As he spoke, a Pelliper flew in and gave Jin a new rescue badge before departing the room.
"Thank you." Said Jin politely. "Also, we wish to know if you have discovered the location of the Dark Six's hideout."
"Yes," Answered Rayquaza. "Their hideout is located somewhere in the dungeon Darknight Relic."
"If that is the case," Said Jin. "My and my Rescue Team would like to head there in order to save Kurai."
"I'm sorry, but I will have to turn down that request." Said Rayqauza, with Jin staring in shock at him. "I cannot spare to lose anyone in this upcoming battle. The fate of one person cannot compare to the entire world's fate."
"Is that what you think?!" Screamed Jin profoundusly at him. "They're not going to war!"
"And what makes you think that?" Asked Rayquaza.
"While we were away in Magma Cavern, I fought and killed one of the Dark Six members." Said Jin. "Before he died, he said Darkrai has already awakened." Rayquaza's small eyes opened in shock. "If Darkrai's already awoken, then shouldn't you be fighting right now?!"
"...I see." Said Rayquaza. "Then this whole 'going to war' thing was a ruse by the Dark Six. If what you say is true, then you henceforth have permission to enter Darknight Relic and attempt to save your friend."
"Thank you." Said Jin. "I will also try to rid us of these Dark Six as well."
"Do not push your limits." Said Rayquaza sternly. "Do what you have to do."
"...Understood." Said Jin, as he took out his new Rescue Badge and raised it in the air, and surrounded him, Mokutan, Kyanon, and Wana in light, before they vanished.
Meanwhile, in the Dark Six's hideout, Kurai and Yaiba ran through the halls, looking for an exit.
"C'mon, just a little further!" Said Yaiba as they turned a corner, but what they saw made them stop dead in their tracks. Instead of the exit of which they hoped, all they saw was the large, looming body of Hinote.
"Hello there." Said Hinote coldly.
RE: Legend of Lucario
Chapter 29 is here!
The light stopped, and Jin and his rescue team found themselves in Darknight Relic. It was very dim, with the walls being made of tattered peices of wood, with floors being of a rather snady texture.
"So, this is were Kurai is, huh?" Said Jin.
"Definitely." Said Mokutan in agreement.
"I say we split up then." Suggested Jin. "We can cover more ground that way."
"Alright," Said Kyanon. "But I think me and Wana should go together."
"Why's that?" Asked Jin.
"We specialize in double battles." Said Wana. "If we went separately, we wouldn't be half as powerful than if we battled together."
"Okay then, good luck." Said Jin, as he took off in the leftwards direction.
"Well, I guess I'll be off then." Said Mokutan as he ran off in a straightforward path.
"Looks like we're going right, then." Said Kyanon, as he and Wana began to walk right. After awhile the came to a rather odd looking room. It was very large, but they couldn't tell how tall the ceiling was, because the entire top of the room was shrouded in darkness.
"Woah, what's with this room?" Said Wana. Just then, another, unknown feminine voice spoke out.
"Would you like me to explain?"
With that, something sped down from the roof and slashed Kyanon's arm, causing Kyanon to scream out in pain. Before he could attack whatever the thing was, or even get a good glimpse of it, it had sped back to the top.
"Wha-what was that?" Asked Wana. Just then the thing dashed back down, hitting Wana this time. As it jumped back uo, Kyanon tried to hit it with a fireball, but the thing masterfully avoided.
"Tch, this things got a real cheap way of fighting." Remarked Kyanon. The thing flew back down again.
"I got you!" Said Wana as she flung towards it and clamped her large jaws on it, revealing the thing to be a Dustox.
"A Dustox?" Remarked Wana.
"I'll have to give you credit." Said the Dustox in the feminine voice as it escaped Wana's grasp. "You two are the first to see me before getting killed by me. I guess Hinote wasn't kidding when he said to be careful with you people."
"Hinote?" Said Kyanon in response to her statement. "You're...a Dark Six member?!"
"Correct." Said the Dustox. "Dark Six member number five, Kochou!"
Chapter 29 is here!
The light stopped, and Jin and his rescue team found themselves in Darknight Relic. It was very dim, with the walls being made of tattered peices of wood, with floors being of a rather snady texture.
"So, this is were Kurai is, huh?" Said Jin.
"Definitely." Said Mokutan in agreement.
"I say we split up then." Suggested Jin. "We can cover more ground that way."
"Alright," Said Kyanon. "But I think me and Wana should go together."
"Why's that?" Asked Jin.
"We specialize in double battles." Said Wana. "If we went separately, we wouldn't be half as powerful than if we battled together."
"Okay then, good luck." Said Jin, as he took off in the leftwards direction.
"Well, I guess I'll be off then." Said Mokutan as he ran off in a straightforward path.
"Looks like we're going right, then." Said Kyanon, as he and Wana began to walk right. After awhile the came to a rather odd looking room. It was very large, but they couldn't tell how tall the ceiling was, because the entire top of the room was shrouded in darkness.
"Woah, what's with this room?" Said Wana. Just then, another, unknown feminine voice spoke out.
"Would you like me to explain?"
With that, something sped down from the roof and slashed Kyanon's arm, causing Kyanon to scream out in pain. Before he could attack whatever the thing was, or even get a good glimpse of it, it had sped back to the top.
"Wha-what was that?" Asked Wana. Just then the thing dashed back down, hitting Wana this time. As it jumped back uo, Kyanon tried to hit it with a fireball, but the thing masterfully avoided.
"Tch, this things got a real cheap way of fighting." Remarked Kyanon. The thing flew back down again.
"I got you!" Said Wana as she flung towards it and clamped her large jaws on it, revealing the thing to be a Dustox.
"A Dustox?" Remarked Wana.
"I'll have to give you credit." Said the Dustox in the feminine voice as it escaped Wana's grasp. "You two are the first to see me before getting killed by me. I guess Hinote wasn't kidding when he said to be careful with you people."
"Hinote?" Said Kyanon in response to her statement. "You're...a Dark Six member?!"
"Correct." Said the Dustox. "Dark Six member number five, Kochou!"
RE: Legend of Lucario
Well, the chapter was good. But I can't really imagine a Dustox as a Dark Six member. When you said slashing I thought it was like Gallade or Scizor, because Dustox just doesn't seem right.
Oh, and am I right when I said I think somebody is going to die soon?
Well, the chapter was good. But I can't really imagine a Dustox as a Dark Six member. When you said slashing I thought it was like Gallade or Scizor, because Dustox just doesn't seem right.
Oh, and am I right when I said I think somebody is going to die soon?
RE: Legend of Lucario
You'll just have to wait and find out to see if anyone dies or not. I mean c'mon, JK Rowling didn't reveal if Harry Potter was going to die or not before the seventh book was released. There aren't that many chapters left, so you can wait and find out.
You'll just have to wait and find out to see if anyone dies or not. I mean c'mon, JK Rowling didn't reveal if Harry Potter was going to die or not before the seventh book was released. There aren't that many chapters left, so you can wait and find out.
RE: Legend of Lucario
I've sat on the idea of a sequel, but it doesn't seem to be going anywhere as of now. I already have an idea of what I'm going to write after this, so if I do ever write one it won't be for awhile. Though I wouldn't completely rule it out.
I've sat on the idea of a sequel, but it doesn't seem to be going anywhere as of now. I already have an idea of what I'm going to write after this, so if I do ever write one it won't be for awhile. Though I wouldn't completely rule it out.
RE: Legend of Lucario
OK, but there is still a chance which is good. I really liked this fanfic and ya! I've already got a sequel idea for my fanfic even though I'm only at Ch. 9 right now. (I really need to get working but I am having a hard time thinking of how your battle with Falkner goes. Well, I'm stumped!)
OK, but there is still a chance which is good. I really liked this fanfic and ya! I've already got a sequel idea for my fanfic even though I'm only at Ch. 9 right now. (I really need to get working but I am having a hard time thinking of how your battle with Falkner goes. Well, I'm stumped!)
RE: Legend of Lucario
OMG! THIRTY chapters! That's a lotta chapters, ya know.
"So you are a Dark Six member, huh?" Said Kyanon as he fired another fireball, which Kochou dodged easily.
"That's right, and I'm also the person who's going to kill you!" Said Kochou with an evil laugh as she lunged towards Wana, who dodged.
"I wouldn't be talking so big." Said Wana. "Don't you know we defeated someone higher ranked then you?"
"That's not how I heard it." Said Kochou. "The report said that Jin guy defeated him, and you two couldn't do anything to him."
"Tch! She's right-" Said Kyanon under his breath as he tried firing a flamethrower, but to no avail as Kochou again moved out of the way. Wana then tried to counteract by leaping towards Kochou, but Kochou detected it and again dodged.
"That all you honestly have?" Said Kochou as she ascended back up to the dark ceiling.
"She's gonna try another sneak attack!" Realized Kyanon. He embraced for the attack, but instead Kochou tackled Wana, who had not seen it coming. Kochou cackled as she flew back up again.
"Dang it! There's no way to tell who sh'es going to attack!" Exclaimed Kyanon.
"Wait a minute, Kyanon!" Said Wana. "I think we should try 'that'!"
"Are you sure?" Said Kyanon. "We don't even know if 'that' works! It could seriously backfire!"
"There's no choice now! We have to do it!" Said Wana.
Kyanon realized she was right. "Right, then!"
Up in the shadows of the ceiling, Kochou debated who to attack next.
"Hmmm," She said. "I think I'll attack that Magmortar now." With that she dove towards him, however, he noticed his arm was getting ready for an attack.
What's this?! Kochou exclaimed in her thoughts. He knew I was going to attack him?! How could he have- Her thoughts were interuppted when Kyanon pointed his cannon arm right at her.
"Sorry," He said. "But you've run out of luck." With that, his cannon arm fired not a fireball, but instead Wana, who had put herself in his arm acting as a living cannonball. She was also glowing red from the fire that was already stored in Kyanon's arm, making her as hot as the flames herself. She collided with Kochou, who screamed in pain as she dropped to the ground, severly wounded and burned.
"When we first started battling, we couldn't attack you clearly because with your sneak attacks, we couldn't tell who you where going to strike." Explained Kyanon.
"But, if we combined ourselves, by putting me in Kyanon's arm, we both knew you would attack Kyanon." Finished Wana, beginning to cool off.
"And that's given us the upper hand in this battle." Said Kyanon, pointing his hand at the injured Kochou. "Goodbye, Kochou." With that, he fired a huge flamethrower at Kochou.
"No!" Said Kochou. "It can't end this way-" The rest of what she was going to say will never be known, because at that point she was hit with the flamethrower, reducing her to nothing but a brown, crumpled up mothball, dead as a doornail.
"There goes another one." Said Kyanon. "C'mon, Wana, we still need to find Kurai!" With that, they ran onwards.
OMG! THIRTY chapters! That's a lotta chapters, ya know.
"So you are a Dark Six member, huh?" Said Kyanon as he fired another fireball, which Kochou dodged easily.
"That's right, and I'm also the person who's going to kill you!" Said Kochou with an evil laugh as she lunged towards Wana, who dodged.
"I wouldn't be talking so big." Said Wana. "Don't you know we defeated someone higher ranked then you?"
"That's not how I heard it." Said Kochou. "The report said that Jin guy defeated him, and you two couldn't do anything to him."
"Tch! She's right-" Said Kyanon under his breath as he tried firing a flamethrower, but to no avail as Kochou again moved out of the way. Wana then tried to counteract by leaping towards Kochou, but Kochou detected it and again dodged.
"That all you honestly have?" Said Kochou as she ascended back up to the dark ceiling.
"She's gonna try another sneak attack!" Realized Kyanon. He embraced for the attack, but instead Kochou tackled Wana, who had not seen it coming. Kochou cackled as she flew back up again.
"Dang it! There's no way to tell who sh'es going to attack!" Exclaimed Kyanon.
"Wait a minute, Kyanon!" Said Wana. "I think we should try 'that'!"
"Are you sure?" Said Kyanon. "We don't even know if 'that' works! It could seriously backfire!"
"There's no choice now! We have to do it!" Said Wana.
Kyanon realized she was right. "Right, then!"
Up in the shadows of the ceiling, Kochou debated who to attack next.
"Hmmm," She said. "I think I'll attack that Magmortar now." With that she dove towards him, however, he noticed his arm was getting ready for an attack.
What's this?! Kochou exclaimed in her thoughts. He knew I was going to attack him?! How could he have- Her thoughts were interuppted when Kyanon pointed his cannon arm right at her.
"Sorry," He said. "But you've run out of luck." With that, his cannon arm fired not a fireball, but instead Wana, who had put herself in his arm acting as a living cannonball. She was also glowing red from the fire that was already stored in Kyanon's arm, making her as hot as the flames herself. She collided with Kochou, who screamed in pain as she dropped to the ground, severly wounded and burned.
"When we first started battling, we couldn't attack you clearly because with your sneak attacks, we couldn't tell who you where going to strike." Explained Kyanon.
"But, if we combined ourselves, by putting me in Kyanon's arm, we both knew you would attack Kyanon." Finished Wana, beginning to cool off.
"And that's given us the upper hand in this battle." Said Kyanon, pointing his hand at the injured Kochou. "Goodbye, Kochou." With that, he fired a huge flamethrower at Kochou.
"No!" Said Kochou. "It can't end this way-" The rest of what she was going to say will never be known, because at that point she was hit with the flamethrower, reducing her to nothing but a brown, crumpled up mothball, dead as a doornail.
"There goes another one." Said Kyanon. "C'mon, Wana, we still need to find Kurai!" With that, they ran onwards.