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This all getting to be quite interesting...when u first said the LPC was after th elegendaries and each member was representing 1 type out of 17, the first thing that crossed my mind was that there was no Poison Legendary Pokemon...now i finally found out how u played it out.
 
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Nice story!! I'm hoping to see the next chapter soon!!
 
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Rickraptor77 said:
This all getting to be quite interesting...when u first said the LPC was after th elegendaries and each member was representing 1 type out of 17, the first thing that crossed my mind was that there was no Poison Legendary Pokemon...now i finally found out how u played it out.

well, thats not totally true. think about it: Arceus.

BUT! besides him, there are no POison, Bug, or Fighting type legendaries. that is why after the Kanto legendaries, i put in athena. after the johto, it was Venom. after the hoenn, i will put in the bug LPC member, Locus. i'm working on some spriting for the story, so the next chapter maynot be out till later, sorry...
 
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Athena lol.....sorry, off topic. I've been starting to read "The Odyssey" in my English class.....just gave a presentation in English earlier about Book 1.....do you even know who Athena is? Im sure you do....but why make her bad guy?
 
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Lol... It's just a name B.Ray..

Maybe that's what he thought it will be good to name it from the God of Wisdom....
 
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Black Rayquaza said:
Athena lol.....sorry, off topic. I've been starting to read "The Odyssey" in my English class.....just gave a presentation in English earlier about Book 1.....do you even know who Athena is? Im sure you do....but why make her bad guy?

you may also recognize the Ground-Type LPC's name, Demeter, and definatly the dark-type, Calypso. i needed names and the greek gods and goddesses came in handy!
 
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continuing off topic.....I know as far as I am in Oddessy, that Calypso is a fairy not a goddess.....but at least shes a bad guy. LET HIM GO YOU FAIRY!
 
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A few things.

First: Vileploom is spelled Vileplume. just saying.

Second: I knew Venom was gonna be LPC the minute i heard her name...

Third: I agree with BRay...about athena that is...now ive never read The Odessey but i have read an entire book about greek mythology and...well...there are a couple of things that in my opinion need to be set straight.

1) Demeter is the god of plants and the like...she is the reason there are seasons(pm me for more info on that).
2) Calypso takes the form of a giant mouth, sucking in and blowing out water unrelenting. She and her sister guard the entrance to the sea of monsters, you must sail in between them to enter, for if you try to go around, they just reappear in your path.
3) Athena is the god of wisdom AND is also involved in fighting. Therefore fighting is a pick if not as good as any, but better, because of that.

Lastly, I think that choosing Greek gods as namesakes was a great idea. After all, there are a lot of them, and it is a very interesting religion.
 
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....interesting i didn't realize u were using greek good/goddess' name until know...interesting choice, and very original for Pokemon

so out of curiousity when's the next chap???

and how's the spriting going???
 
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ugh......i've been so busy, i've had no time to get on the computer....the new chapter is almost done.
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!

Chapter 12: Blind as a Rock! And Ice...And Steel Too!!!!

“Alright,” said Abad, “Here’s the deal…”
The senior members of the PMC were in the meeting room, discussing the LPC problem…again.
“Here’s what we’ve determined,” said Abad, “The LPC has, for the most part, been going after the legendaries in the order of their discovery, with the exception of the egg and Ho-oh. We believe the egg was something they stumbled across, and going after Ho-oh was to tell us that they mean business.
“So, other than that, it’s quite possible the next Pokémon that they are gonna go after are Regirock, Regice, and Registeel.”
“But,” said James, “These legends aren’t as…humane as the others…”
“Basically,” said Max, “We need to defeat them in battle to earn their trust.”
“Hey!” said Jason, “I fought off Regirock once and beat him! That’s one down!”
“Not quite…every time you encounter them, you must reengage them in battle. I’ve had to fight them in both wars in order to get them on our side against the NPZ.”
“Right,” said Abad, “Now, after the last war, Max, James, and I took the Regis back to their caverns and locked them up again, so they could rest. Also, this was in case we ever needed them again, as it would be very hard to defeat all three in battle at once.
“Jay, you will go after Regirock in the desert route north of Mauville. Shadow, you will take on Regice, on the sea route between Petalburg Woods and Dewford Town. And Max, Registeel is yours, between Fortree and Lilycove. Happy battling.”

The old trio headed outside.
“So,” said Shadow, “How’s Charizard?”
“Still recovering,” said Max, “It’ll be another week or so before he’ll be good enough to battle again.”
“They’re still trying to remove all that glass in the middle of the desert,” said Jay, “It’s kind of funny.”
“Yep. Anyways, we should be flying outta here.”
“Salamence!” yelled Shadow.
“Altaria!” yelled Jay.
“Aerodactyl!” yelled Max.
They mounted their respective Pokémon, and flew off toward Hoenn. They flew together until they reached the border, then, split off into three separate directions.

Max landed in the middle of a huge downpour. Aerodactyl hated it, so Max returned him to his PokéBall.
“Go, Poliwhirl!” said Max. Max’s old friend, Poliwhirl, had come along for the ride, and loved the rain.
They walked a few hundred feet, when Poliwhirl pointed out in front of them frantically.
“What the heck?” asked Max. Their were a bunch of explorers digging around the cavern of Registeel!
Max ran up to a guy at a desk under the large tent they had set up to block the rain.
“Who do you think you are?” the man asked.
“I was going to ask the same of you,” said Max, “Do you have any idea what this place is?”
“Ancient caverns, ones that can hold many answers to the beginning of both humans and Pokémon, that is why we are exploring it.”
“And who in his right mind authorized this nonsense?”
“Lance, of course.”
“That is it!”
Max whipped out his Pokémon: Sceptile, Aggron, Aerodactyl, Feraligatr, Nidoking, Furret, Poliwhirl, and Monferno.
“What are you doing?” the man asked.
“Scrap this place,” Max ordered his Pokémon.
“You do and I’ll have you arrested! I know who you are and that is the last thing you need on your record.”
“You listen and listen good! If I don’t get rid of you now, someone else will, and trust me, it’s a lot less merciful than I am!”
“There is nothing here, and-”
A huge Zap Cannon blasted men out of the cave.
“Told ya,” Max said with a smirk.
Registeel came charging out, rampaging over anything and everything that was in his way. Once he had blasted all the men, he turned to Max.
Max turned to his Pokémon. He looked over them, analyzing who would perform to top efficiency in this match.
“Aggron, let’s go!” yelled Max. Aggron stepped forward, and Registeel made a gesture signaling that he accepted the challenge.
“Water Pulse!” yelled Max.
Registeel used Protect, and then Superpower. It hit Aggron hard.
“Alright,” said Max, “Get back in their! Dragon Claw!”
Aggron tried to Dragon Claw his opponent with both arms, and Registeel caught them both. It became a test of strength.
Then, Abad came flying in on Dragonite. He didn’t want to miss a battle like this.
“Wow,” said Abad, “It’s cool to see Pokémon do this.”
“Yeah,” said Max, “With all the moves Pokémon have learned, none of them ever do stuff like this anymore.”
The two Steel Type Pokémon were evenly matched, but Aggron had one advantage.
His fellow Pokémon that were still out began cheering him on, and it seemed as though the cheering was giving him more strength.
With that, Aggron began pushing Registeel to the ground. When the legend fell, it was not KOed, but it accepted defeat. In the Pokémon world, a Pokémon took a loss to the test of strength as a defeat.
Max was now able to approach Registeel for the third time that he had defeated him. Abad had a phone call, so Max proceeded with what had become somewhat of a process.
“Registeel,” said Max kindly, “The other Pokémon like you are in danger, we need you to come with us so that nothing happens to you, will you come with me?”
Registeel stood up and kneeled, a sign of respect. Then, Abad yelled, “Max! I just got word from Jay, right after he and Shadow beat Regirock an Regice, the LPC came in and captured them!”
“Then that would mean…” said Max.
Suddenly, Registeel shot into the air, and became attached to a giant magnet hanging from a jet. Then, from the bushes came a man wearing a ton of metal jewelry.
“Name’s Spike,” said Spike, “Thanks for beating Registeel for me.”
“Let him go!” said Max.
“You’d like that, wouldn’t you? But you see, I’m not as weak as the rest of my family.”
“Really?” asked Abad.
“Care to test that theory?” asked Max.
“Actually,” said Spike, “No. You see, I have what I want, and I have no need to fight for it…go Skarmory!”
He mounted his Pokémon and flew off after the jet.

Back at HQ…
“They are always one step ahead!” yelled Abad in frustration.
“But look who always comes out on top,” said James.
“True…but by now, they have to be at their own headquarters…and we have no idea where that is…”
“Or do we?” asked Ricky.
“What are you talking about?”
“Remember my invention? All I need is a piece of the brail tablet that tells you how to unlock one of their caverns.”
“Unfortunately,” said Max, “It’s deep underwater in the middle of a strong ocean current.”
“Are you forgetting the horde of legendaries in our basement?” asked James, “I’m sure that Lugia would be more than happy to help.”

Max and Shadow flew to the middle of the route between Slateport and Pacifilog, where Lugia dropped them off on a small island.
“Just remove one of the stone tablets,” Max told the giant Pokémon, “It’s all we need.”
“Of course,” replied Lugia.
The Pokémon dove into the sea. After about a half hour, Lugia rose to the surface, carefully cradling a stone tablet in his mouth.

Back at the HQ, they saw the duo riding back on Lugia.
Ricky’s machine was all set to go, and Max and Shadow placed the tablet inside of it.
“No,” said Jay.
“It can’t be…” said Jason.
“Are you sure about that?” asked James.
“Double check,” said Max.
“There is nothing wrong with it, I just tested it fifteen minutes ago!” exclaimed Ricky.
“Max, Jay and Shadow,” said Abad, “You’re going to…Pallet Town?”

They rode on Max’s Aerodactyl, and Jay said, “I still don’t believe it.”
“How on earth could they get away in a quite town like that?” asked Shadow.
“One word,” said Max, “Evil: can pretty much get away with anything right under peoples’ noses.”
“Sounds like you.”

They landed in Pallet Town, the place Max had over the years learned to call home.
Delia ran out of her house with her Mr. Mime to greet Max and his friends. Max gave his aunt a hug, and then Ash came running out with his Pikachu.
“Max!” said Ash, “What brings you guys here?”
“The Legendary Pokémon Clan,” said Shadow.
“They captured the Regis,” said Jay.
“And you think they are in Pallet?” asked Delia.
“We don’t think,” said Max, “We know.”
“Well, in that case,” said Ash, “I’m coming with you guys!”

With Max’s cousin, the gang began looking for clues around town.
Their search finally led them to Oak’s lab. Oak allowed them to look around without question, though he did find it strange that they thought the base was under his land.
All of Max’s and Ash’s were their, and they were delighted to see them.
“Espeon!” yelled Max. He had left his Espeon here to help Oak and Tracy out years ago.
“Wait a minute,” said Ash, “Is this the same little Eevee you gave Mom?”
“Yep, when he evolved, she sent him to me for training. Became an asset to my team when I took on the Hoenn Region.”
“Well,” said Shadow, “A Psychic-Type is just what we need right now!”
“Yeah,” said Jay, “Can Espeon find any hidden entrances?”
“Espeon,” said Max, “Have you seen anyone coming around here lately?”
Espeon ran off in the other direction.
“I’ll take that as a yes!” said Ash. The gang followed.

Espeon took them to the outskirts of town. Then, Max’s PokéGear rang.
“Max, it’s Ricky,” said Ricky, “They appear to be on the move toward Celadon, but, we have our choppers out and they can’t find anything, it must be underground…”
“Yeah,” said Max, “We’re on it!”
He hung up.
“Max!” exclaimed Jay.
Their was a ton of brush, and they couldn’t get through.
“Go Sceptile!” Ask and Max said at the same time, “Fury Cutter!”
Both Sceptiles destroyed the think brush, and revealed a tunnel.
“So,” said Jay, “Who wants to go down the creepy tunnel first?”
Max sent out Monferno, whose tail lit the way for them.
After hours of walking, they realized they were walking in water, and Monferno climbed onto Max’s shoulder.
“Hm…” said Max, “According to my PokéNav, we are under Celadon, which means we must be close to the small pond in Celadon, which also means we are near the old Rocket base.”
“Look up there!” yelled Ash. It was a door.
“Can we open it? Asked Shadow.
Jay tried to open it with his bear hands, but to no avail.
“When it won’t go willingly,” said Max.
“You force it!” yelled Jay, “Machamp!”
“Nidoking!”
“Open that door guys!”
The two powerhouses attacked the door. First, Machamp used a quadruple Dynamic Punch. Then, when he bounced off, Nidoking used Iron Tail.
Machamp next used a Fire Blast, followed by Nidoking using Water Pulse.
Machamp then Mega Punched the control panel, and it opened. Then, Nidoking zapped it with his Thunder attack.
The door slid open.
“Your Nidoking just keeps getting stronger,” said Ash.
“Thanks,” said Max, “But this is no time for flattery. Let’s go.”

They walked into the old Rocket hideout, the one beneath the Game Corner in Celadon City.
Instantly, they were attacked by the three Regis using Zap Cannon!
Machamp threw Nidoking in the way, who took the attack with zero damage.
“What’s gotten into them?” asked Jay.
“Look!” said Shadow, “They’re Shadow Pokémon!”
“What?” asked Jay.
“What’s a Shadow Pokémon?” asked Ash.
As Max took out his Shadow Pokémon ID, which covered his right eye, he said, “Pokémon whose hearts have been artificially closed…however, this will be very easy!”
“You wanna bet?” said Frost, who stood behind Regice.
“C’mon cousins!” said a guy dressed in mining gear.
“You got it Clay!” said Spike.
“Zap Cannon!” they yelled together.
“Go Jolteon!” yelled Shadow.
“Starmie!” yelled Jay.
“Pikachu!” yelled Ash.
“Furret!” yelled Max, “All of you! Take that energy and reverse it into a Thunder!”
The Pokémon listened without hesitation. They blasted the Regis hard.
“Use Blizzard!” yelled Frost.
Regice targeted Jolteon, and Max yelled, “Flamethrower!”
Furret melted the blizzard, then Jay yelled, “Hydro Pump!”
He blasted Regirock.
“Volt Tackle!” yelled Ash.
Pikachu began using Quick Attack, which became very fast and then he burst into electric bolts, slamming Regice.
“Jolteon!” yelled Shadow.
“Furret!” yelled Max.
“Metronome!” they yelled together.
They both got a Blast Burn that pulverized Registeel.
“Now!” yelled Shadow.
Max pressed a button on his PokéGear, and the infamous Snag Machine cloaked his left arm.
“Snag Balls!” yelled Max, “Go!”
He threw three Master “Snag” Balls at the Regis and caught them.
“Hm…” said Max with a smirk, “And to think Spike said he was stronger than everyone else…”
“You said what?” exclaimed Clay.
“You haven’t don half the work the rest of us have!” yelled Frost.
“Shut your mouths before I beat you two bird brains senseless!” screamed Spike.
“At least we HAVE brains to beat!” yelled Clay.
As they argued, Jolteon, Pikachu, and Furret each picked up a Master Ball and brought it to Max.
“Let’s get outta here,” said Ash.
“Agreed,” said Max.

They used Aerodactyl to fly to Pallet, where they dropped Ash and his Pikachu off. Then, the gang flew to the HQ…

Max was following Abad carrying the Master Balls which contained the Shadow Regis. They arrived at the vault, and Abad entered the code. The doors hissed as they slowly open, and they were greeted by all the legendaries residing with them; Celebi flew up to them.
“Here we go again,” said Max, “Regice, Regirock, Registeel, go!”
Once out of their Master Balls, Celebi purified them, and then Max took the Master Balls to Mewtwo, who obliterated them.
“Three more safe,” said Abad.
“And still plenty out there…” said Max.

They went to their rooms, and were about to settle in for the night. Then, the alarm rang. This was a different alarm; one that was in every room for people to push if they were in trouble.
Max rushed into the halls, Jay close behind. The panels on the walls showed arrows pointing to Shadow’s room.
The door was locked, but they weren't gonna let that stop them!
“Aggron!” yelled Max, “Metal Burst!”
Aggron decimated the door, and inside was Shadow, asleep and tossing and turning, screaming…she must’ve pressed the alarm in her sleep!
Jay rushed to her and grabbed her, shaking her to wake her up; she had broken into a sweat, and Jay said, “What? What did you see?”
“They’re at Eon Island!” she exclaimed in tears.
Abad and James ran in, followed by Ricky and Jason, all of them were concerned.
Max walked up to Abad, “They going after Latios and Latias…I don’t think Shadow should go with us, she’s a wreck…try to calm her down, me and Jay will go.”
“Be careful,” said Abad.
“Are you sure we should leave her?” asked Jay.
“Don’t worry!” said James, “We’ll handle her, but hurry! The LPC waits for no one!”
With that, in the dark and rain, Max and Jay set off towards the south on Aerodactyl, who at this point was tired. They saw the SS Tidal heading toward the island they were going to, and landed, where they were welcomed with open arms to help protect the Eon Pokémon.


COMMENTS!!!!!!!!

Also, my spriting is going well. i'm just making the trainer cards....all 25 of them. i'll finish those and then start the next chapter!
 
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Rock ON!!!

I wish the next chapter comes fast now ;)

I love this story!
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!

Anyways, the new chapter is coming ASAP, so be on the lookout!
 
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Chapter 13: To Eon Island!

Still on board the SS Tidal, Max and Jay ran into one of Max’s old friends from Hoenn, Mr. Briney.
“Ahoy!” he yelled, though it was late, everyone was still up, so his booming voice made little impact.
“Briney!” yelled Max, “Why are you headed to Eon Island?”
“Well I’ll tell ye’” he said, “About a week ago, while the Tidal was out on a cruise, we spotted a submarine heading this way. Well, I could not recall a sub mission scheduled for a month or so, so I called up Captain Stern.
“Stern said that some guy in a royal blue cape and white hair had stolen his sub, and was babbling about legendary Eon Pokémon. While the captain didn’t understand, I sure did! There was no way I’d let anything happen to the Eon Pokémon.”
“Captain!” said his first mate, “We’ve arrived on Eon Island! And, there are news crews here! Apparently, Latios and Latias are in some kind of force field!”
“My god! Max, Jay! Make haste!”
With the aid of Jay’s Charizard, Max and Jay flew to where the news crews were.
Then, a helicopter roared from above, and it belonged to Psych…again.
“Now!” said a man’s voice over the loudspeaker, but it wasn’t Psych, “Let me show you how it’s done, son!”
The man in the cape who Briney had mentioned flew down on a Salamence with a Flygon and a Dragonite at his side.
“Go Sceptile!” yelled Max.
“Altaria, I choose you!” yelled Jay.
Sceptile mounted Jay’s Charizard, and then the trio of Pokémon took to the air for combat.
“May I?” asked Max.
“Be my guest,” said Jay.
“Dragon Seed!”
Sceptile launched a slew of Bullet Seeds, and then Charizard used Dragon Rage to ignite them into a super-effective hit! But, the Dragon-Type’s seemed unfazed.
“Haha!” yelled the man, “Feel the wrath of Whiro! The ultimate Dragon Trainer!”
“Chump!” yelled Max, “Rather than imprison the Eon Pokémon, why not engage them in battle? Then, at least you can show your worth!”
“I was waiting for you to say that!” yelled Whiro.
He released Latios and Latias, and they attacked Max!
“Gadgets are my sons specialty!” he exclaimed.
“Great…” said Jay, “This dope is Psych’s daddy…”
“Joy…” said Max.
Charizard swooped down and as Max returned Sceptile, Jay hopped on, and Max got onto Altaria.
“After them my Eon Pokémon!” yelled Whiro.
The eon Pokémon attacked with great force, leaving Max and Jay only enough time to dodge, not attack…

Back at the HQ…
“ABAD!!!!!” yelled James as he rushed into the Pokémon Center they had, where Shadow was calming down by sitting with Max’s Charizard.
“What?” asked Abad in a panic.
“Turn on channel four!” he yelled.
Abad did so, and saw that a special news report was on. After five minutes, they found Jay and Max being attacked by Latios and Latias!

On Eon Island…
“Dragonbreath!” yelled Max, who Altaria was now listening to.
Altaria tried, but he had to evade a deadly Luster Purge by Latios.
They kept getting higher in the sky, until they were high above the clear, starry sky.
Whiro flew up on his mighty Pokémon, and said, “The great Ultimate Champs…are defeated…DESTROY THEM!”
They released a massive Psycho Boost, and hit Max dead on!
“Max!” yelled Jay.
Altaria was returned, since he went soaring in the opposite direction. Jay tried to fly down to catch his friend, but the Eon Pokémon shot Ice Beams and Thunderbolts at him.
Max, falling at an intensely high speed, heard a mighty roar. No less than ten feet from certain death, Max’s Charizard flew in and, spinning through the air, caught Max in his claws.
“Great catch!” yelled Shadow, who was standing on the ground.
Max rolled onto his companion’s back, and before he knew it, Shadow and her Salamence had flown ahead to help Jay; Max and Charizard followed suit.
Max could tell that Charizard’s wing hadn’t fully healed, as he could feel Charizard flying slower.
“Alright Salamence!” yelled Shadow, “Go after that helicopter!”
Shadow and Salamence flew to the copter and she jumped in, grabbing Psych by the collar.
“Release them NOW!” she screamed.
“Give me one good reason!” yelled Psych.
Shadow threw him out of the copter one-hundred feet to the ground.
Latias and Latios went to both sides of the copter, and prepared to attack.
Then, Shadow’s eyes began to glow, and she sent out some kind of psychic wave from her body, which sent Latios and Latias flying, the copter began to spark.
A small explosion sent her flying out of the copter, and she was caught by Latios!
The burst Shadow sent out had snapped Latios and Latias back into reality!
Whiro and Psych were now on the ground with a Garchomp and Alakazam ready to fight. Max had landed with Jay, and as Jay readied to attack, Max held up his hand. This wasn’t their fight anymore.
“Flamethrower!” yelled Whiro.
“Ice Punch!” yelled Psych.
“Latios Protect!” yelled Shadow, “Latias, Psychic!”
They knocked the opponents down, but not out.
“Latias, use Dragonbreath!”
Latias decimated them.
“Latios, Psychic!”
Latios launched the opponents and their trainers into the air.
“Dragon Pulse!”
Both shot out a deadly pulse that sent them crashing to the ground.
“Draco Meteor!” she yelled.
She hopped off of Latios and onto Salamence, but then, Latios and Latias surrounded in green flames tackled the opponents and sent them flying into the southern seas.
Shadow and her “parents” landed, and she hugged them both.
“If there is one strong bond,” said Jay, “It’s fami-” Max walked away, “Ily….”
“Where’s Max?” asked Shadow, “…What did you say this time?”
They saw Max on Aerodactyl flying back to the headquarters and followed.

When they landed, what they saw was not what they expected…
“It’s underwater!” yelled Shadow.
The whole PMC HQ was flooded, as were surrounding cities.
It was extremely bright, then, it down poured so hard that they were knocked into the water!
They returned their now useless flying Pokémon, and Max sent out Feraligatr, and they all held onto him for dear life.
Then, Suicune and Mewtwo came to their rescue. They took them underwater, and they opened a door to the HQ, but it was sealed off inside. Max pushed a button, and the door closed and the water drained out. Luckily, they were well prepared for a flood like this.

Once inside, Max went into Abad’s office drenched, and said, “What’s going on here?”
“Well,” said Abad, “It began raining heavily out of nowhere, so James went to investigate. He believed it was Kyogre. I doubted it at first, but, here we are. I need you to go find him and assist him.”
Max returned to the water with his Feraligatr, and they set off towards the last known locations of Kyogre, the monstrous Water Legendary Pokémon that once nearly destroyed the earth.
 
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Cool story.. I like the part where the Latis snapped out and defeated Psych and Whiro...

Can't wait for the next chapter
 
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Lol.. Wait for the next chapter!!!
Don't get too cocky?

So will Jason be in the next mission/chapter?
 
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Chapter 14: Two Bigger Things to Worry About Than the LPC!

Max had been traveling for hours, and had lost his way. Then, he heard a Pokémon swimming very fast. He looked ahead and saw James riding his Blastoise!
Max returned Feraligatr and joined his friend on Blastoise.
“Max! Great to see you!” said James.
“The feeling is mutual,” said Max, “Where are we?”
“If my map I’ve kept is correct, we are southeast of Lilycove, near Sootopolis City. This is the last recorded location of Kyogre.”
“That’s where Abad said you were heading…so now what?”
“We go down.”
“But we have no idea how far deep this flood is, and then, we also have to add on the additional water already there!”
“No worries my friend! After all, we have brains on our side!”
He sent out his Metagross who created a psychic bubble around them. They dove into the depths of the unknown.

After a half hour, they still had yet to reach the bottom, where Kyogre dwelled.
“James!” yelled Max. Metagross was tired, and the constantly increasing pressure of the water was beginning to win him over.
The bubble burst, and then, holding their breaths, the trainers tried to reach the surface, but it was still a long way up.
Then, they felt a giant earthquake! A fissure must’ve opened in the ground, because now, they were being sucked downwards!
Using Blastoise and Feraligatr, Max and James were able to keep in one place as the water finally drained, and they could breath.
“What is going on?” asked Max.
“It must be Groudon!” yelled James, “It’s worse than I thought!”
“What is?”
“I simply thought that it was Kyogre, but now I realize, the two must be at war again!”
Then, from the ocean to the east and Mt. Pyre to the west, raised Kyogre and Groudon, the titan like Pokémon who would soon cause destruction on the earth!
“James, I hope you have a plan!” said Max.
“As a matter of fact, I do!” yelled James, “Go Flygon!”
Max sent out Charizard, and he followed James to Mount Pyre.
Groudon, however, wasn’t in a very kind mood, and Max and James were forced to dodge a massive Eruption attack by the behemoth.
“James,” said Max, “Have I ever told you?”
“Told me what?” he asked.
“HOW CRAZY YOU ARE!!!!”
“Preaching to the choir!”
Max rolled his eyes. He had only seen James like this once before, back when he met him in the war. Whenever severe danger was near, James became loud and more impulsive. It was a side that Max actually enjoyed watching.

They landed on the top of Pyre, and their was the old couple who guarded the Red and Blue Orbs.
“Where are they?” asked James.
“The LPC took them!” said the old man.
“One was named Aqua, and the other Demeter…both girls,” said the old woman.
“Let me guess,” said James, “They thought the Blue Orb would control Groudon, and the Red Orb would control Kyogre?”
They nodded.
“You know,” said Max, “I don’t get what’s so hard about Blue Orb controls the blue Pokémon and the red one controls the red Pokémon…”
“Well,” said James, “We know this: Aqua went to the sea, and Demeter must be close. Seeing as my Flygon is less susceptible to water, I will give chase to Aqua, and you and Charizard should find Demeter.”
“Got it!” said Max.
The duo turned around and then were blasted with a Blastoise’s Hydro Pump!
“Nice shot cuz!” said a girl, who was obviously Demeter.
“Thanks,” said Aqua, “Now Blastoise, Hydro Cannon!”
“Piloswine, use Blizzard!” Demeter yelled as she sent out her own Pokémon.
Just as the attacks KOed Charizard and Flygon, Nidoking and Tyranitar popped out on their own, ready to fight.
“You two must be some kind of stupid to send out more Pokémon weak against us!” yelled Demeter.
“Fire Blast!” yelled Max.
“Thunder!” yelled James.
Piloswine was knocked out with Fire Blast while Blastoise was shocked by Thunder.
“You were saying?” asked James.
“Where are the orbs?” asked Max.
“Like we’ll ever tell you!” said Aqua.
Then, a helicopter came down to pick them up, and they flew off, and Max and James were without fliers, as they were just knocked out.

Max and James ran to the bottom of the mountain, and Groudon and Kyogre were still at it.
“Go Blastoise!” yelled James.
“Feraligatr, c’mon out!” yelled Max.
“We need to get to the Sky Pillar, only Rayquaza can stop them without the orbs!”
“Right…it might be safer if we stay underwater as much as possible.”
“Good idea.”

Going under for several minutes and then coming up for a quick breath and repeating, Max and James made their way to the legendary Rayquaza’s lair.
They returned their Water-Type Pokémon, and James sent out his Metagross.
“Hop on!” he said to Max.
Metagross levitated the duo to the top, and their was Rayquaza, but he was fighting with his younger, black-colored brother!
And, Abad was there leading the special colored one in the battle!
“Abad,” said James, “What’s going on?”
“A third orb!” yelled Abad, “Whiro and Harpie found the Green Orb and have taken control of this Rayquaza!”
Then, Abad yelled, “Watch out Rekkuza!”
Rekuzza was Abad’s nickname for the black Rayquaza, and the regular Rayquaza knocked him off the pillar, hard.
“Lizardon!” Max yelled.
Lizardon came out of nowhere and caught the legendary Pokémon in mid-air.
“Let’s get out of here!” yelled James.


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