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Nercinator said:
Great chapters Max. I hope to see more soon.

Well there will be more soon! i'm on a role now that the PMC is in Sinnoh! BTW: in case you all didnt notice, the name is now MAx Shade IV, not MPM.

not sure what i'm doing for my next story, i've been juggling some ideas around, i'll talk to some people, see the feedback i get.
 
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Tomorrow i hope to get up chapter 19. i've got to take my g/f out in the morning, then i have a Toby Keith concert in the evening/night. so somewhere between there, i'll try to get it up! (its half done!)

-Max
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen! CHAPTER 18 POSTED!!!!! Chapter 19 underway!!!!!!!

hopefully youll get a new chapter up soon, just go as fast as you can!
nice chapters btw.
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen! CHAPTER 19 POSTED!!!!! Chapter 20 underway!!!!!!!

Chapter 19: The Three Beings!

After a couple of weeks, the old Galactic building was now the home of the PMC!
With the Manaphy egg safely locked away, Abad, James, and Max discussed how to go about finding the mythical legendary Pokémon of Sinnoh.
“Well,” said Max, who along with James was summoned to Abad’s office, “What have got?”
“Well,” said Abad, “I talked to Professor Rowan, the Sinnoh Pokémon Professor. He told me a legend about the three lakes of Sinnoh: Lake Acuity, Variety, and Valor. Apparently, he claims not only there are a trio of Psychic-Type legendary Pokémon; one at each lake; but he says he has witnessed these Pokémon with his own two eyes!”
“Sounds like the perfect place to start!” said James.
“Yep! James, I want you to assign a few senior members to this mission. We’ve never encountered these Pokémon before, so we have to prepared and try to negotiate with them.”
“Got it!” said James.

James first asked Max, who gladly agreed. Next, he went to see Ricky.
“Ricky!” said James, “How’s it going?”
“Good,” said Ricky, “I contacted a library in a port city here called Canalave. They sent over every book they had on Sinnoh mythology, so I’ve been brushing up on some of the myths.”
“Good; so how much do you know about the Psychic trio of the three lakes?”
“A lot! They are the most commonly seen, so it was quite easy to find out information on them!”
“Good, then you’ll accompany Max on a mission to retrieve them?”
“You bet!”

Next, James went to see Jay. He was at the pool they had built letting his Starmie train.
“Hey, James,” said Jay, “Can I help you with something?”
“Yes you can!” said James, “I need you to help Max and Ricky on a mission. They are going after some Psychic-Type legendaries, and I feel your Starmie may be able to help, since it is half Psychic.”
“No problem! When do we head out?”
“Tomorrow; pack up any gear and supplies you’ve got, and if you’re short on anything, don’t hesitate to go to our storage house.”
“You got it!”

The next morning, the trio headed out. Their first lake, Lake Acuity, was located in a cold climate in the north. They would make a base in Snowpoint City, just east of the lake.
They rented a hotel room, the best in the building!
“How’d you afford that?” ask Jay.
“Abad’s credit card,” said Max with a smirk, “Duh!”
The gang laughed, and headed to their rooms.

“Okay,” said Ricky, “From what I’ve read, Lake Acuity is home to Uxie, the first of the ‘pixie’ trio.”
“ ‘Pixie’ ?” asked Jay.
“Yeah, the trio resembles pixies according to the locals of the surrounding areas of the lakes.”
“Now,” said Max, “Where in the lakes are they? Please tell me it’s ABOVE water!”
“You’re in luck! They are located in an island in the center of each lake.”
“YES!” exclaimed Max with joy as the others looked at him with a strange glance, “What? I’m tired of the underwater deal, okay?”
Jay and Ricky laughed hysterically at him.

Geared up and warmly clothed, the gang went into the extreme cold to find the entrance to the lake.
“This is a bad blizzard, man!” yelled Jay.
“No!” yelled Ricky over the blizzard, “According to the locals, this is a mild one!”
“Here!” yelled Max.
In the thick forest was an opening, and the gang entered it. Inside, the dense trees gave protection from the blizzard, making it a light snow.
“So,” said Ricky, “This is Lake Acuity.”
In the center of the massive clearing was a lake, and the waters of which were crystal clear.
“There’s the island!” said Jay, “Go Starmie!”
Starmie jumped into the water, and then right back out!
“We’re in the middle of an arctic region,” said Ricky, “Staryu and Starmie are found on beaches.”
“So?” said Jay.
“They can’t stand freezing waters.”
“We’ll fly over on Aerodactyl,” said Max.
After a short flight over, the gang entered the cavern in the island.
“Okay,” said Ricky as they walked through the tunnel, “Uxie is one of the more dangerous ones. Its eyes are always closed, because anyone who looks into them will have their memories erased.”
“Meaning?” asked Max.
“If he opens his eyes, close yours.”
Then the tunnel expanded into a huge room, and, in the center, floated a tiny, yellow and grey Pokémon.
“It’s Uxie,” said Ricky.
“Okay, then,” said Max, “Let’s see if Starmie can communicate with it.”
Starmie approach Uxie with caution, and its gem began to glow and blink in different patterns.
Uxie, eyes still closed, turned toward Jay’s Pokémon. It began to say something in PokéTalk, and the two Pokémon conversed for about ten minutes.
“Well?” Jay asked his Starmie.
Starmie gave a positive response.
“Ask if it can summon Mespirit and Azelf, his counterparts,” said Ricky.
Starmie asked, and Uxie began to concentrate. About twenty minutes later, two more Pokémon that resembled Uxie came flying in. Their eyes were open, and one was pink while the other, blue.
They began to fly around with Uxie playfully, and the gang knew these guys would be no trouble. They approached Max, and sat on his head and shoulders.
“Um,” said Max, “This was pretty easy, huh?”
KA-BOOOOOOM!!!!
“You wish!” yelled Psych as his Alakazam blew a hole in the top of the cavern.
“THAT IS IT!!!!” yelled Jay, “You! Me! One-on-one! Your Alakazam versus my Starmie!”
“Jay,” said Max, “Take it down a notch.”
“NO! I’ve had it with this punk, and I’m gonna kick his sorry PokéButt from here to yesterday!! Thunder Spin!”
Starmie flew threw the air using Rapid Spin, then became electrified with his Thunderbolt attack!
“Light Screen!” yelled Psych, whose Alakazam blocked the attack.
“Get up close with Giga Impact!” yelled Jay.
“Barrier!” yelled Psych.
“HYDRO PUMP!” yelled Jay.
Alakazam, bracing for a physical attack, suddenly got hit with a Hydro Pump, sending him flying.
“Thunder!” yelled Jay.
Starmie summoned a giant thunderbolt and sent Psych flying.
“Note to self:” said Ricky, “Talk to Abad about an anger management program.”
“I do NOT have anger problems!” yelled Jay.
“Yeah,” said Max, “First, it was, ‘MPM!!!! WHY?!?!?!??’ during the Ultimate Tournament, and you saying you weren’t crazy, then its anger….”
“….”
“Exactly.”

Back at base…
“Um…” said Abad, “Jay needs to learn how deal with his anger on his OWN time, not mine…how’d the mission go?”
“Easier than usual,” said Max, “We were able to get Uxie to summon Azelf and Mespirit, and then thanks to Jay’s anger problem, Psych was gone in two seconds.”
“Good…the next mission is the three of us.”
“Sweet!” said James, “What Pokémon is it we’re going after?”
“Dialga and Palkia, keepers of time and space.”
Max and James looked at each other, at Abad, and then back at each other, and ran.
“Cowards!” yelled Abad.


comments are appreciated!
 
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Yay, but what did they do with Uxie and Azelf and Mespirit???

can't wait for chap 20, have it up soon...
 
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nice... i've noticed that apart from me, only nercinator and rickraptor have been posting here...they're both in the story...coincidence? i golly well hope so. nice chapter. Oh yeah. that bug guy. weevil from yugioh? not gonna say anytink else.

QUICK BALLS FTW!!!!
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen! CHAPTER 19 POSTED!!!!! Chapter 20 underway!!!!!!!

Wow. Jay has some issues now. Good to see him developing. Keep up the good work Max.
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen! CHAPTER 19 POSTED!!!!! Chapter 20 underway!!!!!!!

Nercinator said:
Wow. Jay has some issues now. Good to see him developing. Keep up the good work Max.

Well, he can't yell at MPM anymore, lol....but no, Locus is not based on Weevil from Yu-gi-oh, however, you may see some resemblances, but that is all coinsidence.

Chapter 20 is underway!

-Max Shade: Over and Out!
 
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If the following people could contact me, it would be appreciated:

Borcay_Jason
BlackRayquaza
James
NErcinator
ShadowSong
RickRaptor

please use the following:

AIM: Nightshade0004
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or, if you don't have these, p/m or email me at [email protected]
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen! CHAPTER 19 POSTED!!!!! Chapter 20 underway!!!!!!!

Chapter 20: Breaking the Time-Space Continuum!

“You, are, CRAZY!” yelled James to Abad.
“We have to and you know it!” Abad yelled back.
“Look, man,” said Max, “We’ve dealt with Pokémon of the elements, we’ve even handled the ones who made and shaped the earth, but NEVER to ones who hold reality in place!”
“What about Celebi?”
“A cute, nature loving Pokémon who just happens to time-travel, not a huge giant Dragon-Type behemoth!”
“Look, we’re not totally defenseless. We both brought our Mews, Rekkuza is nearby, and Mewtwo is on call along with the birds and other flyers.
“Mew and Mewtwo are great, but against the guys who made their existence?” asked James.
“I never said this was an easy job, why else would I pick us three?”
“He’s got a point,” said Max, “We’ve gotten outta some crazy situations before…what makes this different?”
“I’ll tell you what!” yelled Ricky as he barged into Abad’s office, “Two giant, crazy Pokémon who’ve been asleep for who knows how long! Dialga is a Dragon-Steel type, giving him almost NO weak points, and Palkia is Dragon-Water, and has the same issues. A few years ago, the leader of Team Galactic, Cyrus, awoke these guys, and was almost KILLED, along with Rowan and a few of his pupils.”
“Look,” said Abad, “With all respect towards the professor, he is a researcher, we are trainers with over a decade of experience each! For instance, they said it was impossible to catch the legendaries, and look at me, two of them! And Max’s dad caught a Mew as well. And on top of that, Max has control over most legendaries, though we’re still figuring out why.”
“Look, I’ve taken everything you’ve said into consideration, and even at that, you’re chances of success are slim-to-none, and your chances of living are even worse.”
“You know Abad,” said Max with doubt in his voice. Ricky smiled as one of his leaders saw some logic for once.
Max continued, “None of us have ever faced those odds….LET’S DO THIS!”

With a very angry Ricky (and Lindsey wasn’t too thrilled either), the leaders set off toward a town to the north called Celestic Town, where it is said there is a shine to the Pokémon of time and space.
Their first order of business was with the elder of the town.
“Ah,” she said, “You’ve come looking for the ancient deities.”
“You see Dialga and Palkia as some kind of gods?” asked James.
“In a way, they are…you see, it is said that back before time and space there was nothing, only emptiness. From the emptiness was born Dialga and Palkia, time and space. The key to awakening them is…”
“What?” asked Abad, anxiously.
“Can’t tell you!”
“What?” asked Max.
“Look, the last time someone awoke the deities almost caused a rift in the time-space continuum; since then, all books on their awakening have be burned…even I don’t know…in fact, the only person who researched it enough to know was…Cyrus.”

The gang headed towards Veilstone, disappointed.
“So,” said Max, “All we gotta do is find a man whose been missing for half-a-decade and convince him to put the world into peril again…shouldn’t be too hard, huh?”
“And where do you suggest we start?” asked James, “After five years, he could be anywhere in the world!”
Abad flipped open his phone and called the headquarters. Dialing an extension, the voice on the other end said, “PMC lab department; this is Ricky speaking, how can I help you?”
“Ricky?” replied Abad, “It’s me. Run a background check on Cyrus, former leader of Team Galactic. I want to know everything from the time of his birth to his disappearance by the time we get back, understood?”
“You got it boss!”
They hung up.

Back at the base, the leaders walked in the front door and Ricky met them, with a stack of papers.
“Give me a summary,” said Abad.
“Well, Cyrus was born in Sunyshore, where he learned to love Pokémon, and, well, long story short, went crazy and wanted to awaken Dialga and Palkia to create his own perfect little world. Need I say more?”
“No, actually, you could’ve stop after his birth town,” said Max.
“Why?” asked James.
“When you screw up really bad, nowhere in the world feels safer than home.”
“Well let’s go!” said Abad.
“Let me handle this part solo,” said Max, “I know what he’s been through.”
Max walked out of the building, hopped onto his Charizard, and flew off.

Max landed in Sunyshore, and after talking to a few people around the town, he found where Cyrus was.
He approached the door with caution, and knocked.
A blond haired man opened the door, and said, “Do I know you?”
“No,” replied Max, “But I’ve heard of you, Cyrus.”
“What do you want? I just want to be left alone.”
“Can I talk to you? I’m Max Shade, you know, founder of the great Pokémon NPZ wars, which I started.”
“You’ve got five minutes.”
Max entered and Cyrus directed him to the couch as he sat in a chair across form Max.
“Look, I know what it’s like to screw up. I’ve done it a lot of times, but, every time I got up and did something to fix it.”
“How do I undo what I did? I can’t.”
“Nothing happened. And if you still feel bad, there is one last shot you have to make it up.”
“How so?”
“How do I awaken Dialga and Palkia?”
“You are as crazy as I was if you think I’m telling anyone that.”
“Look, I’m with the PMC. We have to get to the legendary Pokémon before the LPC, who wants to take over the world with the legendaries’ powers. And if they get to Dialga and Palkia first, we’re all doomed.”
Cyrus hesitated, and went into a closet. He got a box down off the top shelf, and brought it to Max.
As he opened it, he said, “This is the Red Chain. Using a machine I invented, I forced Uxie, Mespirit, and Azelf to re-create it. Take it to the alter on the top of Mount Coronet…there, you will encounter the beings of time and space…but I warn you, they are NOT the run-of-the-mill legends…for your own safety and the world’s, decide carefully if you truly want to do this.”
Max, with the Red Chain secured around his neck, he left for the base.

“Man’s depressed,” said Max, “But he gave me the key.”
“Alright!” said Abad, “Let’s go!”
Riding on Max’s Aerodactyl, they began a quick assent of Mount Coronet. But, as the altitude rose, the temperature dropped, forcing Aerodactyl to land.
“Return!” said Max, “We’ll have to continue on foot.”
After hours of wandering around in a blizzard, they finally approached a stairwell, and began to climb it. As they climbed, the blizzard halted, and the cold disappeared.
“This is it,” said Max.
“Where do we put the Red Chain?” asked Abad.
“Look!” said James.
They approached a stand in the middle of the large temple, and found on it two orbs.
“Ricky told me about these,” he continued, “The Adamant and Lustrous Orbs. The Adamant raised the power of Dialga, and the Lustrous for Palkia. He said if they get a hold of these items, there is no stopping them!”
“Well,” said Abad, “I’ll take the Lustrous, James, take the Adamant. We’ll keep them from them at all costs.”
“Got it!”
“Max, do the honors.”
Max approached the alter, and unhooked the Red Chain from his neck.
“Let’s rock,” said Max under his breath as he placed the mythical item onto the alter.
The chain began to glow, and rifts in the time-space continuum began to form, and the two monstrosities emerged from the rifts!
James’ throat went dry. Max gulped. Abad began to shake. They were huge, and they were staring at each other.
“Maybe they aren’t as hostile anymore?” asked Max.
Then, they attacked each other!
“Or maybe not!” yelled Abad, “Run!!!!”
“Lizardon!” Max called out as he and he comrades jumped off the mountain.
The black dragon caught Max and Abad on his back and James in his claws.
“Okay,” said Max, “We’re going to have to stop them and fast!”
“How?” asked Abad.
“Brute force looks like child’s play here!” said James.
Suddenly, two blasts, one from each Pokémon, shot at the gang! Lizardon quickly maneuvered around them, but, the blasts left behind time rifts and space rifts.
“I didn’t think it was true,” said Abad.
“What?” asked Max.
“Roar of Time and Spacial Rand… the moves were thought to be folk tales.”
“So,” said James, “These guys will either send us to another time or even worse, another dimension?”
“Possibly…”
“You kids are hopeless!” yelled a man who came out of the rift on a Ho-oh.
“Dad?!?” asked Max.
“Use Sacred Fire, Mew!” yelled Grant.
The fire encircled each Pokémon and prevented their movement.
“And you thought Sacred Fire was just another Fire move?” he said.
They landed, and Dialga and Palkia were still trapped.
“What’s going on?” asked Max.
“Well,” replied his father, “I saw some time rifts and I thought, ‘he’s at it again’.”
“Thanks for thinking so highly of me.”
“Anytime son; now, let’s see if we can knock some sense into these two, eh, Lizardon?”
“CHARRRRR-RRRRR-OOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAA-RRRRRR!!!”
“That’s what I like to hear! Blazing Kamikaze!”
Lizardon rose to the heavens, and then came hurdling town in a blaze of glory, decimating the two legendaries.
“Now,” said Grant as he walked up to them, “Are you two coming quietly, or am I going to have to make another demonstration?”
The two legends looked at each other, got up, and started walking.
“Dad,” said Max, “You’ve got some serious explaining to do.”
“In time,” said Grant, “You’ll find out for yourself.”
Grant hopped into the time rift he came from and then all the rifts closed up.
Then, Spike, Whiro, and Aqua came up the mountain, and were about to attack, when Abad said, “Dragonite, use Dragon Rush!”
He knocked the trio down the mountain, tumbling.
“They are losing their edge,” said James.
“Guess so,” said Max, concerned about what his father was still keeping from him.
With Dialga and Palkia following them, they descended the mountain to Celestic Town, where the locals stared at them, amazed that Dialga and Palkia were being controlled like that.

They arrived at the base, and took them to the new vault they had build, which contained the pixie trio. The three of them looked at Dialga and Palkia, shaking their heads.
“Behave,” said Abad as he left them.

In the lounge room…
“In recent news,” said a reporter on T.V., “Stark Mountain, a volcano that has been inactive for years now, has begun to leak a small flow of lava. While it is unclear, locals believe it to be the work of an ancient magma Pokémon, who is said to sleep deep within the mountain, but, that is simply speculation…”
“Great,” said Max, “Sinnoh is more work than ever.”
“Yeah,” said Abad, “You wanna take this one?”
“Do I get a choice?”
“Nope.”

CHAPTER 20!!!!!!! 2/3 of the way done! comment away!!!!
 
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wait Dialga and Palkia got pwned by a fire attack, wtf???

no offense but that sounds waaay off
 
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Out of all the Pokemon Fan Fics that i have read/heard about/been in, this one happens to be the best ever! If you need an extra member, i hope im the first one you'll refer to :p
 
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Rickraptor77 said:
wait Dialga and Palkia got pwned by a fire attack, wtf???

no offense but that sounds waaay off

Sacred Fire is a very exclusive move, and only four pokemon can use it:
Ho-oh (Learns through level up)
Smeargle (Using Sketch if he can survive a Sacred Fire)
Mew and Ditto (When using Transform on a ho-oh or Smeargle who can learn it)
My thoughts were to give Sacred Fire a truly sacred meaning in the pokemon world, the ability to control the legendary and powerful Dialga and Palkia.

as for Blazing Kamakze p00ning them, well, let's just say you'll have to find out in the next story!

And, on the topic of my next story:

shard79 said:
Out of all the Pokemon Fan Fics that i have read/heard about/been in, this one happens to be the best ever! If you need an extra member, i hope im the first one you'll refer to :p

In my next story i am looking for two new characters, a male and female, and you will have to be the FIRST to p/m me to get in. here's how it will work:

First MALE (Who must also be a male in real life, please!) to p/m me gets in, and same with the first female (once again, FEMALE IN REAL LIFE!!!!)

i will post when i have the male, and another post for the female, which means anyone who requests to be in my story after that post will get reported for spamming my Inbox (And i will make a note of this in my new thread, which may be soon!!!!)

-Max Shade IV
 
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i think snorlax-shamen would like to be, in here, i'll go ask him
 
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I PMed you about your next story, Max.



Also, keep up the good work with this one :D
 
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next person who sends me in a profile is getting reported and is never going to be in a story of mine.

is specifically said that i would accept aplications once the new thread was started, NOT NOW!!!
 
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Sorry 'bout that :( Anyway, hope the thread comes up soon :D
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen! CHAPTER 20 POSTED!!!!! Chapter 21 underway!!!!!!!

Hello again.. Old friend....

THE STORY IS FREAKING AWESOME!! Lol sorry about that... I was gone for a while cause of World of Warcraft... Well I'll cut to the chase... It'll be good to hear more from this story... ROCK ON!
 
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Max Shade IV said:
And, on the topic of my next story:

shard79 said:
Out of all the Pokemon Fan Fics that i have read/heard about/been in, this one happens to be the best ever! If you need an extra member, i hope im the first one you'll refer to :p

In my next story i am looking for two new characters, a male and female, and you will have to be the FIRST to p/m me to get in. here's how it will work:

First MALE (Who must also be a male in real life, please!) to p/m me gets in, and same with the first female (once again, FEMALE IN REAL LIFE!!!!)

i will post when i have the male, and another post for the female, which means anyone who requests to be in my story after that post will get reported for spamming my Inbox (And i will make a note of this in my new thread, which may be soon!!!!)

-Max Shade IV

no offense, but it is slightly unclear...since you said in my next storyi am looking...so that might have been now... sry man...
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen! CHAPTER 20 POSTED!!!!! Chapter 21 underway!!!!!!!

When's the next chapter?
 
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