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RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 5 IS ON ITS WAY!!

I think that would be a great idea! It seems we both have the potential! We may even be able to have our fan fics intertwine for a part. I dont know how it would work but o well. Good luck! I plan on finishing yours as soon as possible!!
 
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Well... your fic is on an island, mine is in a "new reigon"... with the possibility of SEA TRAVEL, it'd be highly doable. It'd take a while for me to get to the point where that could be done, however.

Thanks for the support with my fic by the way! I hope it's not going downhill with the "action" I'm needing to go to now... all I've done in the last two chapters is battle scenes it seems, maybe I need to fix that. But it's all good.
 
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Ya, my character loves the water so it is highly doable. ya it would take a while for me as well.

No problem its pretty good! Theres alot of competition for fan fics here so im glad to see mine have some readers, i know yours will grow, its just the long chapters turn people away (not me though!) Lol you have to much action and i dont have enough :p well im sure we will work everything out!
 
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lol... I knew the chapter length would put a lot of people on here off. But there's no way I'm changing that - if I did, I'd need more than 40/50 chapters to do what I want... yeah, it's be THAT excessive.

Being honest, if I had the time and the creativity to extend my idea that far... I'd probably go for that anyways. It sounds excessive, but if you think about what I'm trying to do. I'm going to have to try and condense an entire journey around a pokemon game into 20 chapters... I reckon it'll take longer than that. I could definitely extend it to allow interaction with your story though ;). I would probably get around to that stage by around chapter 11/12...

Hmm... I just gots a great idea... OMG this fits in so PERFECTLY! You'll understand what I'm thinking once you read through what I have of mine so far, but I'll PM you later with my idea ;). But if you pay enough attention to the chapter, you MIGHT just pick up on it :p
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 5 IS ON ITS WAY!!

Ya i have actually been cooking up a whole story for probably about a year! I have actually 2 sequals planned! But i dont want to get too far ahead of my self. Well i completely forgot that my exam days were half days so i might have a little more time. 2 exams down 4 to go :p Also I have no real idea about how to intertwine so pm me!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 5 IS ON ITS WAY!!

We need to get to a stage in our fics where we could actually feasibly meet first anyhow. I already know how (and potentially when) I can do this, but I don't know for you. You'd need to get a fair few good pokes in the party before I land... since I'll be landing there around the time in games you'd be able to surf. This means I'll have 5 or 6 Gym Badges... so I'll have some pretty good pokes :p

I need to formulate the idea a little further first; I'll PM you when I think about it a little more. Do you have MSN? You don't in your bio... but if you do, add mine and we can talk on there soon :p

I'm off for my next chapter I think... I'll talk again later ;)
 
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Ya im going to try to finish this chapter as soon as possible i hate having an unwritten chapter hanging over my head. yes im thinking of what pokemon to catch and when. Nope know MSN but i do have an aim screen name its the same name as it is here. if you have one feel free to shoot me a message! ok im going to salvage the hour i have before i start studying again to try and finish this chapter!
 
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Sorry, but AIM isn't something I have. I also know what you're saying about unwritten chapters - it's so NASTY to have all these ideas around without actually being able to get them down!

Don't worry too much about having to be ready for me as such though - we can work things out around each other, to see what we can come up with. Some of the ideas in my story are very easily extended beyond the scope of itself, and that means that another story (like this) can link in with said ideas. But we won't spoil anything for the readers now, will we? ;)
 
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O well of course we cant spoil anything for the readers:p not a single thing! Ok, i may grab an MSN ID over break since it seems to work well with pokebeach, by the way chapter 5 almost complete. We have confirmed action in this chapter :p
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 5 IS ON ITS WAY!!

Good to hear! I'll look our for your next chapter. We have lots of potential with both of our stories... the readers will just have to wait and see how the grand master plan pans out! :D
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 5 IS ON ITS WAY!!

Done, heres chapter 5! Please read and comment!

Chapter 5
“Now” Said Mr. Bing “These are your Pokémon. We have not fully worked out if we will let you keep them after the experiment but chances are if you train them well you will. This is a special belt used to hold the pokeballs, when they are not in your hand of course.” Mr. Bing handed the 3 of them a belt that fitted them perfectly with 5 empty pokeballs already attached. “And you will need this as well. We have a long technical name for it but you know it as a Pokedex. If you point it at a Pokémon it will give you up to date information about it. Also it has a special feature you probably don’t know about.” Mr. Bing took the Pokedex and slid out a tray which had a small ring in the middle of it with many lights buzzing around the ring. “If you would be kind enough kids to return your Pokémon” The 3 pointed the pokeballs at their Pokémon and yelled “Return” and the beam of light shot out of the ball and on to the Pokémon which returned them to the balls. “Could you please minimize the balls as well” The 3 pressed the tiny little button and all of a sudden it shrunk just like they knew it would. “Matt, could you please give me Piplup for a second, don’t worry I’ll give it right back.” Mr. Bing said as Matt handed Piplup too him. “When you place a Pokémon on this tray it will give you that specific Pokémon’s moves, gender, etcetera.
“Awesome, so what moves does Piplup know?” replied Matt
“It’s still analyzing, it will take a few seconds…ahh done, let’s see what we have. Well Piplup is a male. He knows bubble beam, pound, and bide. Wow, that’s actually a pretty advanced move set. You got lucky here Matt. Here let me give you your Piplup back.”
Mr. Bing continued with Max and Ellen to find out that Treecko knows bullet seed, absorb and leer. Max was pretty happy about that. Ellen also found that Cyndaquil knew Ember, Tackle and smokescreen. She would be happy no matter what Cyndaquil knew. The 3 grabbed their Pokémon and sat down as Mr. Bing called other names and gave out there Pokémon. There were Mudkip, Charmander, Turtwig; every starter out there was being given. Of course Matt, Max, and Ellen were already playing Tetris on their pokedexs to listen to any names.
“Now that you all have your Pokémon there are 2 things that I probably should tell you. First, at the end of your journey, the time still being undecided, you are all going participate in a Pokémon league. Yes, you will all battle each other and the winner will of course be declared the first Pokémon league champion. Now that was the good news, and when there is good news there is always bad news. Want to hear it? Well to bad I’m telling you anyway. To test how well you work with your Pokémon you’re not getting out of here the way you got in. You see this building is completely surrounded by mountains. Small mountains but none the less one huge circle of mountain, you will have to climb them to get out.”
Max turned and leaned over to Matt “O come on, you have got to be kidding me! That will take forever!”
“I heard that Max, your pretty loud for being so young” Said Mr. Bing “since it is only around 10 A.M you shouldn’t have to stop and camp. From there I’m not going to tell you where to go. However you will be notified when the Championship is. Catch as many Pokémon you want but you probably won’t be given any more pokeballs then you have now. With that I say go! Start climbing this mountain! This meeting is adjourned!”
Everybody walked out of the boardroom and tried to climb different parts of the mountain. Matt was making Max and Ellen follow him. Apparently there was some sort of plan in his head.
“Matt, seriously where are we going, there are better spots over there.” Said Ellen getting very tired from not knowing a thing!
“Just trust me were going to get there faster than anyone else! I saw this place when we were coming in since it was so flat I thought we could get up it easier if we…”
“Wait, stop, your taking us to a flat part of the mountain. We can’t climb flat things Matt” Said Max who was complaining as usual.

“Would you just trust me for once! Aha, were here,” said Matt as they walked up to part of the mountain that basically looked like a huge wall.
“Follow my mark with this. Come on out Piplup!” said Matt as he sent out his new friend. “Piplup use bubble beam on the mountain!” The first attack Matt had ever called and he felt great. Piplup shot out tons of bubbles at a furious speed. The attack hit directly were Matt wanted it to. There was smoke everywhere but was soon cleared by an ember and bullet seed from Cyndaquil and Treecko.
When everything had cleared the attacks had formed a rocky staircase up the mountain. The 3 trainers and their Pokémon hiked up the mountain.
“Jeez how high is this mountain,” exclaimed Ellen who seemed to be straggling behind everyone.
“Max quit whin…” said Matt “Wait, who just said that”
“The one in the back who claims there’s a fire burning inside her” Max replied sarcastically.
“Hey both of you just shut up! We are near the top right?” said Ellen who was half mad and half exhausted.
“Ya were pretty close” Replied Matt as he looked down at everyone, Piplup, Cyndaquil and Treecko were walking next to the trainers and Matt could tell everyone was pretty tired. “Hey, I can see the top! Come on guys let’s go!” Matt and Piplup started running towards the top but Max and Ellen, along with their Pokémon were going nowhere fast.
“Well, well, well, look what the idiot train dragged in.” said a voice from right next to Matt. Matt didn’t even have to look he knew that voice from anywhere. The question was what was he doing here.
“James” Matt said in a somewhat angry voice. “What on earth are you doing here” James was basically a rival of Matt’s back in St. Louis. You see James was not exactly a bully but none the less made fun of Matt quite a bit. Just for your average stuff, being short, having small feet just about anything you could think of.
“Well the people who put this whole field trip together wanted to see how a tough approach would affect the Pokémon, so they called the toughest kid around! I assume they only called you because they wanted to see a wimpy approach! Haha, I see they pared the wimpiest trainer with the wimpiest Pokémon!” said James who, as always, loved mocking Matt.
“PIPLUP IS NOT WIMPY, AND NEITHER AM I” Matt yelled angrily, he seemed to despise James more than ever now. Max and Ellen just walked up to where Matt and James were but they had heard everything.
“I’ve never seen this side of Matt” Ellen whispered to Max.
“Neither have I, it’s kind of like some soap opera. Whatever happens will be entertaining” Max whispered back as Ellen shot him a bad look.
“O really, you don’t think that you and that penguin thing aren’t the wimpiest, puniest, and scrawniest things to ever walk on this earth! Then prove it!” Said James trying to temp Matt into losing.
“You, me, battle now!” Screamed Matt who seemed to be furious more than ever. Piplup saw how Matt reacted yet was not at all afraid. He knew that Matt was defending his honor, and Piplup respected that.
“Well this is going to be very easy. Go Turtwig!” James threw his ball up in the air and a Turtwig shot out that seemed to be bigger than the average Turtwig.
“You guys can’t battle here; it’s the top of mountain!” Said Ellen who was nervous for Matt.
“So what, it will give them some obstacles” said Max in defense. But you could tell he wanted to see a battle.
“Alright a battle it is, I’ll let you take the first move Mr. Wimpy” exclaimed James
“You’ll regret that, Piplup Bubble Beam!” ordered Matt
“Turtwig dodge it and use Razor leaf!” replied James
“Quick Piplup drop to the ground!” Piplup fell straight down and the razor leafs whizzed right over his head. “Now use pound!” Piplup rushed over and nailed Turtwig with a direct hit!
“Ha, cheap shot, that doesn’t hurt us. Now let’s get real! Turtwig, throw that thing off the mountain!” Turtwig charged Piplup, he then jumped and was about to tackle Piplup right off the edge where there was a considerable drop. Matt stood stunned; something took him over at that instant. “Piplup use Bubble beam straight at Turtwig, then jump in the air and dive down with peck!” Peck, what am I thinking?! The pokedex said Piplup doesn’t even know peck Matt thought frantically as he watched what was about to happen. Piplup saw Turtwig and shot a bubble beam straight at him which didn’t directly hit. Although it did send Turtwig crashing into the ground. Piplup then shot up gallantly and dove back down with a peck. Matt then realized Pokedexs can’t tell you what lies in a Pokémon’s heart. The peck dropped down and Turtwig was down for the count.
“What!? What just happened!? Turtwig get up now!” Yelled James at Turtwig! Turtwig was not moving, everyone could tell Matt had won James just didn’t accept it.
“What are you doing call back your Turtwig!” Ellen said, she couldn’t stand to see a hurt Pokémon.
“Ha, Turtwig get back here” James grabbed his Pokeball and then whispered something to his Pokémon. “How dare you let me lose?” James then turned his attention to Matt. “Well looks like someone’s fond of battling like a girl and using cheap shots. Let me know when you want to fight less like a 3 year old school girl and more like me! See ya later losers!” James continued to walk away on the semi flat part of the mountain. Matt wasn’t furious anymore. He just looked down at Piplup who looked back up at him!
“Piplup, you were…AMAZING!!” Matt said as he bent down were Piplup ran straight into his arms.
“Matt you were amazing as well! That was great how you called those moves, how you knew Turtwig’s every move he was about to make!” Said Max who stood bewildered.
“I don’t like that James kid!!” said Ellen
“Hey you and me both” replied Matt
“I mean look how he treats his Pokémon! How do you even know him” Ellen was disgusted.
As they hiked down the mountain Matt explained everything. How James went to his school and how James always pointed out and exaggerated every little flaw Matt ever had. James was an all around jerk. It seems he doesn’t treat his Pokémon much better then he treats Matt. Matt of course wasn’t surprised of this.
Matt, Ellen and Max kept walking and eventually found a place to stop for lunch. They talked and ate, fed their Pokémon and kept moving. They couldn’t wait to conquer this mountain and get on to where wild Pokémon roam. And they did it they got down the mountain.
“So now were finally done with one of Mr. Bing’s surprises where are we off to?” asked Max sarcastically.
“There should be a lake somewhere around here,” Matt said as he reached for a map in his backpack “Oh, it’s just up here, less than a mile or so.”
“A mile! Ugh can’t we just camp here!” complained Max
“We just had lunch! Can you honestly be that tired?” Replied Ellen.
“Ok how about this, we walk to the lake and set up camp there, and I’m going to do some playing in the water! What do ya say Piplup you want to go swimming?” Matt said looking over at Piplup.
“Pipppluuup” exclaimed Piplup in agreement!
“Alright let’s go!” Said Matt.
The 3 started off into the forest heading toward the lake. They didn’t see too many wild Pokémon. An Oddish here or a Tailow there nothing they were to compelled to catch. However Piplup, Treecko, and Cyndaquil seemed to be getting along fine since they were constantly playing as their trainers walked. They would jump around through bushes and chase each other around trees.
“Were here!” Matt yelled as the lake cam into site from behind a few trees. Matt and Piplup started running to the lake. They were running straight for the lake when all of a sudden a thunder shock shot out of a nearby bush and hit the ground right in front of Piplup.
“Ahh, whoa, what was that” Said Matt completely surprised. Max, Ellen and their Pokémon got up to where Matt was right when a small yellow creature jumped out of the bush.
“Whoa, that’s a Pichu!” yelled Max in amazement.
“Ya and I’m going to catch it! Piplup use Bubble beam!” ordered Matt as Piplup shot an immense flow of bubbles straight at Pichu. Pichu stood frozen when all of a sudden a Ponyta jumped out of straight out from behind a bigger bush and took the bubble beam for Pichu.
“Now a Ponyta, this just keeps getting better and better!” Said Max as he watched everything that was going on.
“Want it to get better? Well I’m catching that Ponyta!” exclaimed Ellen “Cyndaquil use ember on Ponyta!”
“Piplup use peck on Pichu” said Matt enthusiastically.
The Ember was matched by another ember from Ponyta causing smoke right when Piplup landed his peck. There was black smoke everywhere now and no one could see a thing. At least until a beam of electricity broke it up. Matt knew Pichu fired off a thunderbolt and it hit Piplup. Cyndaquil and Ponyta seemed to be at a standstill.
“Piplup are you ok?” asked Matt to his Pokémon. Piplup got up, looked at Matt and nodded. “Good then use bubble beam one more time!”
“Cyndaquil use ember!” Ellen yelled hoping Ponyta wouldn’t block.
Both attacks were hit directly. Since Ponyta was weekend by Piplup’s Bubble beam, the ember made Ponyta fall straight to the ground. Pichu fell down to. The peck must have hit pretty well for it to be out this early.
“Cyndaquil, finish this off with a tackle!” said Ellen who got a little too caught up in the moment.
“Ellen what are you doing, Ponyta’s down don’t attack anymore!” Exclaimed Matt who didn’t want anyone to get hurt. But it was too late to stop Cyndaquil was already charging. All of a sudden Pichu jumped in front of Ponyta and took the attack. Just like Ponyta did for him. Pichu followed it up by shooting out a discharge that hit Piplup, Cyndaquil and actually hurt Pichu himself. Ponyta and Pichu then stood up, ready to keep fighting.
“Piplup use pound!”
“Cyndaquil use tackle!”
The attacks hit and through Ponyta and Pichu off their feat. Matt and Ellen looked at each other and then yelled “Go Pokeball!” A beam of light shot out of the pokeballs and onto Ponyta and Pichu. They were sucked up inside them. The balls landed on the ground. They wiggled once, wiggled twice, wiggled for a third time and then simultaneously made a chime sound. The Pokémon had been caught and Matt and Ellen had two new Pokémon to raise and cherish!
 
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Woo, capture! Nice one :D

You must have been sitting on that for a while... good work! Nice to see a battle or two from this side of the master plan as well :p

I'm looking forward to seeing what you make of this, but don't forget to space out your paragraphs a little! You have the right idea with speech being in separate paras with a new speaker, but don't forget next time to put a space in between these para as well. It imporves readability by no end ;)

I'm guessing that the Ponyta doesn't have Flash Fire then? Too bad... although WHY did Ellen need another fire type exactly? Not that it truly matters, but it's curious nevertheless.

I look forward to seeing the next stage of this! We need to work extra hard to get the gears of the master plan well and truly ticking :p
 
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Thanks! Ya i posted and then forgot about the spaces and tried to edit and then those squares came in so :p That was a misfortune of mine, i assume i have to do it in the text box down here!

Ahh i knew you would ask what moves ponyta knows and doesnt. Lets just say more will unfold in the next chapter! Same for another fire type! Although everyone here has a favorite type! You will find out alot more abount new pokes in the next chapter! Also i updated the trainer tcs on the first post!! Thanks for the comment!

and ya i was sitting on that WAY TOOO LONG!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 5 HERE!! PLEASE COME READ AND COMMENT!!

Well, I'm pretty good at coming up with key questions from stories like this. You would have noted them at the end of a couple of my chapters :p
 
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Woots, nice capture. ;)
Keep it up!! :D
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 5 HERE!! PLEASE COME READ AND COMMENT!!

Thanks Flygon, ok im back and on BREAK! Should be seeing chapters alot more often! Thanks for reading everyone:p!
 
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great chapter
 
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Thanks, almost done with the next one!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 5 HERE!! PLEASE COME READ AND COMMENT!!

Glad you're doing well with your story too! Take a look at mine when you can... the darker edge to it is finally appearing :p. I wouldn't mind some opinions on some specific sections of the previous chapters, as well as the more... sinister edge creeping in. Things are heating up!

Good luck with finishing this chapter coming! :D
 
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ooo darker edge! Illl go read it now! but first CHAPTER 6 IS FINALLY UP!

Chapter 6

“Pichu thunderbolt” Matt ordered

“Treecko dodge and use mega drain!” replied Max as Treecko tried to dodge the powerful electric attack. But it didn’t work; Treecko couldn’t move fast enough and was hit with the thunderbolt.

“Treecko, try and muster up one last bullet seed”

“Pichu use discharge”

Both attacks hit each other in mid air. Smoke was now everywhere and they were waiting for it to clear. Sure enough it did and both Pokémon were found knocked out on the ground. Matt and Max ran to their Pokémon and returned them to their Pokeballs to rest.

“I don’t get it!” Max said “Treecko and I were training all yesterday while You, Piplup, and Pichu were playing in the lake. And you just caught Pichu and Treecko couldn’t even defeat it. I have to say that’s one strong Pokémon you caught! I’m going to train so hard that…”

“Hey guys check this out,” yelled Ellen as she ran out of the forest where she was training with her Pokémon “Cyndaquil use quick attack! Ponyta use fire spin!” Cyndaquil shot off toward the camp site where everyone was standing, but it wasn’t over, a whirlpool of fire was right behind Cyndaquil. Of course it was the fire spin from Ponyta. Cyndaquil ran straight into Piplup knocking both the Pokémon down. While the fire from the fire spin went in the other direction and hit a bush. The bush instantly lit on fire with a great blaze

“Oh shoot! I just lit the bush on fire! There’s going to be a forest fire! What do I do what do I do!!” screamed Ellen in panic!

“Squirtle, use water gun and put that fire out!” Everyone looked around and saw a trainer with a Squirtle. The water gun almost instantly extinguished the small bush.

“Wow thanks you’re a life saver!” said Ellen who was still trying to calm down from the panic.

“Ha, no problem at all! I see you just caught that Ponyta. It must be pretty talented to already know fire spin; you might need to train it a little more though!” replied the boy.

“Ya, I can see that. Oh, by the way my name is Ellen”

“Hey Ellen, I’m Chazz! This is Squirtle and while we’re at it Swablu come on out and check if anything else caught on fire!” said Chazz as the small blue bird flew off in the distance.

“Wow! Was that a Swablu, I’ve always wanted an Altaria! Where’d you catch it?” asked Max who was utterly amazed.

“Well, I walked all last night with my Squirtle. There’s one of the towns that the government set up farther north. In the middle of the town there is a park with the biggest tree you have ever seen. It must have every type of bird Pokémon in their! I even saw a Skarmory fly off right when I got there!” Replied Chazz, he seemed to be just as interested in the bird Pokémon as Max.

“Matt we are so going there! How long did it take to get there?” Max said who was ecstatic!

“You won’t be able to make it by tonight you could stay camped here and then leave tomorrow morning and get there tomorrow night!” Replied Chazz as Swablu came down from the sky and landed on his shoulders. “Any fires Swablu?” Swablu shook his “Well the less fires the better!”

“You can say that again, by the way I’m Matt and that’s Max” exclaimed Matt

“Ya and Ellen set the bush on fire not us” said Max

“HEY!” Yelled Ellen, it seems lighting things on fire is a touchy issue.

“Alright everyone calm down, so Chazz what did you come all the way back here for?” Asked Matt.

“I wanted to train in the water, thought it would be good since both my Pokémon love the water. I didn’t realize that I already passed the closest lake!” said Chazz.

“Water fan huh? What do you say, how about a quick battle, you and me, before it gets dark?” Said Matt who was itching to test out his Pokémon one more time!

“Alright sounds good, I see you have your Piplup there, do you have another one to make it 2 vs. 2. Singles match of course.”

“Ya I have a second Pokémon, I think he’s up for another battle!” Said Matt.

“Well I’m starting off with Squirtle! Go get ‘em champ!”

“You’re up Piplup!” By now both Pokémon were facing each other and were ready to go.

“You can have the first move Matt!” said Chazz.

“Why does everyone always give me the first move? Oh well, Piplup use peck!” replied Matt.

“Squirtle use withdraw!” Chazz yelled as the small Pokémon retreated to its shell. Piplup ran up and pecked the shell. Nothing happened.

“Rapid spin!” Ordered Chazz.

“Piplup get back!” yelled Matt, but it wasn’t fast enough, Piplup was hit by the spinning Squirtle and thrown a couple feet back. Squirtle came out of its shell and Matt knew it was now or never.

“Piplup Bubble beam!” The attack hit directly in the middle Squirtle’s belly. It threw Squirtle back and it fell flat on its back.

“Squirtle Can you get up” asked Chazz. Squirtle nodded his head and stood up ready to fight. “Good! Squirtle use rapid spin again!”

“Piplup use bubble beam on the ground right in front of Squirtle” Commanded Matt who obviously had a plan. Piplup did as Matt said and shot a bubble beam right where Squirtle was headed with the rapid spin. The bubble beam made a groove in the ground; Squirtle hit the bump and was boosted up in the air. Squirtle landed flat on his back once more, but this time he was out for good.

“Squirtle return, you did a great job! Matt I would of never thought of that, but you haven’t beaten me yet. Go Swablu!”

“Piplup return, great job I couldn’t have asked for more!”

“Your switching Pokémon huh, well let’s see what is left up your sleeve.”

“Ha, you’re about to get shocked! Come on out Pichu!”

“A Pichu huh, let’s see what it’s got. Swablu use peck!”

“Dodge it and use thunderbolt” exclaimed Matt. Pichu dodged Swablu’s attack and then shot a furious electric charge straight at Swablu. It hit and Swablu fell to the ground.

“Swablu, you’re ok I know you are! Use Sing”

“Oh no! Pichu try and use thunder shock before it gets…” It was too late, Pichu had completely fallen asleep. “Pichu wake up wake up!” It was no use Pichu was still asleep,

“Swablu use astonish, finish Pichu off”

“PICHU!” Pichu woke up looked at Matt, then turned at looked at Swablu. Pichu knew he was in danger and shot off a huge discharge. It knocked Swablu straight to the ground. It was down for the count. “Pichu! That was amazing!”

“Yes, that was. You really got some strong Pokémon there Matt. Swablu return, you were great too!”

“Thanks Chazz, I’m certainly proud of them!”

“That’s good! Well my Pokémon are pretty tired, I’ll have to wait until the morning to fish. I assume you guys are leaving for Balsan Town tomorrow.”

“YA WE ARE” said Max enthusiastically.

“Ha, well then you will have to leave early” replied Chazz

“Ughhh don’t say that” said Ellen

“How long of a walk is it. I’m actually with Ellen on this one.” Asked Matt

“Well if you leave around 6 AM and take a 1 hour lunch break you should get there around 6 PM.” Answered Chazz

“Ughhh a 12 hour walk are you kidding me?” Now Ellen was the one complaining.

“Hey it’s going to be totally worth it and you know it!” Countered Max

“Ok you two, if we’re going to be leaving early then we better get camp ready. Max and I will go get fire wood. Chazz your welcome to camp with us tonight.” Said Matt

“Great thanks!” Replied Chazz

“Ok then can you and Ellen get the pot’s ready. What are we making for dinner?” asked Matt to everyone.

“I have some Macaroni and Cheese we could make that!” replied Chazz

“Great you guys set that up we’re going to get firewood, come on Max!”
Matt and Max went out into the woods. Soon to realize there was no spare fire wood.

“Matt, I think we’re going to have to cut down a tree.” Said Max

“What are you crazy we don’t have an axe or anything!” Replied Matt

“We have something close, Treecko come out and use bullet seed!” The attack shot razor sharp seeds straight at a small tree. It didn’t cut through all the way but was clearly un stable.

“Ah I have the idea now! Piplup use bubble beam to knock that thing down!” Commanded Matt, the tree fell straight to the ground.

“Now that’s fire wood! Come on Matt help me drag this thing back to camp, we can find a way to cut it up there!”

“Alright let’s get this out of here” responded Matt.
The two dragged the small tree back to camp where Ellen and Chazz had everything ready, except the fire.

“You brought back a tree. Why?” asked Ellen who wasn’t exactly mad, just…puzzled.

“Well it’s not a big tree, and I can use whatever is left for tomorrow. Swablu use peck to help break this thing up!” Exclaimed Chazz

“Piplup help Swablu out with peck too!” ordered Matt. In no time there was a fire going and they were all huddled up eating. All talking and laughing and having a good time.

“Alright everyone go to bed, were waking up at 5 tomorrow morning!” Ordered Max

“WE ARE NOT WAKING UP AT 5!” Yelled Matt and Ellen together who both enjoyed their sleep.

“O yes you are! We have to leave early, plus we have to clean up the site and stuff.” Replied Max.

“Just leave the camp the way it is, I’ll be staying here anyway.” Exclaimed Chazz

“Thanks, but we still have to get our sleeping bags together. We wake up at 5:30 how about that guys?”

“Fine” the two replied.
The 4 put out the fire, crawled in their sleeping bags and then drifted off to dreamland. Matt had an odd dream however. If you could even classify it as a dream more of a forced thought. There was a black background with swirls everywhere. Almost something of what a black hole would look like. There was a flash of light. Then there was another one but going in a different direction. A black hole had formed, there was something coming out of it. It looked like a gem or a pendent of some sort. Then there was a quick, huge flash of red light and Matt awoke. It was early in the morning, maybe 2 AM. That was the weirdest dream I have ever had, but there can’t be much to it. I’ve got to get back to sleep. Matt thought as he stared at the stars and his eyes slowly closed.


“WAKE UP WAKE UP, HEY SLEEPY HEADS WAKE UP!! WE HAVE TO GET TO BALSAN TOWN!” Max screamed at everyone. Chazz was already up and Max was trying to get Matt and Ellen up.

“Max! Shut up now! I will beat you to a pulp!” Ellen was half asleep and mad.

“Ya I agree with the angry one, 5 more minutes” said Matt

“Ugh fine 5 more minutes that’s all you get!” replied Max as he continued to get his bag ready.

10 minutes passed, Max’s nagging had convinced Matt to get up but Ellen was still sound asleep. Max walked over to get the pan he was finished washing. He stopped, he stopped like he had an idea and he did. Max walked over to the lake and dipped the pan in it filling it with water. He then started walking over to Ellen with it.


“Max I know what you’re thinking don’t you dare!” said Chazz

“You know she’ll bite your head off Max” replied Matt

“It’s the only thing that will work,” answered Max as he walked over and poured the water on Ellen. Her eyes shot open and she screamed bloody murder.

“Max…RUN!” yelled Matt as Ellen got up and started chasing him.

They must have ran around the small lake 15 times before they finally got Ellen to stop. The 3 packed their bags, said goodbye to Chazz and ran off toward Balsan town. A new Pokémon friend driving Max, a warm, dry bed driving Ellen, and sheer adventure driving Matt.
 
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