Writing Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 11 IS HERE! COME CHECK IT OUT AND COMMENT!

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RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 5 HERE!! PLEASE COME READ AND COMMENT!!

Lol, nice but you got some errors in the battle with Chazz, Piplup can use thundershock? O_O Might wanna try editing. :D
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 5 HERE!! PLEASE COME READ AND COMMENT!!

Hmm hmm... nice setup there. All I can say though, is leave Skarmory alone! I want to use him... D:

Besides... you'd need to be a lot stronger yet to get hold of one of those ;)

Keep at it! I'm working hard on mine to bring it up to the ideal point as well... so we'll see how it goes! It's pretty tough to do though, since it keeps getting pushed back... but hey, we can but try!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 5 HERE!! PLEASE COME READ AND COMMENT!!

flygon where does it say piplup used thundershock?

I have a feeling this wasnt my best chapter. Maybe it was too much of a filler i dont know? WHA? Who said anywone was catching skarmory:p? Well its Christmas eve here so i dont know how much work ill be doing today and tommarow but ill do my best to type type type! Thanks for reading.
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Nobody said he was being caught, I was just telling you to leave him alone before you DO go for him ;)
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Ok thanks, I'm working on my next chapter now! I guarantee you it wont be up today or tommarow due to CHRISTMAS! But its on the track!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Good job it's not your type... you don't want to get me annoyed before our project is completed D:
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

lol, looks like you moved on without me ^^; sorry, Ive been slammed with homework and stuff for a long time.... I might be failing something too... Well anyways don't leave me out of this!!! ;)
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

I understand. I just got through exams so i have been kinda slammed to. Failing, oh well, as long as you dont go to summer school! If you want to help i might find something for you to do. But i have pretty much got this undercontrol right now. SO what have you thinked of the 5 or so chapters ive written without you? What about the character development? How did you like how the battkes played out? Sorry im bombarding you with questions but with you gone alot of questions have piled up:p!!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

MoneyKing63 said:
“Dodge it and use thunderbolt” exclaimed Matt. Pichu dodged Swablu’s attack and then shot a furious electric charge straight at Piplup. It hit and Swablu fell to the ground.
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Lol ZomgBBQ. =F

MoneyKing63 said:
“Oh no! Piplup try and use thunder shock before it gets…” It was too late, Pichu had completely fallen asleep. “Pichu wake up wake up!” It was no use Pichu was still asleep,
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Lol. O_O

Need I say more? =F
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

OH NO!! REALLY SORRY!! Going to edit right now! Thanks for letting me no Flygon!!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Yah sure no problem. =]
Loveeeee the fan-fic. =F
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

WOW! COOL FAN FIC! I'VE READ ALL THE CHAPTERS! I was wondering..... CAN I BE a CHARACTER TOO?
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Wow thanks aqua jet, Ughh ya you can be a character, i have to get a form lets see.
Name:
Pokemon(i may bring them down to their basic stages):
Favorite Type:
Minibio:

Alright just use that form and you can have a character, it wont be a main character but it might be something like chazz (Chazz was a character from chazz9)

Ok everyone the holidays have delayed my chapter but i assure you it will be up soon! Thanks
MK63
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

No Prob, I don't matter if It isn't the highest stage.

Name:Ahmad (You can Edit the name If you don't like it)
Pokemon:pidgey/Starly (Is it ok if it's not starter?)
Type:OF COURSE, FLYING!
Age:12
Minibio:Hates It when people make fun of him just cuz he's younger.
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

ok perfect i might have a good spot for him! Alright being 12 might be a problem, i might be able to make it work might not, just dont be super suprised if i make him a little older, well I might be able to keep it. You'll just have to wait and see. Starting chapter now!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Hey, I want too. :p

Name: Veronica. Edit if you want. :p (Would be strange if my name's Flygon right? :p)
Pokemon(I may bring them down to their basic stages): Duhh Flygon
Favorite Type: DRAGON DUHH
Minibio: Likes Dragon Pokemon. Other than that, I dunno what to put. =/
Age: 12 (You can put me 13 as I'm 13 next year. :p)

OT: AJ23, mind putting the siggy off? DRK said don't put. :p Read my siggy.
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

alright i have an idea for your character just a few things.
Any other pokemon flygon? and you will be 13:p Ok i have a bit of writers block but i think i nice night of sleep should clear it! Ill get it to you as soon as possilbe
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Erm, Garchomp, Dragonite, Salamence are fine. :p
As long as they are Dragon, except Kingdra. I don't really like it that much, I only like Horsea. Which is not a Dragon. :F
 
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