Writing Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 11 IS HERE! COME CHECK IT OUT AND COMMENT!

Do you think this story is any good?

  • This is pretty bad

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • BOO!! This is a sad excuse for a fan fic!

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    15
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Flygon said:
Erm, Garchomp, Dragonite, Salamence are fine. :p
As long as they are Dragon, except Kingdra. I don't really like it that much, I only like Horsea. Which is not a Dragon. :F

Blasphemy! How can you not like Kingdra, one of the coolest dragons ever! D:

Anyways, I hope you can get the chapter done the way you want it soon Matt! I know how you feel with the writers block, although for me it's a shiny new Wii in the way of my story :p
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

This is wickedly cool ! I love how it starts, it was really very interesting and I love how he received his letter then started his adventure. Hey, MonkeyKing, can I be a character on this story ? I can be an extra character, just like the role of Casey and Sakura of the Pokemon Animè

Board Name:Bellomence
Name: Cynthia (you can change if you want)
Pokemon that I want: Oddish (badly wanted as a starter), Hoppip and Bagon also Eevee
Favorite Type: Grass and Dragon
Minibio: She might be very young, but she is a genius and she is not easily fooled (she can incinerate any traitors with a single SolarBeam). She has a very complex personality. She loves Grass-types and Dragon-types and always detests other types. She thinks she is the best, and she will do anything to prove that, even if it costs other's lives. She hates wars (her parents died because of wars) but wants to fight anyone who gets in her way. She talks in a sarcastic way that makes everyone believe she is a villain, although she is not. Has no mercy even to youngsters who detests or badmouth her (she never let them see the light of another day),very nasty and aggresive. She is easily annoyed ,she throws anyone who annoys her (even in a single second) to a nearby cliff. In the other side, she is friendly to anyone who deserves being her friend and has a very nice personality to her Pokemons and to the 'elders'. Independent and wants to work alone, but loves to make heroic actions (sometimes). Her favorite flavors are vanilla and chocolate. She is also a vegetarian and devoted herself to Catholicism. She wants to travel the world and her main goal is to steal all the legendary Pokemons to make the whole world to submit to her and to teach the world about the meaninglessness of fighting.
Age: 10 (you can change it to the youngest possible)
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Um, Bellomence, Don't Mean To Burst Your Bubble, But He Said No More Main Characters Will Be Added And Your Character Sound Like A Main Charactor.
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Aquajet_23 said:
Um, Bellomence, Don't Mean To Burst Your Bubble, But He Said No More Main Characters Will Be Added And Your Character Sound Like A Main Charactor.

It's okay, I can be any character not a main one.
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

But Then Why You Say all About Her Counquest To Capture All Legendary Pokemon?
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Aquajet_23 said:
But Then Why You Say all About Her Counquest To Capture All Legendary Pokemon?

That's her goal because everyone are abusing the Powers of Legendaries, (for example, about what Team Aqua, Team Magma and Team Galactic want with their respective legendaries to further their own goals). She wants to capture all of them because no one will listen to her beliefs (the meaninglessness of fighting) if she won't do that. She's also capturing them to prevent future wars that caused the death of her parents.

P.S, if you think her goal makes her sound like a main character, then I say you can diminish her status. I only want Cynthia to appear in the story.
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

No its fine Bellomence i can work her in. Ok alot of characters but first THANKS FOR YOUR SUPPORT EVERYONE! I have an idea to fit you all in (wont be main characters!) but for now on everyone has to be above 13 (Bellomence and Aqua Jet your fine) If you read the first part carefully it said kids from 13-16. I can fit the two younger ones in but thats it for now! Wow Calum you got a wii nice!! I got one last year its awsome:p!!! Ya Ive been playing Guitar Hero more then i've been typing! Ok i just got an idea for my story so im going to run with it!! THanks everyone thanks alot!! This is becoming quite a popular fan fic!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Moneyking63 said:
No its fine Bellomence i can work her in. Ok alot of characters but first THANKS FOR YOUR SUPPORT EVERYONE! I have an idea to fit you all in (wont be main characters!) but for now on everyone has to be above 13 (Bellomence and Aqua Jet your fine) If you read the first part carefully it said kids from 13-16. I can fit the two younger ones in but thats it for now! Wow Calum you got a wii nice!! I got one last year its awsome:p!!! Ya Ive been playing Guitar Hero more then i've been typing! Ok i just got an idea for my story so im going to run with it!! THanks everyone thanks alot!! This is becoming quite a popular fan fic!

Thanks a million, MonkeyKing63. Good Luck on the fanfic, MonkeyKing, it's one of the greatest fanfics here, I love how it starts and I'm freakingly excited at the next chapters.

P.S, and If you have questions, regarding Cynthia, feel free to PM me or just post it here, I'll be luring above this story anyway.
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Lol thanks! Im glad you like it! Now that writers block is over im finally working on it!! Its a pretty good chapter! and i think it will be a long one!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

Lol, I still haven't restarted on mine yet... *goes to hit himself*

I guess that's what Mario Galaxy, Super Paper Mario and PBR do to you huh? :)

I'll see what I can do later - I really need to kick-start mine again. We can't let our "idea" fall through now, can we? ;)
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 ON ITS WAY!

You better get going:p Oh no our idea cant fall through! And speaking of falling check out chapter 7! NOW IN! Its kind of a long one

Chapter 7

“Are we there yet?!” Whined Ellen

“Ya seriously Max we we’ve been walking for like 6 hours!” Replied Matt

“Come on guys we just stopped for lunch like an hour ago! It’s only a couple more miles.” Exclaimed Max.

“Hey Max at least let me see the map then” asked Matt.

“Sure here”

Matt took the map and looked at it carefully. There was the long island that was slightly curved which was the main island they were on. Then just above the main island was a large circular island. hmmm, I wonder what’s over there. Bing didn’t tell us anything about crossing an ocean. Then there was a small island to the east. Since it was so small he assumed that it was no big deal.

The three continued walking with their Pokémon by their side. Cyndaquil and Pichu were riding on Ponyta; Treecko was walking next to Max and Piplup next to Matt. The group arrived; the only way you would know it was a town is from the sign “Balsan town, where the grass is always greener.”

You could see all of Balsan town from where they were standing. It was barely even a town. There were 4 log cabins surrounding this giant tree. There were trainers everywhere. They could see tons of Pokémon, wild and used by trainers.

“Woah…It’s huge” said Max

“That is the biggest tree I have ever seen” exclaimed Matt

“That’s it! I see a huge tree which is cool but where do we sleep in those little huts!” replied Ellen

“No actually we sleep on the ground!” said Max

“What!” Said Matt and Ellen in unison.

“Well as you can see there are only 4 houses. 1 is for government officials that come and check on the town constantly, 1 is a meeting hall, and the other 2 are for trainers to sleep in, but there usually taken.” Replied Max

“You could have told us this earlier!” exclaimed Ellen

“Well you didn’t ask!” Replied Max

“I didn’t think I needed to!”

“Well that’s not my problem!”

“Ok ok you two stop it!” Matt said “We’ll sleep under the tree, we can have all of our Pokémon out with us and it will be fun. And we can make sure we get one of the cottages for the tomorrow night!”

“Fine” Max and Ellen replied together.

“Now that you two are finished why don’t we go check out the tree” said Matt

“No, the map says whenever you are in a town always go to the meeting hall first.” Replied Max

“Why?” questioned Ellen

“I don’t know that’s just what the map says” said Max.

The three walked towards the small log cabin. Inside was a giant map of the region on the wall, under it was a desk with a voice recorder on it. There was a not in front of the recorder. It was typed out and looked pretty professional. It read for information on your next stop press play on the recorder in front of you. It was then signed in cursive Mr. Bing

Matt reached out and pressed the play button. “Hello Pokémon trainers” Said a voice that was recognizable as Mr. Bing. “As you know before we found this island it was completely uninhabited by humans. But we decided to create 3 towns to help you out along the way. 1 is the town you are currently in, Balsan town. The second one is north; from it there is a path that leads further north. It leads to a gathering ground where trainers must cross the ocean to get to the island north. There are no boats; you must find another way to get across. Now on that island is a city where the championship will be held. So you have a while until you get there. Good luck, everyone! This is Bing signing off!"

“Well that was…err informative” said Max “How are we supposed to get across the ocean anyway, swim?”

“No we’re not going to swim! I’m sure one of us will have sufficient water Pokémon by then, who knows maybe Matt’s Piplup will be an Empoleon.” Replied Ellen

“Well I don’t want to rush anything, we’ll cross that bridge when we come to it!” exclaimed Matt “Now let’s go outside there must be a dozen of battles going on out there.”

The trio ran outside where they saw the huge tree, and tons of battles going on under it.

Matt’s eyes fell on two girls doing a double battle with two other trainers. What caught Matt’s attention was that both the girls were using Bagons. The other two trainers had out a Tailow and a Caterpie. Matt was focused on their battle now, he heard the two girls yell in unison “Bagon Headbutt! Matt saw one Bagon fly up at Tailow while the other one charged at Caterpie, they were both knocked out and the two girls had won.

“Hey guys lets go over there,” said Matt as he pointed to where the two girls where.

The three followed Matt over as they were looking at all the trainers Pokémon. As they were walking over one of the girls looked over at them. The group walked over to where the trainers where. One of the girls was much younger; she was on the ground petting her Bagon. The other one had her Bagon in her arms; she was the one looking at Matt.

“That was a grea…” Matt said before being cut off by,

“Hey where did you catch your Bagon?” Exclaimed Ellen.

“Oh, uh my sister and I caught them just outside of a small cave.” Replied the girl.

“That was a great battle; both of the Bagon really seemed to overpower the other Pokémon” said Matt

“Thanks a lot! We’ve been training quite a bit. I have to say that was a great battle you had!” said the girl

“Huh? What battle?” questioned Matt.

“The one on the mountain a couple days ago, against the kid with the Turtwig. That was really good, you’re Piplups talented!” replied the girl

“Wow you saw that! That was my first battle”

“Well it was great! Oh, my names Veronica, this is Bagon and this is Charmander!” She said as she called out the fiery lizard from its Pokeball.

“I’m Matt, and these are my Pokémon,” Matt said as he reached for his belt “You know Piplup and this is Pichu!”
Max and Ellen both reached for their Pokeballs at the same time and threw them out.

“I’m Max, and this is Treecko!”

“Hey I’m Ellen, this is Cyndaquil and Ponyta!

“Wow really cool Pokémon, all of you those are real catches!” said Veronica.

“Hey V what are you doing over here it’s almost dark we need to set up ca…WOW is that a Ponyta!” A young girl came over and started petting Ellen’s Ponyta.

“Yes that’s my Ponyta and who exactly are you?” Said Ellen.

“Oh sorry this is my little sister Cynthia” said Veronica.

“I’ve always loved Ponyta; it was the only type that wasn’t grass or dragon I liked. Oh I see you all have your Pokémon out! Come on out guys!” Exclaimed Cynthia as she threw up 3 pokeballs. Three beams of light shout out and revealed a Bagon, Bulbasaur and Oddish. “I really love grass Pokémon”

“Ya me to!” replied Max “I see you have an Oddish, what do you plan on evolving it too Vileplume or Bellossom.”

“Bellossom for sure, it’s more powerful as opposed to…”

“Vileplume which is more beauty, I know!”

“Alright chatterboxes we need to set up camp too come one let’s go!” exclaimed Ellen as the 3 went and found an open spot under the great tree. They went to sleep knowing that with tomorrow comes new Pokémon friends.

Morning of the next day.

Matt slowly opened his eyes, it was early he could just see the sun rising. He slowly stood up and looked around; there were many people still in their sleeping bags. He looked over and saw Max and Ellen still asleep. Hmm the first one up, well I better take advantage of this [ /i] Matt reached into his bag got some clean clothes and his two Pokémon in their Pokeballs. He grabbed a low branch and started climbing until he reached a sturdy branch maybe 30 feet off the ground. He sat down and carefully released his two Pokémon to watch the sunset with him.

“Thought you guys might enjoy the sun rise” said Matt as the two Pokémon took place next to him.

“Pip!” “Pi Cha!” replied the two Pokémon in enthusiasm.

“Listen guys I want to tell you something” Said Matt “Ever since I came here it’s been everything I dreamed it would be. You two made that for me, so what I’m trying to say is thank you. Thank you for making this exactly what I wanted!”

Both Pokémon looked at Matt and smiled. Then all of a sudden Pichu’s cheeks started to flow with electricity. Pichu then began glowing a white bright color. Matt knew what was happening and so did Piplup. The glow seemed to shoot straight of Pichu’s skin and a bigger, more yellow Pokémon with a longer tail shown.

“Pika! Pikachu!” said Pikachu showing off its new body.

“You evolved! You evolved because of happiness that’s great!” Exclaimed Matt as Pikachu jumped up into his arms. “I’m sure your happy too aren’t you Piplup”

“Pip!” Said Piplup as he jumped into Matt’s arms as well.

“Ha! I think I heard Max moving lets go down there and see what’s going on.”
Matt returned his Pokémon and climbed down the tree, and of course let them back out when he got to the bottom. He showed off Pikachu to Max and even woke up Ellen, she didn’t mind much though since she had a new playmate. The three all ate breakfast and then decided to climb the tree to see what Pokémon they can find.

“Don’t we need like ropes with carabineers and harnesses for this?” stuttered Max as Matt and Ellen were already climbing up.

“No its fine just start climbing!” exclaimed Ellen. Max took a hold of a small branch that the others had used to climb up.

“I think you two have Aipom blood or something cause I..Err…can’t get up, can one of you help me!” Replied Max

“Here give me your hand I’ll help you up” said Matt.

Max got up and it came naturally to him, possibly the intimidation of another Pokémon. The three spread out around the tree to search for all different Pokémon. Max had gotten it into his head that Swablu like higher altitudes so he was near the top of the tree, so he and Treecko were bouncing around up there. Matt wasn’t sure what he was looking for but he was near Max, yet a little lower. He only had Pikachu with him since he thought Piplup would don great moving on a tree. Ellen was pretty much in the middle and since Ponyta couldn’t go in a tree, had Cyndaquil on her head.

“Hey Matt I don’t see any Swablu up here, you see anything down there?” Said Max

“Ugh…no Max nothing down here!” Matt replied.

“Hey, what’s that? Hey Matt I see a Swablu. Treecko use bullet seed on that Swablu!”

“What Max no you can’t just fire a bullet seed anywh…” The bullet seed had hit a loose branch. It fell down and hit Matt square in the head throwing him off balance. He fell down with Pikachu but managed to grab the branch with his hands to stop him from falling.

“Pikachu! Where are you!?” Yelled Matt in distress.

“Pika” Matt looked down and saw Pikachu holding on to his leg with one hand. Pikachu was losing grip and it was about to fall, he couldn’t climb up. Out of nowhere a Starly flew straight to Pikachu. It grabbed Pikachu with its talons and slowly flew up towards the branch. Matt pulled himself up once he saw that Pikachu was on the branch with Starly.

“Pikachu, Wow I’m glad you’re ok!” said Matt “Starly, Thank you so much. How can I repay you?” Starly hopped towards Matt and pecked towards a Pokeball. “I figured that, and I’m glad to do it!” Matt pulled out one of his spare Pokeballs, clicked the button and there went that beam of red light. It didn’t even wiggle, Starly was instantly caught.

“Hey Pikachu, we just got a new friend!” said Matt as he released Starly from the Pokeball.

“Matt are you ok? I’m really sorry is everyone alright?” Asked Max who had moved down from a higher branch to where Matt was.

“Yes Max we’re fine, but you can’t just fire random attacks while were in a tree.” Said Matt
“Ya I guess you’re right, but it did payoff. Come on out Swablu!” The blue and white bird came out of its Pokeball.

“Wow nice catch! You’re not the only one who caught a Pokémon. Hey Starly come here!” Starly stopped playing with Pikachu and hopped over to where Matt was.

“Starly, nice”

“Hey got an idea, want to test out our new Pokémon?” Asked Matt

“If you mean a battle then you’re on! One on one just our birds,”

“Sounds good to me, ready Starly” Starly nodded in agreement.

“Swablu lets go, use Peck!” Commanded Max. Swablu flew straight at Starly with a glowing beak.

“Quick Starly use double team” Ordered Matt. Copies of Starly shot in every direction, Swablu halted and was instantly confused. “Starly follow up with wing attack!” All the copies charged at Swablu, Swablu was knocked directly back in Max’s direction. Swablu was hurt but it could still fight.

“Swablu fury attack!” Called Max. Swablu was extremely fast and shot straight at Starly with the series of attacks. Starly fell down onto the branch, Swablu was still going in with attacks.

“Starly! Try and use quick attack straight up in the air!” Starly heard what Matt had said and all of a sudden shot up straight in the air with Swablu on top of him. The two birds were high in the air. Neither Max nor Matt knew what was going on, the two birds were probably battling up in the air.

“Swablu use sing!” Called Max, he couldn’t see his bird but decided another attack couldn’t hurt.

“Starly quick get out of there!” yelled Matt. However it seemed to be too late. A loud squawk was heard and Starly was crashing down high from the sky. The birds must have moved their fighting from the middle of the tree to over on the side where no branches were. Now Starly was on a crash course for the ground!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 IS HERE! COME CHECK IT OUT AND COMMENT!

Hey, I asked to be a character BEFORE flygon and bellomence, why arent I a character? And I thought MY pokemon will be starly?
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 IS HERE! COME CHECK IT OUT AND COMMENT!

Yes i know you did but i had a good spot for those 2 so i took it. I have a spot for you in mind so dont freak out. And by the way getting angry at the auther doesnt help:p!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 IS HERE! COME CHECK IT OUT AND COMMENT!

Ok, Sorry. (Starly?)
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 IS HERE! COME CHECK IT OUT AND COMMENT!

Its ok and you'll see what pokemon you have when the next chapter comes, anyway what did you think of the chapter?
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 IS HERE! COME CHECK IT OUT AND COMMENT!

I was very good, but I was looking forward to see my character. :p Oh well, I have to wait another week for chapter 8.
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 IS HERE! COME CHECK IT OUT AND COMMENT!

It wont be a week! Chapters barely ever take a week, unless you have writers block like i did with this one:p Thanks for the comment though!
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 IS HERE! COME CHECK IT OUT AND COMMENT!

Wheee~ Bagonnnnn~
Great chapter!! :D
GJ
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 IS HERE! COME CHECK IT OUT AND COMMENT!

Now that's a cool chapter :p

I love the way how they got in Balsan Town and Mr. Bing is turning in to a mystery, I'm doubting if Mr. Bing is good guy.

Oh and Cynthia appeared. :p She's a playful nice little girl :p and it's great having addittional characters in the story and their signature Pokemon, Bagon is really very cute. :p

I also love the drama when Pichu evolced into Pikachu, oh and

“I’m sure your happy two aren’t you Piplup”

maybe you meant too ? Nice catch, additional Pokemons to our favorite heroes. I suggest that you must update the Trainer Cards in the first post.... :p
 
RE: Pokemon Journey Through Life, CHAPTER 7 IS HERE! COME CHECK IT OUT AND COMMENT!

Well i glad you liked it guys!

I'm not going to say anything about Mr. Bing you'll find out what you need to know ;)

Well Cynthia turned out well. I tried to incorporate as much of your bio as possible. You will probably see those two again. I also know you two aren't sisters in real life, but since you both really love Dragon types so I thought I would use that too my advantage.

Wow nice grammer catch. Sorry about that, I guess I need an editor:p. Still thanks for letting me know! Ya I really do need to update the trainer cards, and I'm working on Avatars for the fan fic too!

The next chapter should be up soon! Thanks for the support everyone!
 
Back
Top