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Pokemon talking:"Chimchar!"
Humans:Name:________

Chapter 10:Battle for the Badge

Josh:"Chimchar,Ember!
*Ember hits*
Starly:STARLY!
Josh: Pokeball,GO!
*Pokeball gets Starly*
Josh:I caught a Starly!
Chimchar:CHAR!
*else where*
Kadent:Treecko!Use slam!
*hits*
Snowrunt:*uses ice beam*
Kadent:Bullet Seed!
*throws Pokeball*
Kadent:I got Snowrunt!
*somewhere else*
*throws Pokeall*
Lewis:Taillow is ours!
*at the center*
Kadent:I caught a Snowrunt and a Spinirak.
Lewis:I got a Taillow and a Weedle!
Josh:I have a Starly and a Turtwig!
Kari:Well,Lauren and I both caught Eevees!
"Hey,are you all pokemon trainer"
Josh:Yea.
Andy:My name is Andy,I was wondering if one of you would want to battle.
Josh:Sure,but wht?
Andy:Well I'm training my Bulbasaur for a Gym Battle.
Josh:There's a Gy here?
Andy:Yes,so do you want to battle?
Josh:Sure!
*outside*
Lewis:This is a 1 on 1 battle!BEGIN!
Josh:GO! Starly!
Andy:Go,Bulbasar!
Josh:Starly,use Whrlwind!
Starly flapped it's wing creating a powerfull Whirwind!
Andy:Bulbasaur,use Vine Whip!
Bulbasaur sent out it's vines took hold of Starly.
Andy:Now slam Starly into the ground!
Josh:Starly!Whirlwind!
Starly used it''s whirlwind to keep Bublasaur from slaming it into the ground.
Josh:Wing Attack!
Starly dived down onto Bulbasaur,KOing it.
Lewis:Bulbasaur is unable to attle,Starly wins!
Josh:Allright Starly!
"Starly!"
Josh:Great Battle!
Andy:Yea,well I got to go!
Kadent:So do we.
Josh:What!
Lauren:Well,we need to go to the next town.
Josh:What about the gym!
Andy:Ther's lots of other Gyms,besides the Gym Leader won't be able to battle all of us!
Josh:What about you two!
Lewis:We took the Pokemon League Exams,we don't Badges!
Kari: Don't worry,we'll still be traveling with you.
Josh:Then let's go to the Gym!
*at the Gym*
Josh:Anyone here?
Mabel:What do you want?
Josh:A battle!
Mabel:Very well then.I accept you challenge!
Josh:Go!Starly!
Mabel:I choose you!Natu!
Josh:Starly!Quick attack!
Starly sped up,charging at Natu!
Mabel:Teleport!
Starly kept going,crahsing into the floor!
*Natu reappears*
Mabel:Use Peck!
Natu jabbed it's beak into Starly,KOing it!
Josh:Return!Go Turtwig!
Mabel:Night Shade!
Josh:Razor Leaf!
The attacks crashed into each other,causing a small explosion.
Mabel:Use Peck!
Josh:Tackle!
Natu was tackled by Turtwig,KOing it.
Mabel:Return!
Lewis:They're tied now.

Who will Mabel send out?Who is going to win?
Watch out for the next chapter:

Chapt.11,Battle for the Badge pt.II
 
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Updated trainer cards, will do josh's soon.
 
Thank You MOT6K.

Chapter 11:Battle for the Badge ptII

Mabel:Go!Ralts!
Josh:A Ralts.O.K then.Turtwig Razor Leaf!
Mabel:Magical Leaf!
"Turtwig!"
"Ralts"
*both hit*
Mabel:Confusion!
Turtwig was hit by the attck,becaming confused.
Josh:Turtwig snap out of it!
Mabel:Use Magical Leaf!
*hit*
Josh:Leach Seed!
"Turtwig!*snaps out of confusion*"
"Raaallllts!"
Josh:Finish it off with tackle!
Turtwig rams  into Ralts causing it to fly into the wall and faint.
Mabel and Josh:Return!
Mabel:So you made it to my last pokemon.I maust warn you this is the strongest one!
Josh:I think we're up for the challange,Chimchar!I choose you!
Mabel:Come on out!Go!Mr.Mime!
Josh:Flame wheel!
Mabel:Barrier!
*blocks attack*
Josh:Ember!
Mabel:Light Screen!
*blocks attack*
Josh:Keep attacking!
Ember!
*blocked*
Tackle!
*blocked*
Scratch!
*blocked*
"Chimchar!!!!!"
Chimchar's fist glows and moves at unbelivable speed,then slams it's fist in Mr.Mime.
Josh:That was Mach Punch!
Mabel:It destoyed the Light Screen!
Josh:EMBER!!!
A huge blast of Ember erupts from Chimchars mouth,KOing Mr.Mime.
Mabel:...*smiles*Here is your Badge.
Josh:Allright!We got a Badge!

Next:Chapt. 12,Team Galactic Strikes!
 
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Chapter 13:Team Galactic Strikes!

Cyrus:So every thing is ready.
Admin:Yes sir!
Cyrus:Good.I want you to go in as well.
Admin:Sure,but I'm using my own team.I haven't had fun since my last mission.I'm not using the pokemon we stole so far.
Cyrus:Very well.You and the others leave in half an hour.
*In the city*
Josh:It says here in this book that there's a tournament in the arena here for beginers,we should enter.
Kari:How about the double-battle division.
Lewis:*about to sing*
Josh:If you say someting about me and Kari again,I'll have my Chimchar burn you to a crisp!
Lewis:....
Kari:Beside,it's not with two people.
Josh:I'll just enter single battles.
Kari:Oh no!
Josh:What?
Kari:You need at least three pokemon.I only have two!
Lewis:That's too bad....Well see ya!*runs off*
Josh:Lewis get back here!
Kari:It's allright,I'll just wacth.
Josh:Are you sure?
Kari:It's fine.
*at the arena*
Announcer:It time for the tournament!
*crowd cheers*
Announcer:Here are the trainers!
*Trainers line up on the field*
Announcer:Let's get started!
Referee:First round is one on one.Begin!
Josh:Go Starly!
Mark:Zubat!
Josh:Starly!Wing Attack!
Zubat was slamed by the Wing Attack,causing it to fall to the ground.
Josh:Quick Attack!
Mark:Zubat!
"Zubaaat!"
Referee:Zubat is unable to battle,Josh is the winner!
*crowd cheering*
Lewis:Go Weedle!
Sammy:Go Krabby!
Lewis:Weedle,use String Shot!
Krabby was quikly bounded by the String Shot,being unable to move.
Lewis: Posion Sting!
Krabby was hit many times by the Posion Sting,causing much damage to it.
Ref:Krabby is unable to battle,Lewis wins!
Lewis:All right!
"Weedle!"
*starts to glow*
Lewis:It's evolving!
Weedle form changes shape as it continues glowing.
Lewis:It turned into Kakuna!
*few rounds later*
Ref:Three on tree battle,BEGIN!
Lewis:Go Beedrill!
Josh:*It evolved again*Go Starly!
Kari:This is going to be a tough battle
"Piplup!"
Kari:What is it?
Piplup heads over to a hallway,we're a couple of people were huddled together.
Grunt:O.K.Any pokemon on this round will be given to the boss.
Grunt 2:Right!
Grunt 3:Looks like we have company.
Kari:Uh oh!
*back at the field*
Ref:Beedrill iis unable to battle!
Lewis:Go!Taillow!
Josh:Starly!Quick attack!
Lewis: Peck!
"Starly!"
Lewis:Tackle!
Ref:Starly is unable to battle!
Josh:Go!Turtwig!
*hallway*
Grunt:You won't get away that easy!Stunky!Go!
Kari Piplup!Use Water Gun to push them all away!
Piplup let off a stong Water Gun to blow away all the Grunts ad Stunky.
Kari:We have to warn the others!
Ref:Both pokemon are unable to battle!
Josh:Chimchar!It's up to you!
Lewi:Come on Totodile!
Josh:Ember!
Lewis:Bubble!
Josh:Scratch!
Lewis:Bite!
Both trainers called attack afther attack.Using every move they could.
The pokemon were soon both tired,one hit away from fainting.
Josh:*I have to end this quick*Chimchar!Mach Punch!
Chimchar moved to fast for Lewis to react.Totodile didn't stand a chance.
Ref:Totodile is unable to battle,Chimchar and Josh win!
*Crowd goes wild*
Annoucer:Josh will now face the Trainer who has been one of best we have ever seen.
Kari:Sto-
A Galactic Grunt grabbed Kari before she could warn her friends.Kari was taken somewhere deep into the arena.
Ref:Give me your pokemon,we need to heal them before your next battle.
Josh:O.K.Here.
*few minutes later*
Ref:Here you go.
Josh:Thanks.
Annoucer:It time for the final battle!
*crowds going wild*
Annoucer:3,2-

Next:Chapt.14,Secrets
 
This is just a quick chapter to show what happens.

Chapter 14:Secrets

Announcer:3,2,1.GO!
Josh:Go!Starly!
Trainer:Go!Pidgeot!
Josh: (thhat Pidgeot......why do feel like I've seen it before....)
All of a suddden,a net grabs Starly and the Pidgeot went back to the trainer.Then two Grunts behind him hold him downand steal his Pokeball with Turtwing.Luckily,Chimchar was out of his pokeball.
Josh:Run away!
Chimchar dashed away before anyone could grab him.
Galactic Admin(the "Trainer"):This was a scam to steal pokemon!If this was a tournament,I would have crushed you!My Pokemon have been trained every since I caught them!
Josh:You're still the same Tyson!
Lewis:How do you know his name!
Josh:Beacause......he's my brother.

Next:Chapt.15,Plans
 
Chapter 15: Plans

Tyson:So you still remeber me little brother.
Josh:Why are you doing this!
Tyson:We are on the hunt for power!We're using theese pokemon to get what we want!We'll willing to start a war with all theese pokemon!
Josh:You want get away with this!
Tyson:Who's going to stop us?You?You can't,we stole you pokemon and one ran away!

*In the city*
Chimchar swings and runs through the city,looking for help.
"Chimchar!"
*keeps runnig*
*THUD!*
Kadent:OW!Watch were your-Chimchar?
"Chimchar!Chimchar!"
Kadent:You want me to follow you?
"*nods*Chimchar!"
Chimchar leads Kadent to the arena,where they see Gruntd=s loading the Pokemon onto trucks.
Kadent:So they have Lewis,Kari ,and Josh in there.
"Char."
Kadent:Go Snorunt!Ice Beam.
Snorunt unleased a powerful Ice Beam,freezing the Grunts solid.
Kadent:Let's go!

*In the arena*
Lewis:Go Totodile!Water Gun!
Totodiles water Gun allowed Lewis and Josh to start runnig.
Tyson: Don't let them get away!
Lewis:Water Gun again!
All the Grunts were blasted by the Water Gun,sent flying to the wall.
Josh:We need a plan!
Lewis:First we get your Starly and Turtwig!

*Outside*
Kadent:We'll sneak in and freeze anyone in our way.We can't get into battles!
"Chimchar!"
"Snorunt!"
Kadent:Chimchar,use Ember to break that grate!
Chimcah used a small Ember to get rid of the grate.Then they all went through it.
Kadent:Allright,we're in!

*Deep inside the arena*
Kari: Peck again!
"Piplup!"
Piplup kept jabbing it's beak into the bars,but it was no use.
Kari:How are we going to get out of this cage!Wait!That's it!*grabs Pokeball*Go!Eevee!
"Eevee!"
Kari:Use Water Gun Piplup!
Piplup let off one of it's stongest Water Guns,causing the bars to rust.
Kari:Eevee!Tackle!
Eevee tackled the bars,breaking off the rusted ones.
Kari:Let's go.

*In the arena's hallways*
Josh:Starly!
Lewis:You found it!
Josh:Yea!And Turtwig is there too.
Lewis:I'll have my Totodile take care of those Galactic creeps,and you get Starly and Turtwig.
Kadent:You guy's need help?
Josh and Lewis:KADENT!?
Kadent:Your Chimchar lead me here.
Josh:Good job Chimchar!
Kari:Hey!Forget about me?
All:Kari!
Josh:Where were you?
Kari:They had me trapped in a cage,but I managed to escape!
Josh:Great!Now,we need all to save the pokemon they stole.Here's the plan.....

Next:Chapt.16,Josh vs Tyson,Chimchar vs Infernape!
 
Hey. Love the story.
Here's an idea

Name:Danny
Pokemon: Chikorita, Starly, and what ever you want!!

He just started out and goes around with Josh.
Is that enough?
 
Her's some over-confident trainers for later in the story:
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and then here's one of the Commanders of Team Galaxy
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mottball:I'll put him in later afther the Team Galactic chapters.
Flygon Ruler:Thank you,you make one for yourself.
Also,if want to make a trainer,please have this:
Name:
Pokemon:
Badges(if any):*put a number*
Background/Personality:
Trainer Card if you can.
 
Just for later info in the Story, know your FanFics are become to choppy and very little diologue.

There for it's get's very boring as you read through the chapter. You have a great sotry line, and you can make it better, trust me.
 
Thanks MOT6K!
Andyman:Ya,I know.I'm not the best person to make stories.


Chapter 16:Josh vs Tyson,Chimchar vs Infernape

"Look out!"
Saturn:What's going on!
Grunt:Someone let the Pokemon loose!Now they're runing throughout the arena!
Satturn:I'll take care of this.Go Toxicroak!
As soon as the toxic mouth Pokemon came out of it's pokeball,a group of the Pokemon came charging through the hall.They ran right over Toxicroak and wreck the room.
Lewis:We're almost to the exit!
"Infernape,Fire Blast!"
The powerfull blast crashed into the group.
Tyson:You're not getting away that easy!
Josh:What do you want?
Tyson:You and me.One and one.My Infernape against any of your pokemon any of your pokemon.If you win,you can go away.
Josh:If I lose?
Tyson:We'll see.
Josh:Fine then.GO!Chimchar!
Tyson:A Chimchar!So you picked the same starter as me.Infernape!Go!
Josh:Ember!
Tyson:Fire Blast!
The Fire Blast made quick work of Chimchar's Ember.It was able to beat the Ember and still keep going.
Josh: Dodge Chimchar!
Tyson:Flamethrower!
"Chimchar!",it cried out in pain.
Tyson:It's no use.My Infernape has been wiith me for years!I have trained it for the entire time it's been with me!
Josh: (He's right.Even the last time saw his Infernape,it was powerfull.If he has trained it more,he must be holding back.)Chimchar!Mach Punch!
Chimchar ran at top speed,slaming it's fist ito the side of Infernape's haed.
Tyson:WHAT!It leans Mach Punch when it evolves into Monferno,not when it's still a Chimchar!
Josh:If you treat them right,Pokemon can do many great things.Mach Punch!
Tyson:Mega Punch!
Both attacks hit.They both slamed thier fist into each other.Infrenape and Chimchar were both up,barely.
Finaly Chimchar fell,and Infernape soon afther.
Josh:.....
Tyson:It's a tie.
Josh:But Chimcahr fell first.
Tyson:It's a tie.Go.
Josh:But you said-
Tyson:JUST GO!*walks away*
As Tyson walked away,somethig slipped out of his pocket.But he never noticed.
Josh went up ang grab it.
Josh:!!!This is his Trainer Card!*Gets something from bag*
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Josh:He gave me this old Trainer Card when he became the Champion.For good luck when I get a Pokemon he said.It was the last time I saw him.
Kari:...
Lewis:...
Kadent:...
Josh:Let's go.I need to take Chimchar to the Pokemon Center.
Lewis:Right.
 
Chapter 17:Crazy Aipom

Our heros walk down the road,heading to the next town.A short while away,they take a small break.

"Pip!"Piplup yelled as it happily played with the other Pokemon.
"Eevee!"it said with excitment while chasing a ball..
"Totodile!"it screamed while juping into the small pond.
Josh:We're almost there!
Kari:What should we do first.
Josh:I'm heading for the Gym!
Lewis:You should have the upper hand.
Josh:What do you mean?
Lewis:The Gym Leader here uses Ground Types,which Turtwig is strong against and Starly won't be effected by.Chimchar might have a little trouble.
Josh:How do you know the Gym Leader uses Ground Types?
Lewis:For one thing,I went to Pokemon School were we learn this stuff.Also,this guide book shows some  stuff about the Gyms.
Josh:In that case,Starly and Turtwig are going to win me a badge!
"Turtwig!Turtwig cried out!"
"Starly!"it said in agrement.
"Chim.....char"it said as it fell to the ground.
Josh:It still worn out from the battle with Infernape.
Lewis: Don't worry,there's a Pokemon Center in town.
Kari:Let's get going then!
Josh:Return!
As Josh called back his Pokemon,a wild  Pokemon was watching them.
"Aipom!"
While the gang was still calling back thier pokemon,Aipom went to thier bags in search of food.
"Aipom!" it shouted in joy.Aipom took food,sodas and something else.
Josh:Hey get away!
"Aipom!"it said as it ran away.
Lewis:It drank all my sodas!
Kari:It took away our food.
Josh:AAAAHHHH!
Lewis and Kari:What?!
Josh:My Pokedex and Pokeballs is missing!
The group turned aroud to see where Aipom was.It was up in a tree eating the food it stole.
Josh:Give me back my Pokedex and Pokeballs!
"Aipom!"it said laughing.
Aipom then stuck it's touge out at them and dashed away with the Pokedex in it's tail.
Josh:GET BACK HERE!
Kari:STOP!We can't go afther it yet!We need to take Chimchar to a Pokemon Center!
Josh:Your right.But right afther we're hunting down that Aipom.
Lewis:What about your Gym battle?
Josh:This is more important!

*At the center*
Nurse Joy:What happened to you Chimchar.How can you treat Pokemon this way!
Josh:We were forced to battle a high level Pokemon at the Arena in the other town.
Nurse Joy:You mean where Team Galactic stole Pokemon from the Trainers there!
Lewis:Yup!In fact,I was the one that saved the Poke-*BAM*
Lewis was smacked across the face by Kari.She raised her hand and smacked him again.
Kari:WHAT DO YOU MEAN "I"!
Lewis:O.K!O.K!You helped a little.
SMACK!Lewis was slapped again by Kari.
Kari:A LITTLE!
*Continue fighting*
Josh:So is my Chimchar going to be O.K?
Nurse Joy: Don't worry.He just needs a lot rest.You might end up being here a while,whould you like a room?
Lewis:Sorry!I didn't mean to insult your Boyfriend!
*Smacked again*
Lewis:AAAHH!Stop that!It's getting annoying!Plus my face is getting red.Why don't you ever hit Josh!
Kari:Because-
Lewis:You like him!
*kicked*
Lewis:I'll shut up now....
Josh:Thank you Nurse Joy!
Nurse Joy:No problem!
Josh:O.K,now that I-What happened to you?
Kari:He just got some sense knocked into him.
Lewis:I...Can't ...feel my face!
Josh:....Right.Anyways,let's go look for that Aipom!
"Did you just say Aipom!"
Danny:My name is Danny.You ee,this mornoing I was robbed by a Aipom.
Josh:Really!
Nurse Joy:Are you talking about the Aipom in town that goes around stealing  for food and other things.
Danny and Josh:Ya!
Nurse Joy:*sighs*Come and follow me.

*Outside*
The group goes out to the back of the Pokemon Center,to find Aipom in a tree.Under the tree was a pile of stuuf.
Josh:My Pokedex!My Pokeballs!
Danny:My maps!
Lewis:My sodas!
Kari:Is this your Aipom?
Nurse Joy:No.I helped it one day when it was hurt and it kept coming here afther that.I've been tring to get it to stop stealing,but it keeps doing it anway.
Josh:I'm just glad I got back my Pokedex and Pokeballs.WAIT!One of them is missing....AIPOM STOP BITTING THAT POKEBALL!
Aipom didn't listen.It kept bitting the Pokeball,thinking it was a berry.Suddenly,the Pokeball opened up and let off the red energy and caugt Aipom.Wiggle.
Wiggle.Poof.Aipom was caught.
Lewis:I don't belive it.....
Danny I know...
Kari:0_o
Josh:I caght a Aipom!
Nurse Joy:Well I guess traveling with you could help it's behavior.
Josh:Then I guess Aipom tagging along!

Next:Chapt.18,Double Trouble!
 
MOT6K:Cool ideas mine were almost the same thing. How did you get the pokemon 2 be different colors?
 
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