Pokemon:The Ventro Region!

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It has been very good. Keep going.

P.S:Have you read the 21st Chapter CA? Do you want to join my new Wi-Fi League?
 
Yes I hve read the chapter.
I also left a post in your League.

Chapter 21:Blast from the Past!Celebi appears!

Lewis:Come on!Hurry!
Josh:What's with the rushing!
Kari:There's lots of Pokemon in the forest!Don't you want to get one?
Josh:Of course I do!
Lewis:Well hurry up!

The gang were on the way to the next town.
They took the route that leads through a forest that is filled with Pokemon.
But what they don't know is that there is something else deep within the forest.

Lewis:Look at all those Pokemon!
Kari: Piplup!Get redy for some battles!
"Piplup!"
Josh:Starly!I need your help to catch some Pokemon!
"Starly!"
Lewis:Taillow!Let's go!
"Taillow!"
Danny:Go!Chikorita!
Kari:I'm going afther that Teddiursa!
Lewis:Cool!A Seedot!
Danny:I'm gettig that Burmy!
Josh:Let's see what we can find Starly!

The gang split up,each afther Pokemon they see.
Josh was the only one who coudn't catch one.

Kari:I got that Teddiursa and a Pichu!
Lewis:I got a Seedot!
Danny:I caught a Burmy!
Josh:I didn't cacth a thing.:(
Kari:We still have a time to get more Pokemon,cheer up!
"LARVITAR!"
Josh:What was that!
They all turned around to see a Larvitar and many other Pokemon running away.
A machine of some kind was crashing through the forest.A symbol was on it.
Josh:It's Team Galactic!
Grunt:That's right!We'll be taking your Pokemon now!
Josh:Not without a fight!
Lewis:Seedot!Totodile!
Kari:Go!Piplup!Teddiursa!
Danny:Starly!Chikorita!
Josh:Aipom!Turtwig!
Grunt:Looks like we're doing this the hard way.

Many other grunts appeared all sending out Pokemon.
Lewis:This isn't good.
Kari:We're out-numbered!
Danny:It's no use!
Josh:We need to stand and fight!
"Aipom!"it shouted in agreement.
"Turtwig!"it said,prepared for the battle.
Then,one of Josh's Pokeballs opened up.
Chimchar stood,with a firey look in it's eyes.
Josh:So you want to fight too.
"Chimchar."
Kari:Josh!But Chimchar-
Josh:Wants to fight.I'll let him.Get Ready Chimchar!
Chimchar let off a shout,wanting to battle for a long time.
It's energy has been storing up with all it's rest.
Kari:Bubble Beam!Furry Swipes!
Danny:Vine Whip!Wing Attack!
Lewis:Water Gun Totodile!Seedot,just wait!
Josh:Swift!Razor Leaf!Ember!
All attacks hit,sending many of the Grunts' Pokemon flying.
Grunt:All of you hit back!
Lewis:Seedot!Bide!
Seedot jumped into the attacks,and sent back it's own power.
More of the Galactic Pokemon were sent flying,and the machine was starting to fall apart.
The attack caused Seedot to faint.
Lewis:Seedot,return!Go!Taillow!

*In another part of the forrest*
Andy:Bulbasuar!Razor Leaf!

*Another part of the forrest*
Kadent:Ice Beam!Bullet Seed!String Shot!
Lauren:Mud Shot!Silver Wind!Quik Attack!
All over the forrest,Team Galactic was attacking Trainers and wild Pokemon.
Nearby towns were able to hear cries from Pokemon and explosions.
All wanted to join the fight,but Team Galactic Blocked any Entrance to the forrest.

*Somewhere in the forrest*
Tyson:How are things going.
Grunt:Many of the Trainers are fighting back sir!Are you sure it'll be soon?
Tyson:We just need to keep fighting,make it last long.If we were to win,it would be over quick.
Grunt:Very well sir.

Josh:Aipom!Take care of those Zubats with Tunder Punch!Turtwig!Use Razor Leaf on the Glameows!
Chimchar!Ember on all the Stunky!
The Pokemon countinued to fight,giving their all.But it seemed like a losing battle.
Lewis:There's too many!
Kari:It's useless.
Josh:We still need to fight!

Then,a giant vine sprung up through the machine.
More vines appeared,all fighting back Team Galactic's Pokemon.
The Pokemon were slamed by the vines and were knocked out.
A green light came all around them.
A Pokemon floated in the air,controling the vines..

Josh:No way....
Kari:It can't be...
Lewis:It's....
Tyson:Celebi!

Tyson stood,wih many Galactic members behind him.
They had seen the vines appear all over the forrest,and knew Celebi had appeared.

Tyson:We'll be taking that Celebi now.Infernape!Fire Blast!
 
WOW!! Been gone and just read Chapter 20 and 21. Nice thunderpunch with aipom. I hope Josh gets a new pokemon or chimchar evolves. Can't wait. Also, is Josh gonna get more than six pokemon and just switch out whenever he needs one, or is he just gonna have six? Do you need more cards?
 
Nice post I lvoe the story!!!
If you need more trainers than I'll out one.
Thanks for the comment also but yoru story is better!
 
Chapter22:Blast from the Past!Celebi appears!Part II

Tyson:Infernape!Fire Blast!

The attack raced torward Celebi at amazing speed.
Celebi barley managed to block the attack with the giant vines.

Lea:Nuzleaf!Extrasensory!
"Nuzleaf!"

The attack sent Infernape crashing into the trees.

Lewis:She's the Gym Leader!
Kari:Why are you here?
Lea:I come out ere to train or just take care of the
Pokemon.I heard all the noise from town and headed here.
Tyson:Haven't seen you for a long time.
Lea:Not long enough.Extrasensory!

Infernape was hit again and crashed into other Pokemon.

Tyson:I'll take care of her and Celebi.All of you focus on the Pokemon and my brother and his friends.
Grunt:Yes sir!
Josh:Starly!Wing Attack!
Kari: Piplup!Peck!
Grunt:Zubat!Bite!
Grunt:Glameow!Furry Swipes!

Tyson:GO!Metagross!Take care of Lea.Infernape!Get up and use Fire Spin on Celebi!
Metagross blocked Lea away from Tyson and Infernape fought Celebi.
"Celebi!"it cried out,lanching many attacks at Infernape.
Josh and the gang countinued to fight off Team Galactic,trying to get to Celebi and Lea.

Josh:Starly!Blow them away with a Whirlwind!
"Starly!"

The Whirlwind took down maost of the Pokemon.
Only a few were left.

Josh:Starly!Use another Whirlwind!

Lea:Nuzleaf!Razor Wind!
"Metagross!"it cried out in pain.
Lea: (I can't waste any more time)Nuzleaf!Extrasensory on Infernape!
Tyson:Meatagross!HyperBeam!nfernape!Get Celebi!

Nuzleaf focused on Infernape,aiming it's attack.
Then,the HyperBeam crashed onto Nuzleaf and KOed it before it locked-onto Infernape.

Afther the many attacks,it came down to Josh's Starly agaist 3 Murkrows.

Grunt:Take it down!All of you!Use Peck!
"Murkrow!"they all cried.
Josh:Starly!Use your strogest attack!
"Starly!"it said,flying at incredibe speed.
Lewis:Is that....

As Starly headed for the Murkrows,it stared to glow and flew faster.

Josh:Is Stary.....evolving!
 
Nice, sorry I haven't read it for a while but I like where its gone so far. Keep up the good work!

Edit: Oh yeah I redid the champ becasue she was kinda weak
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Can't wait for the next chapter.
 
She's still kinda weak. Most of those pokemon don't appear in the elite four. You should change it a little. (think cynthia and Steven and Gary and Lance:they don't have any of those fluffy cute pokemon ie Wigglytuff, Blissey...)
 
Sorry it took so long!

Chapter23:Blast from the Past!Celebi appears!Part III

Starly continued to glow and fly fast.
Then,Starly began to change shape grow bigger.
"Staravia!"
Staravia slashed through the Murkrows at great speed.
Josh:That was an Aerial Ace!
The Murkrows collapsed onto the ground,knocked-out.
Lewis:That's all of them!Let's go help Celebi!

The gang ran to the spot where Infernape was battling Celebi.
Tyson:Flamethower!
"Infernape!"
The flames shot out and hit Celebi right in it's face.
Celebi fell to the ground with a thud.
Tyson:Now to catch it!
Suddenly,Celebi started to glow.
The burn marks fanished and it got back up.
"CELEBI!"it shouted as Infernape was hit with Confusion.
"Infernape!"it cried in pain.
Tyson:Counter with a Fire Blast!
Celebi barley blocked the attack with the giant vines,but not without getting a little hurt.
Some of the fire got through the vines and hit Celebi.
Tyson:Feep using fire Blast.
With each attack,Celebi blocked slower and slower,causing more flames to get through.
Tyson:Keep it up!It's getting tierd!

Josh:We need to help Celebi!
Kari: Piplup can take care of Infernape!
Josh:Trust me,water won't be enough.His Infernape is way to powerfull!
Kari:But Chimchar-
Josh:Knocked it out.I know.But he wasn't able to battle and spent weeks in the Center.
Kari:....
Josh:I say we use all our Pokemon to attack!
Kari:Right!

Just as they were about attack,Metagross appeared and blocked their path.
"Meta!"it shouted,charging up it's Hyper Beam.
Lea:Vine Whip!
Ivysaur used it's vines and wrapped them around Metagross's leg,causing it to trip.
Metagross was still using Hyper Beam,and ended up hitting Infernape.
Tyson:Infenape!Get up and use Blast Burn!
Josh:WHAT!

Infernape focused all it's power and prepared for the attack.
It's flames grew hugre and wild.
Josh:Everyone!Get away!
Kari:What's happening!
Lewis: DID HE SAY BLAST BURN?!
The flames countinued to grow and grow.
Josh:Quick!Take cover!

The flames grew into giagantic size,burning anything to close to it.
The flames stop growing and finnaly....

In the city,people had herd that Celebi had been spoted,and that Team Galacctic was afther it.
People were still trying to get to the forest to help in any way,but Team Galacti still tried to block of the ways in and out of the forest.
Battles were going around every where in the Forest,in and out.
People were fighting their way in.
All the fighting stoped when flames coud be heard.
Far away they say a buring shape growing and growing.
Suddenly,ther was an explosion.
It shook the ground and started a wild fire.
Team Galactic members left the fight and fled at the sight of the explosion,knowing that the job had been done.



Or so they thought......
 
Nice story cant wait till the next chapter!Yep its me... and just to let you know i made a new champion island forum where im FINALLY gonna finish it off.
 
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