i can see no one has posted here in a while. keep up the great work CA
Pokemon:The Ventro Region!
- Thread starter CrazyAipom
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Is this fic dead (sorry for double posting)
No...I just haven't gotten a chance to put new chapter.
I should have one in a couple of days(since I'm going California!)
I should have one in a couple of days(since I'm going California!)
im already in CA
Chapter 24:Suspense!
Tyson stood as if nonthing had happened.
He looked around him to see if anyone was near.
He saw nothing and looked ahead.
A cloud of smoke surround the area the others were(well most of them
).
Tyson then healed Infernpe with a Full Restore.
Tyson:Metagross!Return!Go!Garchomp!
The pokemon erupted out of the Pokeball with a loud roar.
"GARRRRRRCHOOOOOOMP!!!"
Tyson:Go grab Celebi.
The Pokemon obeyed and headed into the smoke.
Not too far from Tyson,Josh was waking up from the explosion.
Josh:....what...happened...Hey Kari!Kari?Lewis!?Lea?ANYONE!
*buzzing*
Josh:What's that?
*more buzzing*
Josh:Hello?Who's there?
*loud noise*
Josh:*turns around*Wha-....
"Ninjask!"
Josh:OH MOTHER F-
"GARCHOMP!"
The pokemon fell back afther hit by some blue beam.
Tyson:What the-
The smoke cleared up.
Tyson stood,frozen by shock.
"I haven't seen you for a long time Tyson."
Tyson stood as if nonthing had happened.
He looked around him to see if anyone was near.
He saw nothing and looked ahead.
A cloud of smoke surround the area the others were(well most of them
).Tyson then healed Infernpe with a Full Restore.
Tyson:Metagross!Return!Go!Garchomp!
The pokemon erupted out of the Pokeball with a loud roar.
"GARRRRRRCHOOOOOOMP!!!"
Tyson:Go grab Celebi.
The Pokemon obeyed and headed into the smoke.
Not too far from Tyson,Josh was waking up from the explosion.
Josh:....what...happened...Hey Kari!Kari?Lewis!?Lea?ANYONE!
*buzzing*
Josh:What's that?
*more buzzing*
Josh:Hello?Who's there?
*loud noise*
Josh:*turns around*Wha-....
"Ninjask!"
Josh:OH MOTHER F-
"GARCHOMP!"
The pokemon fell back afther hit by some blue beam.
Tyson:What the-
The smoke cleared up.
Tyson stood,frozen by shock.
"I haven't seen you for a long time Tyson."
i like the chapter keep up the great work
i thought it was good. you should finish it.
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