Pokemon:The Ventro Region!
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Those next few Chapters were great... but seriously MOT6K and Flygon Rule you guys have got to stop the TC making. It makes no sense, it's just a way for you guys to get more post, and you guys probably don't even read the FanFic.
In fact you guys made so many probably half of these aren't going to make it into the story.
Have a nice day.
Your guys last two post had nothing to do with the topic and should have been discussed via PM.
In fact you guys made so many probably half of these aren't going to make it into the story.
Have a nice day.
Actually I do read the fan fic (Which is really good by the way!
) I only made the ones he has to fight so they will need to be in the story. But overall your right. Anyway FR, you and me gotta start PM for comments like "how did you get different colors.
Andy: Thanks for your concern
Aipom: Nice fan fic, but you might want to speed it up a little. Your on chapter 17 with only 1 badge!
) I only made the ones he has to fight so they will need to be in the story. But overall your right. Anyway FR, you and me gotta start PM for comments like "how did you get different colors.Andy: Thanks for your concern
Aipom: Nice fan fic, but you might want to speed it up a little. Your on chapter 17 with only 1 badge!
Yeah, I do come on a little harsh, I try and make it as nice as possible, but it still comes out evil.
FR: It just seems like most of the Thread is TC's, thats way.
MOT6K: Thanks for understanding.
Now since Aipom is online now I'm excepting another chapter soon, w00t!
FR: It just seems like most of the Thread is TC's, thats way.
MOT6K: Thanks for understanding.
Now since Aipom is online now I'm excepting another chapter soon, w00t!
MOTSK:I know!Right now the Chapters I'm working ethier have a Gym Battle or a new Pokemon or Evoving.
Flygon Ruler PM me if you realy want to make more cards!I have enough right now,but might need some later!
And your right AndyMan,I'm working on it as I type!
Flygon Ruler PM me if you realy want to make more cards!I have enough right now,but might need some later!
And your right AndyMan,I'm working on it as I type!
Chapter 18: Double Trouble!
The gang is hanging out in the Pokemon Center...well most of them.
Josh:Starly use Wing Attack!Turtwig Tackle!
Josh is trainig for his second Gym battle.Afther leaning more abou the Gym Leader,He began trying right away.
Josh:Staty! hit that target!Turtwig speed up!
Learnig that the Gym has double battles,he got work right away.
Josh:Combine Whirlwind with Razor Leaf!
The Whirlwind caused the Razor Leaf to speed up become more powerfull.
I made quick work of the targets Josh made.
Josh:Allright!Starly.Turtwig.Take a break.
They didn't need to be told.
As soon asstoped,Starly went to get it's food while Turtwig fell asleep.
Josh:0_o
Kari:Well you have had them train for a long time.
Josh:Ya.I'll let them rest for a while.Then where're off to the Gym!
Kari:Well,what about Chimchar?
Josh:He needs rest,and Aipom has been spending a lot of time with him.
Kari:She sure has.
Lewis:-
Josh:If you say anything-
Lewis:Shutting up now!
Josh:Anyways,Aipom will keep Chimchar company here while we're at the Gym.
"Aipom!"it said in agrement.
"Turtwig"it said while yawnig.
Danny:The Gym sould be around here.
Josh:Over there!
Josh runs to the Gym,with the group far behind him.
*opens doors*
Josh:I have come for a Gym battle!
Ruben:As a Gym Leader I acept your challange!But I warn you!You won't win easily!Go!Cubone!Marowak!
Josh:Starly!Turtwig!
All the Pokemon came out of the Pokeball,prepared for battle!
Ruben:Bone Club!Now!
Both Pokemon listened and slamed thier bones onto Turtwig.
"Turtwig!!!"it cried out in pain.
Josh:Starly!Use Wing Attack!
Ruben:Wait for it.
Starly dived down at top speed.Spreading it's Wings to get ready for the impact.
Ruben:Headbutt!
BAM!Both Pokemon nailed a strong Headbutt on Starly.
"Starly!Starly!"it cried out in anger!
Ruben:Hit them with a Tackle!
Turtwig and Strly were both hit by the powerfull Tackle.
Josh: (He's able to call attacks more quick since they have the same moves.Maybe I turn that around.)Starly!Use Wing Attack!
Ruben:Again?You two know what to do.
Starly flew down,spreading it's wings once again.
Josh:Whirlwind!
As Marowak and Cubone jumped,about to use Headbutt,Starly let off a Whirwind to send them crashing to the ground.
Josh:Turtwig!Tackle!
Ruben:Bone Club!
The Pokemon ran to each other,all ready to attack.
Josh: Dodge Turtwig.
Turtwig jumped out of the way at the last second.Marowak and Cubone ended up hiting each other on the head.
Josh:Now!Starly!Turtwig!Whirleaf!
Ruben:Whirleaf?
Turtwing used Razor Leaf while Starly used Whirwind.The two attacks combined to make powerfull attack.Both Cubone and Marowak were hit and KOed.
RubenGreat Battle.Here is your badge.
Josh:We got a Badge!
"Staryl!""Turtwig!"they shouted with pride.
Josh:Let's go get Aipom and Chimchar and we'll go to the next town!
Next:Chapt.19:Water Showdown!
The gang is hanging out in the Pokemon Center...well most of them.
Josh:Starly use Wing Attack!Turtwig Tackle!
Josh is trainig for his second Gym battle.Afther leaning more abou the Gym Leader,He began trying right away.
Josh:Staty! hit that target!Turtwig speed up!
Learnig that the Gym has double battles,he got work right away.
Josh:Combine Whirlwind with Razor Leaf!
The Whirlwind caused the Razor Leaf to speed up become more powerfull.
I made quick work of the targets Josh made.
Josh:Allright!Starly.Turtwig.Take a break.
They didn't need to be told.
As soon asstoped,Starly went to get it's food while Turtwig fell asleep.
Josh:0_o
Kari:Well you have had them train for a long time.
Josh:Ya.I'll let them rest for a while.Then where're off to the Gym!
Kari:Well,what about Chimchar?
Josh:He needs rest,and Aipom has been spending a lot of time with him.
Kari:She sure has.
Lewis:-
Josh:If you say anything-
Lewis:Shutting up now!
Josh:Anyways,Aipom will keep Chimchar company here while we're at the Gym.
"Aipom!"it said in agrement.
"Turtwig"it said while yawnig.
Danny:The Gym sould be around here.
Josh:Over there!
Josh runs to the Gym,with the group far behind him.
*opens doors*
Josh:I have come for a Gym battle!
Ruben:As a Gym Leader I acept your challange!But I warn you!You won't win easily!Go!Cubone!Marowak!
Josh:Starly!Turtwig!
All the Pokemon came out of the Pokeball,prepared for battle!
Ruben:Bone Club!Now!
Both Pokemon listened and slamed thier bones onto Turtwig.
"Turtwig!!!"it cried out in pain.
Josh:Starly!Use Wing Attack!
Ruben:Wait for it.
Starly dived down at top speed.Spreading it's Wings to get ready for the impact.
Ruben:Headbutt!
BAM!Both Pokemon nailed a strong Headbutt on Starly.
"Starly!Starly!"it cried out in anger!
Ruben:Hit them with a Tackle!
Turtwig and Strly were both hit by the powerfull Tackle.
Josh: (He's able to call attacks more quick since they have the same moves.Maybe I turn that around.)Starly!Use Wing Attack!
Ruben:Again?You two know what to do.
Starly flew down,spreading it's wings once again.
Josh:Whirlwind!
As Marowak and Cubone jumped,about to use Headbutt,Starly let off a Whirwind to send them crashing to the ground.
Josh:Turtwig!Tackle!
Ruben:Bone Club!
The Pokemon ran to each other,all ready to attack.
Josh: Dodge Turtwig.
Turtwig jumped out of the way at the last second.Marowak and Cubone ended up hiting each other on the head.
Josh:Now!Starly!Turtwig!Whirleaf!
Ruben:Whirleaf?
Turtwing used Razor Leaf while Starly used Whirwind.The two attacks combined to make powerfull attack.Both Cubone and Marowak were hit and KOed.
RubenGreat Battle.Here is your badge.
Josh:We got a Badge!
"Staryl!""Turtwig!"they shouted with pride.
Josh:Let's go get Aipom and Chimchar and we'll go to the next town!
Next:Chapt.19:Water Showdown!
Nice fic. I see that its a popular fic. Chapters are short but who needs them big when they are good like this one eh?
Ya.
I'm the kind of person that wants to tell a quick story,which is why I barley passed Writting this year...0_o
I'm the kind of person that wants to tell a quick story,which is why I barley passed Writting this year...0_o
It doesnt really matter, as long as it brings interest to people like me and a few others.
CA, have you read those Darkrisis chapters on my FF?
CA, have you read those Darkrisis chapters on my FF?
Ya.It was awsome!
Thanks. Im sorry Chapters 18 and 19 are short, the action is in the next 3 Chapters; Chapters 20, 21 and 22.
Good luck on the rest of your fic CA.
Im getting test results tomorrow. They are crucial as its for an electrical scooter.
Well, if I pass, then I can go to this place to do the actual scooter test and if I pass, Ill get a license. Luckily in France, yhou can get scooters when youre 14 and my 14th is in 7 months! too long but yay!
Good luck on the rest of your fic CA.
Im getting test results tomorrow. They are crucial as its for an electrical scooter.
Well, if I pass, then I can go to this place to do the actual scooter test and if I pass, Ill get a license. Luckily in France, yhou can get scooters when youre 14 and my 14th is in 7 months! too long but yay!
Lucky!
Well I didn't anything for my grades!(but my did parents buy a Ds Lite and Pokemon Diamond for me,but because it was also for a late birthday present.)
Well I didn't anything for my grades!(but my did parents buy a Ds Lite and Pokemon Diamond for me,but because it was also for a late birthday present.)
Im getting Diamond in early July. Ill battle you sometime. I look forward.
Sweet!
If you want, we can discuss this by PM. Does anyone want to comment on my fic? Post in my thread if you do.
Chapter 19:Water Showdown!
Josh:So the Gym here uses water types?
Lewis:That's what it says here.
Kari:So what Pokemon are you planing to use.
Josh:Well I don' have much of a choice.Chimchar isn' ready to start battling.So Starly,Turtwig,and Aipom are going in.
Lewis:AIPOM!But you just caught it!
Josh:I can't risk it with Chimchar!
Lewis:Guess that's true.
Kari:Well you can train Aipom before you go to the Gym.
*Pokemon Center*
Nurse Joy:Ah yes.My sister called about the injured Chimchar.
Josh:Here you go.*gives Chimchar*
Kari:Allright,let's get outside to start training.
*outside*
Josh:Come on out Aipom!
As soon as Aipom got out of it's Pokeball,it ran off.
Josh:Hey!Get back here.Turtwig!Starly!Get Aipom!
"Starly!!!"
"Turtwig!!!"
Kari:Eevee!Piplup!Help out!
Lewis:Follow that Aipom!Totodile!Tailow!Beedrill!
All the Pokemon ran afther Aipom!Aipom just kept speeding up and tauting them.This made the Pokemon
very angry.But no mater what,they could cacth up.
Danny:Chikorita!Use Vine Whip to grab Aipom!
Afther a long chase,Aipom was caught.
Josh:O.K.Let's start training.
Lewis:Scan Aipom with your PokeDex to see what attacks it knows.
*Scans*
Lewis:No way!
Kari:At that level!
Josh:This makes thins more interesting....
*At the Gym*
Josh:I challange you.....to..a..battle.
Josh was surprised to find that the field was a pool with few platfoms scattered across the water.
Liquis:I see you wonderig about the pool.Well,you see,I'm a water trainer.This pool gives me the upper hand.
Josh:I still challange you!
Liquis:Fine.Go!Horsea!
Josh:Go!Turtwig!
Turtwig stood still on the platform,while Horsea swam around.
Josh:Use Razor Leaf!
The leafs flew off of Turtwig head,heading torwards Horsea
The leafs pushed Horsea up to the into the air.
Josh:Tackle!
Turtwig tackled Horsea,sending it crashing to the ground.
Liquis:Horsea!Return.Go!Omanyte.
Josh:Turtwig return,Go!Starly!
Liquis:You may have defeted Horsea quikly,but don't think you can beat me again!Water Gun!
STary was blasted by a spray of water,and was sent spiraling down.
Josh:Starly Wing,Attack!
Starly veered up and charged at Omanyte.
POW!Starly' wings struck Omanyte at sent flying into the water.
Liquis:Hit it with another Water Gun!
Josh: Dodge!Now use Whirlwind!
Starly whipped up a strong Whirlwind to send Omanyte flying.Omanyte fell to the ground with a thud.
Liquis:Omanyte!Return!
Starly flew up adn the Water Gun missed.
Josh:Finish it off with Whirlwind!
Omanyte was hit by the Whirlwind,and was knocked out.
Liquis:Omanyte,Return!Go!Floatzel!
Josh:Starly,return!Go!Turtwig.
Liquis:You can have the first move.
Josh:Turtwig!Use Razor Leaf!
Liquis: Dive under water.
Floatzel dived into the water,dodging the attack.Turtwig was now a sitting duck.
Liquis:Aqua Jet!
Floatzel jumped out of the water used Aqua Jet.Floatzel crashed onto Turtwig.
Liquis:Ice Beam!
Turtwig was hit by the powerfull beam,becoming frozen solid.
Josh:TURTWIG!!!
Liquis:Choose another Pokemon!
Josh:Turtwg,return.Go!Starly!
Liquis:Water Gun!
Josh: Dodge and then use Wing Attack!
Stary flew up on the suface of the water,ready to stike at Foatzel.
Liquis:Use Ice Beam to freeze the Water under Starly!
Starly stoped.The Ice Beam froze most of Starly's body to the Water.
Liquis:Use a Water Gun followed by a Aqua Jet!
The Water Gun puhed Starly of the frozen water,but Starly's wings were still frozen.
Floatzel dived under the water,only to resrface a few seconds later a use Aqua Jet.
Liquis:Your Starly is unable to battle,use you last pokemon.
Lewis:It's too risky!
Kari:You haven't trained it!
Danny:It barley listens to you!
Josh:I have no choice.Aipom!I choose you!
Josh:So the Gym here uses water types?
Lewis:That's what it says here.
Kari:So what Pokemon are you planing to use.
Josh:Well I don' have much of a choice.Chimchar isn' ready to start battling.So Starly,Turtwig,and Aipom are going in.
Lewis:AIPOM!But you just caught it!
Josh:I can't risk it with Chimchar!
Lewis:Guess that's true.
Kari:Well you can train Aipom before you go to the Gym.
*Pokemon Center*
Nurse Joy:Ah yes.My sister called about the injured Chimchar.
Josh:Here you go.*gives Chimchar*
Kari:Allright,let's get outside to start training.
*outside*
Josh:Come on out Aipom!
As soon as Aipom got out of it's Pokeball,it ran off.
Josh:Hey!Get back here.Turtwig!Starly!Get Aipom!
"Starly!!!"
"Turtwig!!!"
Kari:Eevee!Piplup!Help out!
Lewis:Follow that Aipom!Totodile!Tailow!Beedrill!
All the Pokemon ran afther Aipom!Aipom just kept speeding up and tauting them.This made the Pokemon
very angry.But no mater what,they could cacth up.
Danny:Chikorita!Use Vine Whip to grab Aipom!
Afther a long chase,Aipom was caught.
Josh:O.K.Let's start training.
Lewis:Scan Aipom with your PokeDex to see what attacks it knows.
*Scans*
Lewis:No way!
Kari:At that level!
Josh:This makes thins more interesting....
*At the Gym*
Josh:I challange you.....to..a..battle.
Josh was surprised to find that the field was a pool with few platfoms scattered across the water.
Liquis:I see you wonderig about the pool.Well,you see,I'm a water trainer.This pool gives me the upper hand.
Josh:I still challange you!
Liquis:Fine.Go!Horsea!
Josh:Go!Turtwig!
Turtwig stood still on the platform,while Horsea swam around.
Josh:Use Razor Leaf!
The leafs flew off of Turtwig head,heading torwards Horsea
The leafs pushed Horsea up to the into the air.
Josh:Tackle!
Turtwig tackled Horsea,sending it crashing to the ground.
Liquis:Horsea!Return.Go!Omanyte.
Josh:Turtwig return,Go!Starly!
Liquis:You may have defeted Horsea quikly,but don't think you can beat me again!Water Gun!
STary was blasted by a spray of water,and was sent spiraling down.
Josh:Starly Wing,Attack!
Starly veered up and charged at Omanyte.
POW!Starly' wings struck Omanyte at sent flying into the water.
Liquis:Hit it with another Water Gun!
Josh: Dodge!Now use Whirlwind!
Starly whipped up a strong Whirlwind to send Omanyte flying.Omanyte fell to the ground with a thud.
Liquis:Omanyte!Return!
Starly flew up adn the Water Gun missed.
Josh:Finish it off with Whirlwind!
Omanyte was hit by the Whirlwind,and was knocked out.
Liquis:Omanyte,Return!Go!Floatzel!
Josh:Starly,return!Go!Turtwig.
Liquis:You can have the first move.
Josh:Turtwig!Use Razor Leaf!
Liquis: Dive under water.
Floatzel dived into the water,dodging the attack.Turtwig was now a sitting duck.
Liquis:Aqua Jet!
Floatzel jumped out of the water used Aqua Jet.Floatzel crashed onto Turtwig.
Liquis:Ice Beam!
Turtwig was hit by the powerfull beam,becoming frozen solid.
Josh:TURTWIG!!!
Liquis:Choose another Pokemon!
Josh:Turtwg,return.Go!Starly!
Liquis:Water Gun!
Josh: Dodge and then use Wing Attack!
Stary flew up on the suface of the water,ready to stike at Foatzel.
Liquis:Use Ice Beam to freeze the Water under Starly!
Starly stoped.The Ice Beam froze most of Starly's body to the Water.
Liquis:Use a Water Gun followed by a Aqua Jet!
The Water Gun puhed Starly of the frozen water,but Starly's wings were still frozen.
Floatzel dived under the water,only to resrface a few seconds later a use Aqua Jet.
Liquis:Your Starly is unable to battle,use you last pokemon.
Lewis:It's too risky!
Kari:You haven't trained it!
Danny:It barley listens to you!
Josh:I have no choice.Aipom!I choose you!
We'll see Flygon Ruler...
Josh:Aipom!Roar of Time!
Flygon Ruler:!!!!!!0_o
lol!
No but seriously,you'll see next chapter....
Josh:Aipom!Roar of Time!
Flygon Ruler:!!!!!!0_o
lol!
No but seriously,you'll see next chapter....
Last chapter,Josh was battle for his next badge,At firs,it seemed the battle was in the bag,but Liquis'
Floatzel tied things up.Now Josh's final Pokemon,Aipom,is his only chance of winning......
Chapter 20:Water Showdown II
Josh:Aipom,I choose you!
Lewis:I can't help but think this will end badly.
Aipom came out of it's Pokeball,sleeping.
Liquis:Floatzel,finish it quick.Aqua Jet!
"Floatzel!"it yelled as it dived into the water and swam at full speed.
Josh:Wake up Aipom!Dodge!
Aipom opened it's eyes and got up,surprised to be a pool.Then,it saw Floatzel.
Floatzel just kept going.It jumped out of the water,headed for the platform,and.....CRASH!
Aipom hopped onto the next platform,causing Floatzel to crash into the platform.
"Foatzel!"it creid in anger.It then used a Water Gun.
Aipom jumped into the next platform,and the next,and the next,and the next....
Aipom kept jumping around,dodging every attack.
Liquis:Floatzel!Stop!
But Floatzel didn't listen.It countinued using Water Gun.
Josh:Aipom!Swift!
Liquis:You use Swift too!
The stars hit each other,causing a small explosion.
Liquis:Foatzel!Use Aqua Jet!
Josh:Aipom!Sring off with your tail!
Foatzel used Aqua Jet,wile Aipom sprang off it's tail.
Josh:Aipom!Use Thunder Punch!
Aipom's tail started to give off sparks.When Floatzel was under Aipom,it slamed it's tail right into Floatzel's face.Aipom's tail
gave off a powerfull shock onto Floatzel and it gave one torng slam.
The attack sent Floatzel straight to the bottom of the pool with giant splash.
When Floatzel resurfaced,it was barley moving.Aipom on the other hand,was cheerfully jumping for it's victory.
Liquis:....Floatzel....return.I lost.
Josh:Allright!
"Aipom!"
Josh:Return!
Kari:We have to go get Chimchar now.
Josh:Then we'll go to the next town!
*At the Center*
Nurse Joy:O.K.Yor Chimchar is starting to get better.A little rest and it can battle again.
Josh:Thank you!
Kari:Well the quikest way to get to the next town is through this forest.
Lewis:Allright then,let's go!
*Deep in the forest*
???:Allright,I'll do what I can.
Phone:Just don't mess it up like last time!
???:So I let him leave when we battled,he did knock out Infernape.
Phone:I think you just wanted to protect your brother.
???:You just see,I won't let him get away easily.
Phone:If anything goes wrong,it's on your head Tyson.
Tyson:We'll see how the plan will go.
Next:Chpt.21,Blast from the Past!Celebi appears!
Floatzel tied things up.Now Josh's final Pokemon,Aipom,is his only chance of winning......
Chapter 20:Water Showdown II
Josh:Aipom,I choose you!
Lewis:I can't help but think this will end badly.
Aipom came out of it's Pokeball,sleeping.
Liquis:Floatzel,finish it quick.Aqua Jet!
"Floatzel!"it yelled as it dived into the water and swam at full speed.
Josh:Wake up Aipom!Dodge!
Aipom opened it's eyes and got up,surprised to be a pool.Then,it saw Floatzel.
Floatzel just kept going.It jumped out of the water,headed for the platform,and.....CRASH!
Aipom hopped onto the next platform,causing Floatzel to crash into the platform.
"Foatzel!"it creid in anger.It then used a Water Gun.
Aipom jumped into the next platform,and the next,and the next,and the next....
Aipom kept jumping around,dodging every attack.
Liquis:Floatzel!Stop!
But Floatzel didn't listen.It countinued using Water Gun.
Josh:Aipom!Swift!
Liquis:You use Swift too!
The stars hit each other,causing a small explosion.
Liquis:Foatzel!Use Aqua Jet!
Josh:Aipom!Sring off with your tail!
Foatzel used Aqua Jet,wile Aipom sprang off it's tail.
Josh:Aipom!Use Thunder Punch!
Aipom's tail started to give off sparks.When Floatzel was under Aipom,it slamed it's tail right into Floatzel's face.Aipom's tail
gave off a powerfull shock onto Floatzel and it gave one torng slam.
The attack sent Floatzel straight to the bottom of the pool with giant splash.
When Floatzel resurfaced,it was barley moving.Aipom on the other hand,was cheerfully jumping for it's victory.
Liquis:....Floatzel....return.I lost.
Josh:Allright!
"Aipom!"
Josh:Return!
Kari:We have to go get Chimchar now.
Josh:Then we'll go to the next town!
*At the Center*
Nurse Joy:O.K.Yor Chimchar is starting to get better.A little rest and it can battle again.
Josh:Thank you!
Kari:Well the quikest way to get to the next town is through this forest.
Lewis:Allright then,let's go!
*Deep in the forest*
???:Allright,I'll do what I can.
Phone:Just don't mess it up like last time!
???:So I let him leave when we battled,he did knock out Infernape.
Phone:I think you just wanted to protect your brother.
???:You just see,I won't let him get away easily.
Phone:If anything goes wrong,it's on your head Tyson.
Tyson:We'll see how the plan will go.
Next:Chpt.21,Blast from the Past!Celebi appears!
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