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That's great Cal! Anyways I like watching anniecarrot's LPS because of her comedy. ~NZ

RE: Rose Quartz And Onyx- The Revival 120 chapters from the most epic writer on Poke'beach? Oh you have so gained my undying support. I really want to read 120 chapters of this! =) Anyways for the recent chapter, I laughed at the gym leader so much that my friends looked at me strangely. (I...

Skymin: You can't expect everyone to be super nice and say your story is the best thing in the world since chocolate because there are people out there know that something in it is weak. Writers in the writing corner can help you make it better. We are not mean, we are straight forward and to...

RE: Rose Quartz And Onyx- The Revival =) I really liked the chapter, I hope you update soon. (For some reason I am getting a little soft spot for Eru. I am so weird.) ~NZ

RE: Destiny Yes, show us how he caught it, the battle that took to capture it. The first sentence of the chapter bothered me a bit because that type of sentence is used for first person, which doesn't fit with the rest of the chapter that third person. If you are aiming for third person I...

The FMA signature is the best out of all of them. I really did not hang around the art place in Pokestation. I winced when I saw most of the tags. There were only a handful of people whose tags were really good. ~NZ

^ Crystal meant that she would read and critique the plot once this story gets "going" ~NZ

I saw this on Pokestation too. I think ZeroHero and CH pretty much covered what I was going to say, so I won't give any advice. ~NZ

RE: Rose Quartz And Onyx- The Revival =) I really liked how the Skarmory acted to Crystal, I thought it was a funny reaction.I still hate the gym leader person, and I thought Crystal was crying a bit too much, but it's OK. I can't wait until the next chapter! ~NZ

RE: Rose Quartz And Onyx- The Revival Chapter three is great! Really I suck at finding errors because I am biased. I find the gym leader really cocky and annoying though. ~NZ

RE: Rose Quartz And Onyx- The Revival I like the chapter, yes she finally escapes! It seems you have been working in overdrive just by reading your AN. ~NZ

RE: Enigmatic Star I like it, but there was a really odd sentence in the chapter that I couldn't help, but be a bit annoyed with. Personally I would change, "you can think that up" to "you can make that up". ~NZ

I have to say Digimon is better in terms of anime. Every season just got better (Except for the fifth one, the blond hair dude just ruined it for me), most of the episodes actually mattered to the plot, it didn't frequently point out the obvious, and it wasn't as child friendly as the Pokemon...

I have always had a liking for the Dynasty Warriors series. (A secret pleasure of mine) I haven't been able to play the new stuff because I don't have the systems for it, but I still play it when I am at a friend's house. I thought the Strike Force applied an interesting concept, but I feel as...

Chapter three was was pretty good, I hope you update soon! =) ~NZ

I find this very bland and not really eye catching. I pretty much zoned out on the second chapter.I have to agree with Zyflair and Pokechamp on this one, not enough content and you just seem to be posing the bare necessities. Pokechamp is right on Domino, she seems too powerful and unbelievable...

RE: Rose Quartz And Onyx- The Revival Its a great start CH! I hope your other chapters are this good or even better! =) ~NZ

Well played CH, you made it so believable! =) Now I have reason to laugh at myself! (Don't worry its a good thing) ~NZ

RE: GETTING PUBLISHED! Congrats Crystal, you deserve it for all you hard work. =) ~NZ

Chapter 2 was really good, I hope you update soon! =) ~NZ